With Or Without [Part 4/?]
anonymous
April 25 2010, 02:30:03 UTC
It was simply wrong on too many levels.
As if sensing his thoughts, Arthur then spoke the words that made it even more so, “I promise that I won’t hurt you. I love you.”
Again Arthur had said it, the ‘L’ word he had been so loathe to say to Alfred before now. He couldn’t see Arthur’s face very well without Texas, but there could be no mistaking the sincere warmth in his voice at least. It struck Alfred as odd that he might actually be telling the truth. But would that being a lie have made the situation any better?
Arthur leaned down and kissed away a stray tear that had managed to creep down to his chin.
"Relax.”
Alfred took a steadying breath before answering as clearly as he could, “N-n-no.”
It would be beyond mortifying to submit like that. He was already humiliated and still stinging from the way Arthur kept talking down to him. The dual assault on his mind from whatever he’d been given and the attention being lavished on Nantucket might have had his head reeling, but he felt no matter what that compliance with Arthur was the wrong choice to make.
His verbal refusal didn’t seem to make any difference though, Arthur still kept that condescending attitude as he continued to get Alfred‘s body to react in unbidden pants and sighs. Even acting as if he were actually helping Alfred.
The tears had long since stopped falling by the time Alfred came with a low moan; Arthur still stroking Nantucket and pressing his hand up against him in his diaper as he did, smiling all the while.
There was soothing nonsense whispered into his ear and strong arms wrapped around him as he began to feel extremely drowsy. Heavy eyelids fluttered as Alfred tried to stay awake, instead focusing on willing himself to ignore the feeling of the sticky mess he had made.
Arthur shifted him into his lap as he reassured, “You won’t have as much stamina until your body adjusts. Sleep, child.”
Alfred desperately wanted to ask what exactly it was that he was supposed to be adjusting to and why he had to adjust to it in the first place. His body’s demand for sleep won out over his questions however. But as he drifted off something occurred to him that made him that much more confused about his situation.
Because Alfred couldn’t remember the last time Arthur had held him like this.
Author's Notes aka 'We’ll be in the Second Circle, don’t forget to bring your ID’'
anonymous
April 25 2010, 02:33:36 UTC
-WARNING- This Story Will/May Eventually Contain: AB/DL, Daddy!Kink, MaleLactation, Spanking, Dub-con, and general Mindfuckery.
Basically the title of this should’ve been “NSFW” Just thought I’d say that now because I know some people like a little warning for that and I don’t really wanna startle anyone more than necessary. xD And Hell if I ever figure a way to work out crossdressing into this, consider that an included kink too.
Sorry again for the late update, as I mentioned in the Discussion Post, school’s been kicking my ass lately. My finals are this week so updates should be more frequent. (So instead of studying for my finals I've written some bad kink porn stuff. Anon definitely has weird priorities.)
I know it’s a bit cliché but I have to say this: Thank you very much for the comments guys! And anyone know the etiquette on Author!Anons offering Commenter!Anons their firstborn? Cause I so totally would.
And as always feedback/comments/suggestions are appreciated. But I know from personal experience that it’s hard to comment sometimes, especially if someone else has already summed up my thoughts on a fill or if it goes against the current flow, so no worries.
Small suck!update, but a necessary one for advancement. Next Time: Moar Kinks/Mindfuckery
[Btw, ReCaptcha says ‘in frock’ O_o I didn’t know you were that kinky Capi-chan.]
Re: Author's Notes aka 'We’ll be in the Second Circle, don’t forget to bring your ID’'
anonymous
April 25 2010, 02:59:29 UTC
are you implying that Arthur has actually gotten Al to de-age? Oh anon! You need to stop creeping into my darkest fantasies and making your fill all the more twistedly wrongly irresistable to me. *cries* Oh man, the image of Arthur doing that to a younger smaller Al makes the hotness factor go up exponentially, god help us all.
*cheers while preparing a suitcase for the trip down to hell* And since I may as well be hung for a sheep as for a lamb - or is it the other way round - may I say I'm especially looking forward to the male lactation. If Arthur can do all this, why do I have the feeling that his milk will be another way to bind Alfred to him? *wiggles happily*
What's that, recaptcha? Police restrict? Well, you're judgmental, but no, the police can't stop us now.
Author!anon Is Like Wow
anonymous
April 25 2010, 03:08:20 UTC
xD Caught on quick, eh? I was planning on him being made at least a bit younger!teenish for this as I need an excuse to help cut down his strength and ability to think clearly when considering his options. (And Arthur thinks this will make him easier to control, well played old man!)
^_^ I'm still shocked that I haven't been beaten with a hammer for writing this, but if you're gonna sin why not go all the way?
Re: Author's Notes aka 'We’ll be in the Second Circle, don’t forget to bring your ID’'
anonymous
April 25 2010, 05:35:03 UTC
Pssh, I've been set to go to hell since practically the moment I found out about the kink meme, so now at least I know it will be with a lot of good company... Good thing I've got my passport now XD
And goodness, Author-non, you just...hit a ton of kinks I didn't even know I had. I just...I can't even express the hotness here. Your writing is very good too, so that just makes it even better.
I expect copious blood loss in my future
And good luck on your final exams! I've got them next week, haha "The freeman" O_o Captcha...you couldn't be much more wrong right now
Re: is jfen reading this, do you think?
anonymous
May 7 2010, 06:13:42 UTC
xD Sometimes I think the collective hivemind of the internet works in odd ways like this...either they're reading it or they're channeling our weirdness.
(And now you will be HungForASheep!Anon in my head.)
As if sensing his thoughts, Arthur then spoke the words that made it even more so, “I promise that I won’t hurt you. I love you.”
Again Arthur had said it, the ‘L’ word he had been so loathe to say to Alfred before now. He couldn’t see Arthur’s face very well without Texas, but there could be no mistaking the sincere warmth in his voice at least. It struck Alfred as odd that he might actually be telling the truth. But would that being a lie have made the situation any better?
Arthur leaned down and kissed away a stray tear that had managed to creep down to his chin.
"Relax.”
Alfred took a steadying breath before answering as clearly as he could, “N-n-no.”
It would be beyond mortifying to submit like that. He was already humiliated and still stinging from the way Arthur kept talking down to him. The dual assault on his mind from whatever he’d been given and the attention being lavished on Nantucket might have had his head reeling, but he felt no matter what that compliance with Arthur was the wrong choice to make.
His verbal refusal didn’t seem to make any difference though, Arthur still kept that condescending attitude as he continued to get Alfred‘s body to react in unbidden pants and sighs. Even acting as if he were actually helping Alfred.
The tears had long since stopped falling by the time Alfred came with a low moan; Arthur still stroking Nantucket and pressing his hand up against him in his diaper as he did, smiling all the while.
There was soothing nonsense whispered into his ear and strong arms wrapped around him as he began to feel extremely drowsy. Heavy eyelids fluttered as Alfred tried to stay awake, instead focusing on willing himself to ignore the feeling of the sticky mess he had made.
Arthur shifted him into his lap as he reassured, “You won’t have as much stamina until your body adjusts. Sleep, child.”
Alfred desperately wanted to ask what exactly it was that he was supposed to be adjusting to and why he had to adjust to it in the first place. His body’s demand for sleep won out over his questions however. But as he drifted off something occurred to him that made him that much more confused about his situation.
Because Alfred couldn’t remember the last time Arthur had held him like this.
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This Story Will/May Eventually Contain: AB/DL, Daddy!Kink, MaleLactation, Spanking, Dub-con, and general Mindfuckery.
Basically the title of this should’ve been “NSFW”
Just thought I’d say that now because I know some people like a little warning for that and I don’t really wanna startle anyone more than necessary. xD And Hell if I ever figure a way to work out crossdressing into this, consider that an included kink too.
Sorry again for the late update, as I mentioned in the Discussion Post, school’s been kicking my ass lately. My finals are this week so updates should be more frequent. (So instead of studying for my finals I've written some bad kink porn stuff. Anon definitely has weird priorities.)
I know it’s a bit cliché but I have to say this: Thank you very much for the comments guys! And anyone know the etiquette on Author!Anons offering Commenter!Anons their firstborn? Cause I so totally would.
And as always feedback/comments/suggestions are appreciated. But I know from personal experience that it’s hard to comment sometimes, especially if someone else has already summed up my thoughts on a fill or if it goes against the current flow, so no worries.
Small suck!update, but a necessary one for advancement. Next Time: Moar Kinks/Mindfuckery
[Btw, ReCaptcha says ‘in frock’ O_o I didn’t know you were that kinky Capi-chan.]
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*cheers while preparing a suitcase for the trip down to hell* And since I may as well be hung for a sheep as for a lamb - or is it the other way round - may I say I'm especially looking forward to the male lactation. If Arthur can do all this, why do I have the feeling that his milk will be another way to bind Alfred to him? *wiggles happily*
What's that, recaptcha? Police restrict? Well, you're judgmental, but no, the police can't stop us now.
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^_^ I'm still shocked that I haven't been beaten with a hammer for writing this, but if you're gonna sin why not go all the way?
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That will be all.
(reCATPCH: imported Americas. Bzuh?)
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And goodness, Author-non, you just...hit a ton of kinks I didn't even know I had. I just...I can't even express the hotness here. Your writing is very good too, so that just makes it even better.
I expect copious blood loss in my future
And good luck on your final exams! I've got them next week, haha
"The freeman" O_o Captcha...you couldn't be much more wrong right now
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(And now you will be HungForASheep!Anon in my head.)
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