OP can't believe her luck
anonymous
April 22 2010, 14:53:41 UTC
OP is really late for this, and really sorry that she is because OMG SO GOOD. I'm so so lucky to get two excellent fills for my prompt ♥
I loved your Alfred; I'm fascinated about Alfred being the most interesting character in both fills, the most complex. I like how you fleshed him and his life out before going on why would such a person do this, and you made it work very well. I specially enjoyed the seduction in two parts (with that interlude about him mending outside and being checked out by his dad from the window, which was SO HOT I can't blame Arthur, really); it was such a powerful scene, specially after Alfred's short road to finding out what he wanted. Another excellent scene was when he brought the girl home to fuck and kept wishing his dad would interrupt (instead, he traumatized his poor brother, as always ^^U)
Their childhood was very itneresting, and Arthur felt like a really well-rounded character with his own motives and thoughts and views. His penchant for incest was an excellent touch. Francis appearance was a really good idea, and how did you know I also ship FrUK? =0_0=
Matt, oh dear, Matt. I really like how you made him and the reason behind his reactions and personality being so mellow too. OMG, Antonio, you asshole. It's interesting that Matt later on relaized what had happened but still hasn't told anyone, painfully realistic. And his histerical violent reaction at the end, but his mostly submissive atittude toward his brother, which seems actually the only thing wrong with him, apart from that latent repulsion to this. It's his relationship with his brother which leads him into Al's and Arthur's perversion, but any other way, he seems well-adjusted in a way Alfred's never been (at least when we look inside his head, to the outside world he appears compeltely normal, or yet, better than normal; also painfully realistic, the darkest parts of the human mind and desires are usually really well-hidden from outsiders)
Finally, that end. That was so good, the oozing wrongness of including Matt as a voyeur and closing the tight circle around their family unit against the world. Whereas Matt was kept out and voluntarily escaped in the first fill, here he gets trapped into the insanity. I'm so glad I got such two different and awesome fills! That end was also fascinating by how expertly Afred gets hold of the reigns in his house and gets everybody exactly where he wants them
Thank you so much, anon ^^
ALSO, PAY THE FUCKING BRAIN RENT, AUTHORANON, BECAUSE HOW COULD YOU POSSIBLY KNOW I HAVE A HUGE DADDY KINK?
'spooning legal'. I'm afraid not, Captcha, father-son spooning is illegal everywhere I think
Re: OP can't believe her luck
anonymous
April 24 2010, 08:21:38 UTC
No, thank you, OP, both for the fantastic request and your well thought out comment.
You seem to have caught every single idea I wanted to put in, and that is the best compliment anyanon could pay any authoranon. I am still a bit blown away by it.
I ship FrUK too ;) and HOW COULD ANYONE FAIL TO TELL FROM THE NATURE OF YOUR REQUEST THAT YOU HAVE A DADDY KINK? AND THAT I HAVE ONE TOO? I am so thankful for anon-ness.
I loved your Alfred; I'm fascinated about Alfred being the most interesting character in both fills, the most complex. I like how you fleshed him and his life out before going on why would such a person do this, and you made it work very well. I specially enjoyed the seduction in two parts (with that interlude about him mending outside and being checked out by his dad from the window, which was SO HOT I can't blame Arthur, really); it was such a powerful scene, specially after Alfred's short road to finding out what he wanted. Another excellent scene was when he brought the girl home to fuck and kept wishing his dad would interrupt (instead, he traumatized his poor brother, as always ^^U)
Their childhood was very itneresting, and Arthur felt like a really well-rounded character with his own motives and thoughts and views. His penchant for incest was an excellent touch. Francis appearance was a really good idea, and how did you know I also ship FrUK? =0_0=
Matt, oh dear, Matt. I really like how you made him and the reason behind his reactions and personality being so mellow too. OMG, Antonio, you asshole. It's interesting that Matt later on relaized what had happened but still hasn't told anyone, painfully realistic. And his histerical violent reaction at the end, but his mostly submissive atittude toward his brother, which seems actually the only thing wrong with him, apart from that latent repulsion to this. It's his relationship with his brother which leads him into Al's and Arthur's perversion, but any other way, he seems well-adjusted in a way Alfred's never been (at least when we look inside his head, to the outside world he appears compeltely normal, or yet, better than normal; also painfully realistic, the darkest parts of the human mind and desires are usually really well-hidden from outsiders)
Finally, that end. That was so good, the oozing wrongness of including Matt as a voyeur and closing the tight circle around their family unit against the world. Whereas Matt was kept out and voluntarily escaped in the first fill, here he gets trapped into the insanity. I'm so glad I got such two different and awesome fills! That end was also fascinating by how expertly Afred gets hold of the reigns in his house and gets everybody exactly where he wants them
Thank you so much, anon ^^
ALSO, PAY THE FUCKING BRAIN RENT, AUTHORANON, BECAUSE HOW COULD YOU POSSIBLY KNOW I HAVE A HUGE DADDY KINK?
'spooning legal'. I'm afraid not, Captcha, father-son spooning is illegal everywhere I think
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You seem to have caught every single idea I wanted to put in, and that is the best compliment anyanon could pay any authoranon. I am still a bit blown away by it.
I ship FrUK too ;) and HOW COULD ANYONE FAIL TO TELL FROM THE NATURE OF YOUR REQUEST THAT YOU HAVE A DADDY KINK? AND THAT I HAVE ONE TOO? I am so thankful for anon-ness.
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