One Man's Pleasure, 2/2
anonymous
March 11 2010, 23:35:29 UTC
"Jesus fuck." Alfred scrabbles for the fly of his own jeans, voice turning high-pitched with what sounds a little like awe, and he's so beautiful Arthur's breath catches in his chest. "Arthur," Alfred moans, and Arthur lifts himself onto his elbows so he can see better. Alfred has his left hand down his pants, jerking himself off hard and fast, but then his right hand is moving towards Arthur's abdomen, so quick it's a blur--
Pushes down so hard Arthur sees stars and he can't hold it in anymore, sobs with the humiliation and the relief, and pisses in his underwear like a little kid. It's so good it's almost tangible, almost something he can hold onto as Alfred grunts and pulls Arthur's underwear down, and there's piss going up his stomach and collecting in the hollows of his hip bones, dripping off of him and Alfred's coming into his own clenched fist, hot and white, and saying, "Arthur, Arthur, oh my god."
It feels like it's going to go on forever. And then it lessens and stops, and suddenly Arthur is blindingly hard. "Fuck, you bastard," he says, and Alfred grins, teeth flashing; starts to jack Arthur off with smooth, easy strokes and Arthur's elbows give out.
Barely twenty seconds later and there are at little white spots at the backs of his eyes and streaks of come mixing with the pools of piss on his stomach.
"I hate you," Arthur groans, putting his hands over his eyes so he doesn't have to see Alfred and the smug smirk Arthur knows he's got on his face. He doesn't even know how to get up, not without dripping come and piss all over the place. Even more all over the place than it already is. It's probably an impossible task. "Really hate you."
And curse that odd, underlying feeling of pride Arthur's experiencing right now at doing something like this for Alfred. He better be really fucking grateful is all Arthur can say.
"That was awesome," Alfred says, zipping up his trousers, breathless and hoarse, "like, daily blowjobs for a month awesome."
"Daily blowjobs for the rest of our lives, you mean." But Arthur's smiling slightly as he says it, and Alfred takes his hand, heaves him up despite Arthur's legs shaking (another thing he'll deny later when he's not feeling so-- ripped open).
"Shower?" Alfred asks, hint of vulnerability in his eyes, like he has the right to it. Like he wasn't just making Alfred drink himself into a liquid coma to satisfy an urge.
After a pause, Arthur says, "Rather," and allows Alfred to escort him to the bathroom, pretty much glowing because Alfred can't stop staring like he's lovestruck.
Re: One Man's Pleasure, 2/2
anonymous
March 12 2010, 17:33:01 UTC
THAT. WAS.
AM. AZ. ING.
Oh my god, anon- *fans self* -I seriously didn't expect that to be so hot, and IC, and I loved Alfred being all...serious and vulnerable and horny at the same time. And Arthur feeling angry, awkward, sexeh and affectionate all at once. and then the blowjobs. lol.
This crappy comment does not do this bowchikabowow fill justice. O:
Re: One Man's Pleasure, 2/2
anonymous
March 12 2010, 21:58:25 UTC
There are NOT enough stories like this. And..that was extremely hot. Thank you author_anon!!
Such a massive kink of mine this... *embarrassing but.. it's better when I see I'm not alone* and FINALLY it's with Arthur bottoming... THANK YOU!! And... while this was awesome I request MORE fills on this! /begs on her knees/
Re: One Man's Pleasure, 2/2
anonymous
March 13 2010, 02:33:41 UTC
FFFFFFFFFFFFF. Oh god. This is my super-secret kink, I love desperation fics. And I love yooouuu, author-anon! I've seen watersports done badly and done well...you've most definitely done it SUPER well. :D I officially offer you my first-born~
Re: One Man's Pleasure, 2/2
anonymous
March 16 2010, 15:06:37 UTC
Holy sheepshit, anon. That was the hottest damn thing I've read in a long time. You got the kink dead on and oh man, I gotta go find my fiance now. Ciao. ^_~
Re: One Man's Pleasure, 2/2
anonymous
June 14 2010, 03:25:48 UTC
Despite being a long-time (and ridiculously secret) kink of mine, this is the first watersports fic I have read. And ohhh, was it a good place to start. Wow.
Pushes down so hard Arthur sees stars and he can't hold it in anymore, sobs with the humiliation and the relief, and pisses in his underwear like a little kid. It's so good it's almost tangible, almost something he can hold onto as Alfred grunts and pulls Arthur's underwear down, and there's piss going up his stomach and collecting in the hollows of his hip bones, dripping off of him and Alfred's coming into his own clenched fist, hot and white, and saying, "Arthur, Arthur, oh my god."
It feels like it's going to go on forever. And then it lessens and stops, and suddenly Arthur is blindingly hard. "Fuck, you bastard," he says, and Alfred grins, teeth flashing; starts to jack Arthur off with smooth, easy strokes and Arthur's elbows give out.
Barely twenty seconds later and there are at little white spots at the backs of his eyes and streaks of come mixing with the pools of piss on his stomach.
"I hate you," Arthur groans, putting his hands over his eyes so he doesn't have to see Alfred and the smug smirk Arthur knows he's got on his face. He doesn't even know how to get up, not without dripping come and piss all over the place. Even more all over the place than it already is. It's probably an impossible task. "Really hate you."
And curse that odd, underlying feeling of pride Arthur's experiencing right now at doing something like this for Alfred. He better be really fucking grateful is all Arthur can say.
"That was awesome," Alfred says, zipping up his trousers, breathless and hoarse, "like, daily blowjobs for a month awesome."
"Daily blowjobs for the rest of our lives, you mean." But Arthur's smiling slightly as he says it, and Alfred takes his hand, heaves him up despite Arthur's legs shaking (another thing he'll deny later when he's not feeling so-- ripped open).
"Shower?" Alfred asks, hint of vulnerability in his eyes, like he has the right to it. Like he wasn't just making Alfred drink himself into a liquid coma to satisfy an urge.
After a pause, Arthur says, "Rather," and allows Alfred to escort him to the bathroom, pretty much glowing because Alfred can't stop staring like he's lovestruck.
Maybe they can do this again sometime.
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Have you posted in the fill section yet? *Only stumbled on it while she was replying to another comment on the same page*
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And um, no, I stumbled into Hetalia fandom about two weeks ago and basically scanned the kink_meme rules /dies. I'll go put it on there now, ty. :)
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AM. AZ. ING.
Oh my god, anon- *fans self* -I seriously didn't expect that to be so hot, and IC, and I loved Alfred being all...serious and vulnerable and horny at the same time. And Arthur feeling angry, awkward, sexeh and affectionate all at once. and then the blowjobs. lol.
This crappy comment does not do this bowchikabowow fill justice. O:
captchas: uninsured hacksaws?!
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I ... I'll be in my bunk.
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Such a massive kink of mine this... *embarrassing but.. it's better when I see I'm not alone* and FINALLY it's with Arthur bottoming... THANK YOU!! And... while this was awesome I request MORE fills on this!
/begs on her knees/
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I never thought I'd like watersports, and I almost clicked the back button when I realised that watersports DIDN'T mean ATHLETIC WATERSPORTS. OTL OTL
I'm now cautiously inching into this kink, and I would like to ask for links to other good USUK or UKUS watersports fic. Pretty please? <3
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http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/11813.html?thread=25126437#t25126437
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Moaarr!
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And ohhh, was it a good place to start. Wow.
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