When the Lights Go Out [Gakuen!Prussia/Hungary] -- [3/3]
anonymous
June 27 2010, 06:33:03 UTC
A quiet noise came from the bed next to them, and Ludwig shifted onto his side, and then settled again. The two teenagers in the bed had instantly stiffened, but when it seemed that Ludwig was still asleep, Elizaveta relaxed, and shook her head.
“Later,” she assured him, leaning in to take a kiss. By later, she meant when they had time to sneak off somewhere with less chance of being caught.
Gilbert nodded. “Kay.” He pulled her close for one last kiss, and he let it last for a while longer before it broke. “Love you,” he mumbled against her lips in a whisper much softer than anything he’d said all night.
A smile flitted across Elizaveta’s lips, and she pressed her hand against his chest. “You, too,” she promised quietly, and, giving him one more kiss, she slipped out of his bed and the room as quickly and quietly as she’d entered.
Gilbert watched her go with a sappy smile - one that he would never let anyone but Elizaveta ever see - and then he pulled his pants back up, and laid down on the bed. It had been a very good night.
~*~
In the bed next to Gilbert, Ludwig turned his head to glance at his brother. He had been awake the entire time, and…the idea that his brother had allowed that to go on - encouraged it - while Ludwig was in the room was…hurtful. He’d thought his brother had respected him more than to just…do something like that while Ludwig was right there. He’d woken to the sound of his brother’s moans, and assumed it was one of Gilbert’s dreams - which were by no means uncommon - but when he saw that there was someone else in that bed, a girl with long brown hair, who’d quickly moved under the covers…he’d felt nauseated.
Had Gilbert not been his brother, Ludwig would have immediately put in for a room transfer.
End
A/N: Am I the only one who wants to hug Ludwig? But, anyway, the ending was a little iffy for me, mostly because I wasn't so sure if I should keep what I originally had Gilbert say -- the whole "Love you" thing. It felt a teensy bit OOC, but at the same time, Gilbert is so completely insecure that he'd be shy about saying it, I think, but not have so much of a problem saying it -- especially since he loves Lizzie to bits and pieces.
Re: When the Lights Go Out [Gakuen!Prussia/Hungary] -- [3/3]
anonymous
June 27 2010, 20:45:37 UTC
It's a little strange for me to see Prussia and Hungary so lovey dovey, but this fill was, uh, good. Steamy. Oh man, I have no idea what to say whenever I like a porn fill.
“Later,” she assured him, leaning in to take a kiss. By later, she meant when they had time to sneak off somewhere with less chance of being caught.
Gilbert nodded. “Kay.” He pulled her close for one last kiss, and he let it last for a while longer before it broke. “Love you,” he mumbled against her lips in a whisper much softer than anything he’d said all night.
A smile flitted across Elizaveta’s lips, and she pressed her hand against his chest. “You, too,” she promised quietly, and, giving him one more kiss, she slipped out of his bed and the room as quickly and quietly as she’d entered.
Gilbert watched her go with a sappy smile - one that he would never let anyone but Elizaveta ever see - and then he pulled his pants back up, and laid down on the bed. It had been a very good night.
~*~
In the bed next to Gilbert, Ludwig turned his head to glance at his brother. He had been awake the entire time, and…the idea that his brother had allowed that to go on - encouraged it - while Ludwig was in the room was…hurtful. He’d thought his brother had respected him more than to just…do something like that while Ludwig was right there. He’d woken to the sound of his brother’s moans, and assumed it was one of Gilbert’s dreams - which were by no means uncommon - but when he saw that there was someone else in that bed, a girl with long brown hair, who’d quickly moved under the covers…he’d felt nauseated.
Had Gilbert not been his brother, Ludwig would have immediately put in for a room transfer.
End
A/N: Am I the only one who wants to hug Ludwig? But, anyway, the ending was a little iffy for me, mostly because I wasn't so sure if I should keep what I originally had Gilbert say -- the whole "Love you" thing. It felt a teensy bit OOC, but at the same time, Gilbert is so completely insecure that he'd be shy about saying it, I think, but not have so much of a problem saying it -- especially since he loves Lizzie to bits and pieces.
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Anyway, good job!
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