It is so obvious in hindsight Matthew doesn't know how he failed to see it before - the way Alfred crowded Arthur at the kitchen counter, reaching around him for dishes and seasoning. The way Arthur flushed with embarrassment - Matthew hadn't seen him do that before, except perhaps with Francis. And most of all, the way they both checked his face to see if he thought anything was amiss. Actually, Matthew thinks Alfred might have wanted him to see, to suspect. The way they shared a glance when he feigned indifference, conspiratory and guilty.
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Matthew has a view of the two of them from the side. Alfred's muscular legs are hung over Arthur's shoulders, and the older man is thrusting in and out between them. Matthew isn't noticed yet, not over Alfred's grunting - typical. He has a fight or flight rush of noradrenaline, and this time he chooses not to hide.
With a loud cry he didn't know he could produce, something primal and angry, he rushes into the room and shoves Arthur off his brother as hard as he can. There is a confused shout from both of them, and a yelp when Arthur rolls onto the ground. Matthew jumps onto him and flips him around, raises a fist but stops there. This is his father, his father, his father who was fucking his brother, but he doesn't think he could manage to hit him. During his hesitation, Alfred has gotten his arms beneath his armpits and lifted him off Arthur.
"How could you, how could you!" Matthew rages at Arthur. He hadn't ever thought that such a thing could have happened to Alfred. Arthur reaches up to him, face stricken. Matthew slaps his hand away and runs from the room.
"I've got him," Alfred shouts to Arthur behind him. By the time Alfred catches up to him on the stairs, Matthew has got it figured out. Matthew presses shaking hands into his face and keeps his back to Alfred. He can't believe he did what he just did, and it was a misunderstanding. He can't believe how he thought for even a moment that Arthur, who was past his prime and spent all his days cooped up in his study could force down the school jock, Alfred. He couldn't understand how the truth of the matter was somehow worse than his misinterpretation.
Alfred moves to stand beside him, lazily jerking pants up his hips. Thankfully, he doesn't talk, and Matthew just concentrates on breathing hard until his shoulders aren't shaking and his heart doesn't feel ready to pump out through his ribcage. What follows is a feeling of numbness. The horror, he feels, will set in later, when he's ready to scream. For now, he lowers his hands and looks at Alfred.
Alfred looks back at him. "Want to watch?"
Matthew doesn't reply, but Alfred apparently takes this for an affirmative, and drags him back up the stairs while muttering, but, you know, you can't have him. Arthur is in his room, fully clothed and pacing. He stares when Alfred marches Matthew in and pushes him into Arthur's armchair. Arthur starts when Alfred moves to disrobe him, and demands to know what happened.
"Let him watch, he'll see that I don't mind," Alfred says into his ear as he pulls the pajamas off. And, "It's alright, Daddy," when Arthur protests. Alfred pushes his own pants down and lifts Arthur onto the bed. Arthur's wide eyes meet Matthew's, and he somehow manages to nod his assent.
Alfred pushes his fingers in and out of Arthur's asshole and leans down to kiss him until he is only looking right back at him. Alfred smirks smugly at Matthew. Then, he pumps his own cock a few times, lifts Arthur's hips and presses into him, just like how Arthur was fucking him earlier. Matthew cannot avert his eyes from the disaster on the bed. These are the two people I've known all my life, he thinks.
My family.
"You're mine, Daddy," Alfred is saying as he thrusts, sounding almost pleading. Arthur's eyes are screwed shut, and he seems almost to want to disappear into the bedding, but he sobs a reply when Alfred reaches around his waist to stroke him.
Father and son couple on the bed, and Matthew thinks something intangible and already fragile has cracked and shattered around all of them.
Anon from First Fill
anonymous
April 20 2010, 21:50:49 UTC
This request just keeps giving. May I ask if you are the first anon to claim this fill? Because, if we there's a potential third fill coming, then… wow, I may have to set up camp in this thread.
Fantastic fill. I loved all of the background in this, slowly building up to the reveal at the beginning and end, with this nice sense of foreboding. Particularly, I liked the bit with Alfred pulling Arthur out of the way of the car. And, the relationship between Alfred and Matthew was also well done, subtle.
And, one more thing. The last line. I can't pin down exactly why, but that is just excellently, emotionally phrased
Ooooo, I enjoyed that. It's just...dang, so many things I want to comment on, but nobody wants to read a wall of text so I'll just say that was pretty awesome in a morbidly fascinating sort of way.
Canada. Ok, I'll focus on Canada. Poor, poor kid- first Spain, now this. Everyone in the family is broken, and Arthur apparently has a shameful kink for incest, and there was France, and the family background, and jeez.
OP can't believe her luck
anonymous
April 22 2010, 14:53:41 UTC
OP is really late for this, and really sorry that she is because OMG SO GOOD. I'm so so lucky to get two excellent fills for my prompt ♥
I loved your Alfred; I'm fascinated about Alfred being the most interesting character in both fills, the most complex. I like how you fleshed him and his life out before going on why would such a person do this, and you made it work very well. I specially enjoyed the seduction in two parts (with that interlude about him mending outside and being checked out by his dad from the window, which was SO HOT I can't blame Arthur, really); it was such a powerful scene, specially after Alfred's short road to finding out what he wanted. Another excellent scene was when he brought the girl home to fuck and kept wishing his dad would interrupt (instead, he traumatized his poor brother, as always ^^U)
Their childhood was very itneresting, and Arthur felt like a really well-rounded character with his own motives and thoughts and views. His penchant for incest was an excellent touch. Francis appearance was a really good idea, and how did you know I also ship FrUK? =0_0=
Matt, oh dear, Matt. I really like how you made him and the reason behind his reactions and personality being so mellow too. OMG, Antonio, you asshole. It's interesting that Matt later on relaized what had happened but still hasn't told anyone, painfully realistic. And his histerical violent reaction at the end, but his mostly submissive atittude toward his brother, which seems actually the only thing wrong with him, apart from that latent repulsion to this. It's his relationship with his brother which leads him into Al's and Arthur's perversion, but any other way, he seems well-adjusted in a way Alfred's never been (at least when we look inside his head, to the outside world he appears compeltely normal, or yet, better than normal; also painfully realistic, the darkest parts of the human mind and desires are usually really well-hidden from outsiders)
Finally, that end. That was so good, the oozing wrongness of including Matt as a voyeur and closing the tight circle around their family unit against the world. Whereas Matt was kept out and voluntarily escaped in the first fill, here he gets trapped into the insanity. I'm so glad I got such two different and awesome fills! That end was also fascinating by how expertly Afred gets hold of the reigns in his house and gets everybody exactly where he wants them
Thank you so much, anon ^^
ALSO, PAY THE FUCKING BRAIN RENT, AUTHORANON, BECAUSE HOW COULD YOU POSSIBLY KNOW I HAVE A HUGE DADDY KINK?
'spooning legal'. I'm afraid not, Captcha, father-son spooning is illegal everywhere I think
Re: OP can't believe her luck
anonymous
April 24 2010, 08:21:38 UTC
No, thank you, OP, both for the fantastic request and your well thought out comment.
You seem to have caught every single idea I wanted to put in, and that is the best compliment anyanon could pay any authoranon. I am still a bit blown away by it.
I ship FrUK too ;) and HOW COULD ANYONE FAIL TO TELL FROM THE NATURE OF YOUR REQUEST THAT YOU HAVE A DADDY KINK? AND THAT I HAVE ONE TOO? I am so thankful for anon-ness.
THIS is honestly my favorite fill on the meme. Just... everything about it. The ending... Arthur's character... the background you built for them all. adfknd it was all brilliant~
Oh god anon, you wrote this so damn well! I second all the anons above. The twistedness of the whole situation is perfectly described, you can feel it clearly in the air; and all the reasons behind their actions explain their dysfunctionality very well. A very good creepy fill it was, gave me this feeling of disturbance that this kind of immorality can be somehow arousing. so glad you posted it <3
(oh you, I think that because of you I'll get some kind of incest kink for Arthur [and him only cause the idea never appealed to me that much with anybody else])
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Matthew has a view of the two of them from the side. Alfred's muscular legs are hung over Arthur's shoulders, and the older man is thrusting in and out between them. Matthew isn't noticed yet, not over Alfred's grunting - typical. He has a fight or flight rush of noradrenaline, and this time he chooses not to hide.
With a loud cry he didn't know he could produce, something primal and angry, he rushes into the room and shoves Arthur off his brother as hard as he can. There is a confused shout from both of them, and a yelp when Arthur rolls onto the ground. Matthew jumps onto him and flips him around, raises a fist but stops there. This is his father, his father, his father who was fucking his brother, but he doesn't think he could manage to hit him. During his hesitation, Alfred has gotten his arms beneath his armpits and lifted him off Arthur.
"How could you, how could you!" Matthew rages at Arthur. He hadn't ever thought that such a thing could have happened to Alfred. Arthur reaches up to him, face stricken. Matthew slaps his hand away and runs from the room.
"I've got him," Alfred shouts to Arthur behind him. By the time Alfred catches up to him on the stairs, Matthew has got it figured out. Matthew presses shaking hands into his face and keeps his back to Alfred. He can't believe he did what he just did, and it was a misunderstanding. He can't believe how he thought for even a moment that Arthur, who was past his prime and spent all his days cooped up in his study could force down the school jock, Alfred. He couldn't understand how the truth of the matter was somehow worse than his misinterpretation.
Alfred moves to stand beside him, lazily jerking pants up his hips. Thankfully, he doesn't talk, and Matthew just concentrates on breathing hard until his shoulders aren't shaking and his heart doesn't feel ready to pump out through his ribcage. What follows is a feeling of numbness. The horror, he feels, will set in later, when he's ready to scream. For now, he lowers his hands and looks at Alfred.
Alfred looks back at him. "Want to watch?"
Matthew doesn't reply, but Alfred apparently takes this for an affirmative, and drags him back up the stairs while muttering, but, you know, you can't have him. Arthur is in his room, fully clothed and pacing. He stares when Alfred marches Matthew in and pushes him into Arthur's armchair. Arthur starts when Alfred moves to disrobe him, and demands to know what happened.
"Let him watch, he'll see that I don't mind," Alfred says into his ear as he pulls the pajamas off. And, "It's alright, Daddy," when Arthur protests. Alfred pushes his own pants down and lifts Arthur onto the bed. Arthur's wide eyes meet Matthew's, and he somehow manages to nod his assent.
Alfred pushes his fingers in and out of Arthur's asshole and leans down to kiss him until he is only looking right back at him. Alfred smirks smugly at Matthew. Then, he pumps his own cock a few times, lifts Arthur's hips and presses into him, just like how Arthur was fucking him earlier. Matthew cannot avert his eyes from the disaster on the bed. These are the two people I've known all my life, he thinks.
My family.
"You're mine, Daddy," Alfred is saying as he thrusts, sounding almost pleading. Arthur's eyes are screwed shut, and he seems almost to want to disappear into the bedding, but he sobs a reply when Alfred reaches around his waist to stroke him.
Father and son couple on the bed, and Matthew thinks something intangible and already fragile has cracked and shattered around all of them.
May I know what you thought of it pls?
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Fantastic fill. I loved all of the background in this, slowly building up to the reveal at the beginning and end, with this nice sense of foreboding. Particularly, I liked the bit with Alfred pulling Arthur out of the way of the car. And, the relationship between Alfred and Matthew was also well done, subtle.
And, one more thing. The last line. I can't pin down exactly why, but that is just excellently, emotionally phrased
All around, superb job, anon!
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I'm glad you liked it, anon. I was inspired to write after reading yours, actually.
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Canada. Ok, I'll focus on Canada. Poor, poor kid- first Spain, now this. Everyone in the family is broken, and Arthur apparently has a shameful kink for incest, and there was France, and the family background, and jeez.
I liked this; could you tell? :P
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recaptcha says: estonia regulation. wrong fill, i think
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I loved your Alfred; I'm fascinated about Alfred being the most interesting character in both fills, the most complex. I like how you fleshed him and his life out before going on why would such a person do this, and you made it work very well. I specially enjoyed the seduction in two parts (with that interlude about him mending outside and being checked out by his dad from the window, which was SO HOT I can't blame Arthur, really); it was such a powerful scene, specially after Alfred's short road to finding out what he wanted. Another excellent scene was when he brought the girl home to fuck and kept wishing his dad would interrupt (instead, he traumatized his poor brother, as always ^^U)
Their childhood was very itneresting, and Arthur felt like a really well-rounded character with his own motives and thoughts and views. His penchant for incest was an excellent touch. Francis appearance was a really good idea, and how did you know I also ship FrUK? =0_0=
Matt, oh dear, Matt. I really like how you made him and the reason behind his reactions and personality being so mellow too. OMG, Antonio, you asshole. It's interesting that Matt later on relaized what had happened but still hasn't told anyone, painfully realistic. And his histerical violent reaction at the end, but his mostly submissive atittude toward his brother, which seems actually the only thing wrong with him, apart from that latent repulsion to this. It's his relationship with his brother which leads him into Al's and Arthur's perversion, but any other way, he seems well-adjusted in a way Alfred's never been (at least when we look inside his head, to the outside world he appears compeltely normal, or yet, better than normal; also painfully realistic, the darkest parts of the human mind and desires are usually really well-hidden from outsiders)
Finally, that end. That was so good, the oozing wrongness of including Matt as a voyeur and closing the tight circle around their family unit against the world. Whereas Matt was kept out and voluntarily escaped in the first fill, here he gets trapped into the insanity. I'm so glad I got such two different and awesome fills! That end was also fascinating by how expertly Afred gets hold of the reigns in his house and gets everybody exactly where he wants them
Thank you so much, anon ^^
ALSO, PAY THE FUCKING BRAIN RENT, AUTHORANON, BECAUSE HOW COULD YOU POSSIBLY KNOW I HAVE A HUGE DADDY KINK?
'spooning legal'. I'm afraid not, Captcha, father-son spooning is illegal everywhere I think
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You seem to have caught every single idea I wanted to put in, and that is the best compliment anyanon could pay any authoranon. I am still a bit blown away by it.
I ship FrUK too ;) and HOW COULD ANYONE FAIL TO TELL FROM THE NATURE OF YOUR REQUEST THAT YOU HAVE A DADDY KINK? AND THAT I HAVE ONE TOO? I am so thankful for anon-ness.
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I also like teh way they stick to calling him Daddy.
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(oh you, I think that because of you I'll get some kind of incest kink for Arthur [and him only cause the idea never appealed to me that much with anybody else])
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