Can't break what's already broken <3/?>
anonymous
June 6 2010, 17:11:45 UTC
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Russia heaved a long, exasperated sigh. Prussia thought it sounded like a bear's growl. "You see, little Prussia, this is eaxtcly why I need to discipline you. You are errant, yes? It is not fitting for a guest to abuse his host's hospitality. You will learn, yes?"
Prussia heaved himself violently against his bonds and screamed, sore throat be damned. "You're a fucking lunatic! What are you even talking about?! I'm not a guest, I'm a goddamn prisoner! What the fuck do you want from me?! What?!"
The answer was simple, and made a miserable wave of terror crawl up Prussia's spine. "I want you, my dearest Prussia. I want you to be mine. It is simple enough, I think. Just you, yes?"
Prussia paled. "Never." It came out nothing more than a whisper, and Russia let out a harsh bark of laughter before reaching out. His hand closed over Prussia's nose and mouth again, but Prussia was ready. He tried biting.
Nothing happened. Prussia;s eyes went wide. Russia had cupped his hand, and was once again merrily cutting Prussia off from his rank supply of air. The bastard was smiling wildly. "Mine," he whispered back after a time, just before Prussia's eyes rolled up in the back of his head.
Re: Can't break what's already broken <3/?>
anonymous
June 7 2010, 15:53:19 UTC
OP loves this fill and is also kind of terrified of it. Which is definitely a good thing. I love that line about Prussia being bathed in blood and baptized in fire, and in general I love the imagery of this fill <3
Re: Can't break what's already broken <3/?>
anonymous
June 26 2010, 04:44:52 UTC
My god Anon, you´re doing such a wonderful work here! The resentment Prussia feels towards Germany it´s beautifully expressed. Even Russia as the usual psycho seems more deep, more vivid and wonderful.
Please continue Anon! You have my heart in your hands!
Re: Can't break what's already broken <3/?>
anonymous
September 25 2010, 16:09:59 UTC
Oh my god, it's really amazing. The part that really got me was the prologue. Gave me a figurative hard-on from Prussia's total crazy-moment :'D Please update this soon. I'd love to see it finished!
Russia heaved a long, exasperated sigh. Prussia thought it sounded like a bear's growl. "You see, little Prussia, this is eaxtcly why I need to discipline you. You are errant, yes? It is not fitting for a guest to abuse his host's hospitality. You will learn, yes?"
Prussia heaved himself violently against his bonds and screamed, sore throat be damned. "You're a fucking lunatic! What are you even talking about?! I'm not a guest, I'm a goddamn prisoner! What the fuck do you want from me?! What?!"
The answer was simple, and made a miserable wave of terror crawl up Prussia's spine. "I want you, my dearest Prussia. I want you to be mine. It is simple enough, I think. Just you, yes?"
Prussia paled. "Never." It came out nothing more than a whisper, and Russia let out a harsh bark of laughter before reaching out. His hand closed over Prussia's nose and mouth again, but Prussia was ready. He tried biting.
Nothing happened. Prussia;s eyes went wide. Russia had cupped his hand, and was once again merrily cutting Prussia off from his rank supply of air. The bastard was smiling wildly. "Mine," he whispered back after a time, just before Prussia's eyes rolled up in the back of his head.
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Can't wait for the next bit
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Please continue Anon! You have my heart in your hands!
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Please update this soon. I'd love to see it finished!
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