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Invasion (Russia/America) 24/?? (Part 5) anonymous July 6 2010, 07:57:21 UTC
After glancing about, America found that he and the dead, hijacked human had slid onto a frozen, unstable river.

“Fuck.”

A grunt came from nearby, and the sharp, metallic sounds of ice cracking and crunching together exploded in the still forest air.

“What the- stop moving!” America jerked his head around and found the man struggling to his feet. “Hey! Hey-!”

“Alfred!”

Canada’s voice ran clear in the frigid air.

“I’m down here!” America yelled back. “On the frozen river!”

The man growled at America, the Russian phrases garbled beyond America’s comprehension.

“Stop-!”

The ice split apart with a deafening shatter.

Next Chapter: Alfred is rescued from the frozen river, has a hard time dealing with the raging wildfires back home, (there's a possible time skip), and the group reunites with Ukraine, Belarus & Lithuania

Notes:

TT-30 handgun - [From Wiki] “The TT-30 (Russian: 7,62-мм самозарядный пистолет Токарева образца 1930 года, 7,62 mm Samozarjadnyj Pistolet Tokareva obrazca 1930 goda) is a Russian semi-automatic pistol. It was developed in the early 1930s by Fedor Tokarev as a service pistol for the Soviet military, in order to replace the Nagant M1895 revolvers that had been in use since tsarist times.”

[Special Thanks to silvensorrow for the translations]

“Ты что-нибудь видел??” - (Ti chto-nibud' videl?) Did you see anything?

“Что ты видел?” - (Chto ti videl?) What did you see?

“да…” - (Da) Yes

“Ты тот, о ком меня предупреждали...” - (Ti tot, o kom menya preduprezhdali) Your that man they warned me about...

“…Нет.” - (Nyet) No

”… reached up for the emergency brake release cable, curling his fingers around it and yanking it downward.” - As I’ve mentioned before, the only railcar I’ve been in is about 100 years old. This railcar had this cable that acted as an emergency break that stopped the entire train. Now I’m sure the railcars used in Russia are far more modern and probably don’t have this, but I couldn’t find any information about them online so I had to use creative license. Apologies?

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Re: Invasion (Russia/America) 24/?? (Part 5) anonymous July 6 2010, 08:47:21 UTC
CANNOT WAIT FOR THE REUNION OMG

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Re: Invasion (Russia/America) 24/?? (Part 5) anonymous July 6 2010, 20:05:20 UTC
I SECOND THIS COMMENT BECAUSE OMG, LIET.

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Re: Invasion (Russia/America) 24/?? (Part 5) anonymous July 6 2010, 22:41:02 UTC
Ugh this fill...why is this fill so amazing?

I'm jealous of the way you can write action...I suck at that.

Can't wait for all the wonderful sounding things in store for them all.

And I love that wildfire thing...that's so my headcanon for him that he has a bitch of a time during wildfire season.

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Re: Invasion (Russia/America) 24/?? (Part 5) anonymous July 7 2010, 02:01:12 UTC
Oh gosh. This chapter was just so awesome! I loved the action in this chapter! And poor America. He can't really catch a break, can he? Wildfires must really suck for him. :(

I can't wait for the next chapter! This is the first time that the trio can interact with the other nations since this has started. Lithuania! Belarus! And maybe some cute CanadaxUkraine? I'm so excited!

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Re: Invasion (Russia/America) 24/?? (Part 5) anonymous July 7 2010, 05:19:14 UTC
Lack of sleep... can't think straight.

BUT THIS. THIS. I am so glad I stay up :D

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