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Rough Estimate [4/?] anonymous January 20 2010, 10:27:30 UTC
He didn't notice the fingers knotted into his hair were Prussia's now, not until the other nation lifted his head and smirked. "Now..since West gets that end first, I get this one. And if I feel teeth, I'll pull every single one of 'em outta your head and fuck your bleeding mouth."

"F-fuck you..suck it yourself, you fuckin' filthy son of a bitch," Denmark spat, trying desperately to ignore Germany's fingers dry-fucking him.

But he forgot Prussia still had a hand free, even if it was preoccupied undoing his belt and zipper about a foot from his face. That hand whipped into his cheek so fast and hard that the bruise would last for weeks.

Prussia still hadn't lost his smile, all teeth and malice, and shoved the front of his pants and shorts down, exposing his half hard length. "Suck my dick or I smash that fucking nose of yours 'til you start looking like one of those people you tried so hard to hide. Want to fit in, don't you?"

Keeping his mouth shut and eyes closed was only part rebellion - he couldn't stand looking at Prussia while Germany was back there curling his fingers at the height of every thrust, hitting a place that was so sensitive it made him forget the sharp pain acting as a precursor to pleasure.

Yes, it was pleasure, and an intense pleasure at that, but Denmark wasn't enjoying it at all. As far as he was concerned, it was an involuntary reaction, something to be suffered through just as much as the small, stinging pain from the tears Germany's forced entry had created.

But Prussia didn't care. He only saw Denmark disobeying and delivered the necessary punishment, hitting the fallen nation square on the bridge of the nose. With his dick.

And of course it hurt - that was broken bone Prussia just cockslapped - so badly Denmark couldn't help another loud, pained cry, involuntarily giving Prussia the opening he needed to jam two fingers into his mouth, back so far they made Denmark gag.

"Are we having trouble listening?" Prussia nodded his head for him. "Oh? Well, that's too bad, because I really hate repeating myself. I mean I really, really hate repeating myself."

Prussia snorted and flexed his fingers so that Denmark choked, throat convulsing around the intruding digits.

"I want you to open your fucking mouth and choke on my cock. Is it that hard to understand? Don't make me tell you again. Now, here in a minute-"

Prussia paused, watching what Denmark realized, horrified, was Germany unzipping his own pants. "- or less, my brother is going to put that big dick of his straight up your tight ass. It is tight, isn't it West? I can tell just by looking at him he's never had anything up there before. 'cept maybe a stick."

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Re: Rough Estimate [4/?] anonymous January 20 2010, 12:25:24 UTC
FFFF Denmark! ;A;!!!!

Yes, it was pleasure, and an intense pleasure at that, but Denmark wasn't enjoying it at all. As far as he was concerned, it was an involuntary reaction, something to be suffered through just as much as the small, stinging pain from the tears Germany's forced entry had created.

This. This this this. I hate it when noncon stories turn into fun for everyone stories. I'm also very glad Denmark is still putting up a fight. I can't imagine him ever just rolling over and taking it.

Back to F5ing anxiously!

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Re: Rough Estimate [4/?] anonymous January 21 2010, 00:35:35 UTC
-shiver- Oh my, anon. Gods above and below... this is hot. The brutality and detail is just amazing and astounding. The paired, dual cruelty of Prussia and Germany sends absolutely delicious shivers down my spine, even as my heart breaks for Denmark and for Sweden (and gods my heart also twinged at Denmark's shrieked outrage at seeing his fellow Nordic there). I'm just waiting for more of this ever so dark but ever so amazing- beauty.

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Re: Rough Estimate [4/?] anonymous January 21 2010, 12:52:13 UTC
Jesus, anon, this is brutal. Your Prussia is so deliciously evil and Denmark is just so spot on with his still having an attitude during all of this. I also agree with the above anon on the subject of his not enjoying it. All too often, rape fics wind up seeming a bit too fun for my tastes. I think you really found the good middle ground.

I'm very anxious to read the rest! My stomach is in knots for poor Denmark. I'm also intrigued to see what Sweden's reaction to the situation will be, both during and after.

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