Past-Part Fills Part 3 -- CLOSED

Feb 26, 2011 13:34



This Past-Part Fills post is now closed to new fills.
Fresh past-part fills post HERE

Comments and Suggestions go here
Keep yourself up to date -- check out the news HERE

Leave a comment

Re: Japan/Greece/Switzerland FUCK YES [part 6] anonymous May 18 2010, 04:47:21 UTC
“Ah, Kiku, I want…” he struggles up onto all fours, angling to bring his lips to the Asian nation’s erection. Heracles’s finger slips out of him in the process, and he almost misses it.
“You don’t have to-nnnngh.” Kiku’s mild objection dissolves as Vash licks his cock wetly. He’s only done this once before, and he was piss drunk at the time, so he’s sure he’s no good at it, but… He takes the head into his mouth, licking it cautiously. He has to admit, he doesn’t dislike the taste. Kiku moans softly above him.
Something warm and wet pokes at Vash’s hole, and he cries out a bit, unsure at whether it was because of the shock or how good it felt. He turns around quickly, to see Heracles, his face bent to… He turns bright red. Something like this-
“Ah, Ahhnnnn, haah… fuck.” Heracles’s tongue plays with his entrance, not going inside, but simply circling around. Vash’s breath comes in harsh gasps, now. Something like this…
“Are you going to continue?” Kiku asks, still splayed in front of him. Vash’s breath catches at the sight. He hadn’t realized how beautiful the other man was. Heracles is still tonguing him, and fuck, it’s driving him crazy, but he lowers his head anyways, determined.
Kiku’s hips jerk up sharply, and Vash almost gags. He brings his hand up, jerking the other nation roughly while he licks at the head. It doesn’t take long before the other nation comes, the sticky fluids landing across Vash’s face messily. Heracles’s tongue dips inside him, and he drops to his elbows, his whole body shuddering.
Kiku wipes his face with someone’s robe, seemingly not caring whether it’s his of Heracles’s.
“You’re so beautiful, like this,” he whispers. Vash can only gasp.
Kiku vanishes from his vision, and moments later, a slick finger enters him alongside Heracles’s tongue. An uneven cry passes Vash’s lips. His fingers curl into the blankets, his eyes screw shut. He can feel the sweat dipping from his nose to the blankets below.
Another finger is added, as well as a rough hand about his balls. He can’t contain the stream of embarrassing sounds that flow from his lips any more. Heracles’s tongue leaves him, and he groans at the loss, but then there’s a third finger, and oh shit, they know what they’re doing. They press against parts of him he didn’t eve know he had, make him writhe and whine. He’s so close…

Reply

Re: Japan/Greece/Switzerland FUCK YES [part 7] anonymous May 18 2010, 04:48:02 UTC
The fingers are replaced by something thicker and longer, and he hears Heracles groan deeply. His breaths are coarse and shallow and fast now, each exhale a moan. He can feel a bit of saliva run down his chin, but he doesn’t care, this feeling-!
Heracles pushes in deeper as Kiku’s fingers flutter over him, his sides, his back, his neck, his thighs.
“A-Are you alright?” Heracles asks, his voice deep and husky. Somehow, that tone of voice is as sexy as anything else he’s felt today, and Vash’s hips twitch.
“Y-Yeah,” he pants, his back tensed like an elastic about to snap. Heracles rolls his hips, and Vash cries out at the feel of it. The taller man thrusts again, and a third time, and before long, Vash is meeting each thrust. Heracles’s hands grip his hips tightly, sure to leave bruises. He doesn’t know when his chin and chest became level with the floor, and he doesn’t care. This act, this moment, are all he can think about. He almost doesn’t notice when Heracles’s hips pause in their rhythm. The other nation groans deeply, and Kiku makes an appreciative noise.
When it starts again, the rhythm is different, syncopated, but Vash doesn’t notice. All he notices is the delicious pressure, the force behind him. He rolls his hips to meet each thrust, reveling in the closeness. Kiku’s hands skitter across his hips, and then Heracles is curled over his back, coming, biting into Vash’s back. Kiku’s hands bring the blond nation to his second orgasm as Heracles pulls out. He comes with a whimper, and collapses to the bed, exhausted.

Reply

Re: Japan/Greece/Switzerland FUCK YES [epilogue] anonymous May 18 2010, 04:50:39 UTC
The first thing Switzerland notices when he wakes up is that he’s naked. He never sleeps naked. His eyes shoot open and he jerks himself upright, reaching for his gun. Where his gun should be, there is another man’s shoulder instead. Equally naked.
For a minute he panics, not remembering the night before. Then Greece looks up at him, still half-asleep, and smiles, and he remembers all of it. He blushes deeply.
“G-morning, Vash,” Heracles says lazily. “How are you feeling?”
“I-I’m fine,” Vash stammers, looking away.
“Do you want help with that?” the other asks, looking pointedly at his morning wood.
“I-I-I can deal with that just fin on m-ahhhhnn…” his objection dissolves into a moan as the taller nation licks up his length. “I-If you must,” he concedes, trying to keep his dignity. Heracles licks his lips and continues.
Kiku arrives just as Vash comes, a half-moan caught in his throat.
“I was going to invite you to breakfast,” Kiku says mildly. “But I see you’ve already eaten.” He looks at Heracles. Vash’s blush deepens.
“I’m still hungry, though,” Heracles says, getting up and stretching widely.
“Please put something on,” Kiku says.
“But both of you have seen it already,” Heracles complains, following his lover to the kitchen. Vash smiles, and wonders what he’s gotten into.

~~~~~~~~~~~

(I don't know if it was any good, and I'm almost sure I forgot something or made some horrible grammatical mistake, but I don't think I am up for rereading it right now... I just hope Vash isn't too OOC)

Reply

Re: Japan/Greece/Switzerland FUCK YES [epilogue] anonymous May 19 2010, 04:07:48 UTC
This threesome! 8D

This was hot anon. I really liked the voyeurism at the beginning too.

Reply

Re: Japan/Greece/Switzerland FUCK YES [epilogue] anonymous May 19 2010, 19:24:59 UTC
I know, right? I never would have thought of it, but I really liked it. I have a huge kink for voyeurism.

Reply

Re: Japan/Greece/Switzerland FUCK YES [epilogue] anonymous May 19 2010, 06:33:15 UTC
Man that was good. And no worries, I found Switzerland very IC.

I only recommend you to use paragraphs.

Thanks for sharing!

Reply

Re: Japan/Greece/Switzerland FUCK YES [epilogue] anonymous May 19 2010, 19:26:12 UTC
Thanks. I was worried that he didn't seem angry enough, so I'm glad he came off IC. :3

I used paragraphs when I was typing it up in Word, but they didn't transfer over properly. T.T Next time...

Reply

Re: Japan/Greece/Switzerland FUCK YES [epilogue] anonymous May 19 2010, 11:11:07 UTC
..... OAO -picks jaw up from the floor-

This anon didn't realize how much she needed this.
Brilliant job authornon!

ReallyReallyReally.

Hnnnnnngh.

Reply

Re: Japan/Greece/Switzerland FUCK YES [epilogue] anonymous May 19 2010, 19:26:58 UTC
:3

Neither did this authornon. Thanks.

Reply

BugBugBug[again] anonymous July 31 2010, 08:08:58 UTC
I'm not following you or anything.
Wow, I'd never thought about this couple, it's pretty crackish. XDD You like Switzerland, don't you. I wonder what the other two thought about his PJs. :O We'll never know!

Reply

Re: Japan/Greece/Switzerland FUCK YES [epilogue] anonymous January 20 2011, 21:15:56 UTC
I don't know why you switched from past to present at Part 2, but pfft, happy you did cuz you can WRITE present tense. XD

I burst out laughing when, right before Japan came, he just looks over to Switzerland and asks if he likes what he sees. XD What the hell. And it's not even a moodkiller to any of them! XD Voyeurism is kinda hot! XD

Especially love the way Switzerland talks around things at the beginning. Like, he lowers his head to quite lower places indeed, and, he lowers himself to Japan's...he can't think of it. XD

(Oh, so that's what they call it... Morning wood. XD "I see you've already eaten." XD I love that.)

BEAUTIFUL.

Reply


Leave a comment

Up