i love how it goes from happy to really dark to sad to regaining some of that happiness, little by little. The raw feelings you described were excellent, anon. The anger and pain, but most of all the confusion. And OP is delighted that your headcanon says capital=nation's heart. OP forgot to request that and thought it was too late. Can't believe my luck ^^
You also handled well the delicate politics involved in this. After he wakes up, it was mostly sweet. France's over-the-top sentimentality, and the FrUK snark, and god, Alfred, he broke my heart. Very nice that Spain still thinks of him as a 'boy' all the time...it seems fitting
The ending was so sweet ~~ !! Romano was very very cute, i loved this line the most
Unlocking his door, he was immediately assaulted by something small, angry and Italian.
AWWW, Romano....
Anon also thinks it very fitting that Spain lives in a villaXD
Excellent work, writeranon. OP only missed a bit of Prussia and maybe Spain visiting the ruins/families/public mourning sites. Epilogue Y/Y? *wink*
Don't worry if you can't, though, we're all stressed these days ^^
pd. have you posted this on the Fills Page? Because I only just found it because I regularly check my prompts, but I didn't see it there...could have missed it, though...
Phew, so glad you liked it! And yeah, it's my head canon that capitals = hearts. Because that's where all the action is, really. It's hard to keep a Nation together if the capital's gone.
Sadly, I'm buried under everything in life ever right now. Maybe, after all my exams, I'll write an epilogue. But right now, it's just this.
Ah! I do still need to post on the fill page. I'll run off and do that.
i love how it goes from happy to really dark to sad to regaining some of that happiness, little by little.
The raw feelings you described were excellent, anon. The anger and pain, but most of all the confusion. And OP is delighted that your headcanon says capital=nation's heart. OP forgot to request that and thought it was too late. Can't believe my luck ^^
You also handled well the delicate politics involved in this. After he wakes up, it was mostly sweet. France's over-the-top sentimentality, and the FrUK snark, and god, Alfred, he broke my heart. Very nice that Spain still thinks of him as a 'boy' all the time...it seems fitting
The ending was so sweet ~~ !! Romano was very very cute, i loved this line the most
Unlocking his door, he was immediately assaulted by something small, angry and Italian.
AWWW, Romano....
Anon also thinks it very fitting that Spain lives in a villaXD
Excellent work, writeranon. OP only missed a bit of Prussia and maybe Spain visiting the ruins/families/public mourning sites. Epilogue Y/Y? *wink*
Don't worry if you can't, though, we're all stressed these days ^^
pd. have you posted this on the Fills Page? Because I only just found it because I regularly check my prompts, but I didn't see it there...could have missed it, though...
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Sadly, I'm buried under everything in life ever right now. Maybe, after all my exams, I'll write an epilogue. But right now, it's just this.
Ah! I do still need to post on the fill page. I'll run off and do that.
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