Re: Close Every Door [1c/6]
anonymous
May 22 2010, 18:28:38 UTC
"Hello Prussia," France said, trying to keep the confusion out of his voice.
There was a fumbling on the other end of the line. "Aw, shit, it's you- look, dude, we're best buds and all, but I'd appreciate it if you wouldn't always ask for phone sex in the afternoon, because that's just wei-"
"No, no, no. Have you seen England around lately? He appears to be missing."
Prussia gave a small 'hmm'. "Nope. Fuck if I know where he is. He didn't turn up for our drinking contest last night, and he was talking about it for weeks!"
"He keeps to his schedules all the time, doesn't he?" France was beginning to grow a little suspicious. "I'm in his house right now and he-"
"Dude, that's fucking scary. You broke into his house when he wasn't there? Good God, man, what are you, Pedo Bear? Didn't you used to take care of him or something?"
France ignored the teasing that sounded all too sincere. "Perhaps I'm just overreacting. Perhaps he just went to the store." But the refrigerator had been fully stocked, and England wasn't the type to just go out to buy needlessly.
"I think you are. Maybe your head's finally messed up your other head." Prussia let out a loud guffaw. "Get it?"
"Oh, shush, that's vulgar. Nevermind, perhaps I am not thinking clearly."
Prussia sighed. "Still, it wouldn't hurt to ask around more, if you're worried. Personally I think he just pulled the stick out of his ass and got a life. Get back to me when you find him- I want that drinking contest sometime next week."
France hung up, thinking to himself. It was possible that England had gotten into another of his rebellious moods and just left for a few days, or, more likely, taken out his old punk clothes and roamed the back streets to drown himself in memories. It was nothing to worry about.
France turned and left the house, leaving his suspicions behind him.
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Just as a note- the quote is from Close Every Door, from Joseph and the Amazing Technicolor Dreamcoat. And forgive me for my spacing error in the previous post! XD
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Re: Close Every Door [1c/6]
anonymous
May 23 2010, 02:51:58 UTC
I really like the way Francis notices something is off with England's house, this way it's obvious those two has known each other to certain degree for a loooong time. And even with that Francis manages to talk his mind out of it, old rivalry is strange huh?
Re: Close Every Door [1c/6]
anonymous
May 25 2010, 01:59:43 UTC
God damn you, getting showtunes stuck in my head. *but I know the answers lie faaar from this wooooooorld...*
Erm, right.
That's some effective violence, there. There was a sexual edge, yes? Creepy. It worked out very well. I know we're in for more darkness, but France's too-personal insights were interesting and amusing and completely fitting, and Prussia's dialogue made me snort.
There was a fumbling on the other end of the line. "Aw, shit, it's you- look, dude, we're best buds and all, but I'd appreciate it if you wouldn't always ask for phone sex in the afternoon, because that's just wei-"
"No, no, no. Have you seen England around lately? He appears to be missing."
Prussia gave a small 'hmm'. "Nope. Fuck if I know where he is. He didn't turn up for our drinking contest last night, and he was talking about it for weeks!"
"He keeps to his schedules all the time, doesn't he?" France was beginning to grow a little suspicious. "I'm in his house right now and he-"
"Dude, that's fucking scary. You broke into his house when he wasn't there? Good God, man, what are you, Pedo Bear? Didn't you used to take care of him or something?"
France ignored the teasing that sounded all too sincere. "Perhaps I'm just overreacting. Perhaps he just went to the store." But the refrigerator had been fully stocked, and England wasn't the type to just go out to buy needlessly.
"I think you are. Maybe your head's finally messed up your other head." Prussia let out a loud guffaw. "Get it?"
"Oh, shush, that's vulgar. Nevermind, perhaps I am not thinking clearly."
Prussia sighed. "Still, it wouldn't hurt to ask around more, if you're worried. Personally I think he just pulled the stick out of his ass and got a life. Get back to me when you find him- I want that drinking contest sometime next week."
France hung up, thinking to himself. It was possible that England had gotten into another of his rebellious moods and just left for a few days, or, more likely, taken out his old punk clothes and roamed the back streets to drown himself in memories. It was nothing to worry about.
France turned and left the house, leaving his suspicions behind him.
~
Just as a note- the quote is from Close Every Door, from Joseph and the Amazing Technicolor Dreamcoat. And forgive me for my spacing error in the previous post! XD
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I do know it is natural, but still....
More, anon..
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Anyway, this anon is looking for more<3 :D
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Anyways, I am loving the start of this story! But poor Arthur! ;_; Omgosh is Alfred a sadist or what!? o_o
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Only England could do this. Yeah, only him...
Anyway, moar Anon!!
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Erm, right.
That's some effective violence, there. There was a sexual edge, yes? Creepy. It worked out very well.
I know we're in for more darkness, but France's too-personal insights were interesting and amusing and completely fitting, and Prussia's dialogue made me snort.
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