Re: Naturally Inquisitive [3/3]
anonymous
April 20 2010, 06:28:03 UTC
Fuck. Sadiq groaned, tightened his fingers in the damp hair. "The best." His free hand--still slick from earlier--shot out and wrapped around Heracles', pumping his cock. Dizzyingly beautiful green eyes widened and watched the joined hands, watched them jerk Sadiq's cock with quick, efficient, almost brutal strokes. All Sadiq could think was come on his face come on his face come on his face come on his--and Sadiq did, long, hot ropes of white splashing onto dark eyelashes, pink cheeks, and rose-hued lips that would learn to sing his name like a mantra when Sadiq fucked him.
Through the haze of orgasm, through the tremors that wracked his body, Sadiq realized he may have yanked Heracles' hair too tight, for there was a pained look about him. He blinked, a glob of white falling from an eyelash, and when it hit his thigh a look of anger began to overtake the one of pain.
Shit. Sadiq released him from his grasp. "Th' fuck didja think was gonna happen if ya kept your face there?"
He'd never been one for tact. At least... not this soon after and orgasm that messed his brain up something good.
And the look on Heracles' face turned to fury--the kind where someone was liable to get punched in the balls. "I hate you!"
"Shuttup, don't be like that," Sadiq muttered. Quickly, he pulled the smaller body up from the floor--"Leggo! You, you brute!"--and sat on the marble slab with Heracles in his lap. "Quit fidgeting, brat." Sadiq kept one arm wrapped about the slender waist--it fit perfectly, just the right size about the hipbones--and with his free hand he held Heracles' jaw, wiping away come and licking and kissing away the rest. It tasted particularly foul, but was much better than, say, a kick in the balls. Sadiq licked the last strand from the corner of Heracles' lips, kissing them briefly for the hell of it.
Heracles stilled, mouth agape.
"There," Sadiq grumbled, inspecting his work. "Don't you fuckin' tell any of the others."
"You..." Heracles swallowed, allowing his hands to settle on Sadiq's broad shoulders. "You don't do that with the tellaks... do you?"
Sadiq frowned. "What's that matter?" He was more than wary of the deep, calculating look being given to him.
"Idiot." Regardless, Heracles leaned forward and planted a kiss right between his eyes.
"Hmph." They should probably go to the baths once more. "Wanna learn what the köçekler do?"
"The what?"
Sadiq kept his face straight as best he could. "The boys who dance."
"...you're a monster."
Sadiq barked out a laugh at that and found himself strangely flattered.
Re: Naturally Inquisitive [3/3]
anonymous
April 20 2010, 11:14:35 UTC
Oooh, this was really wrong and hot. I love your characterisation of both of them. Greece does strike me as the kind of little boy who'd be very naturally inquisitive, particularly about his culture (we see him looking for Mama Greece's artefacts) and the cultures around him. And now I feel like a total pervert for finding that cute.
Turkey is brash and at the same time such a dork. So canon ♥ Plus I learned some new things about the treatment of homosexuality in the Ottoman Empire. I like my edutainment with red hot smut.
Re: Naturally Inquisitive [3/3]
anonymous
April 20 2010, 20:08:15 UTC
This was both hot and educational. And oh God your characterization made me smile like a dork. I love your Turkey voice, and, Greece? Pretty sure trees don't have souls. But cats totally do.
authoranon here
anonymous
April 20 2010, 16:06:12 UTC
!!!
I'm glad you noticed--sometimes when I write I'm secretly hoping there's, like, a history prof who's reading this and is going to give me a grade at the end. /pathetichistorystudentispathetic
Joining in the handbasket...
anonymous
April 20 2010, 20:16:46 UTC
Seems a rather good way to go, really.
What I adore so much is Heracles's characterization: youthful, contemplative, constantly swerving on passive aggression. He's got so much more wonderful depth than the usual- ah, victim of shotacon fics, with snark but genuine curiosity.
Sadiq makes me hot. Very hot. -fans self- Sensual, gruff, short-tempered and utterly authoritative.
And the smut? Hits all the right spots. Now, if you'll excuse me, I think I'll have to jump into an ice bucket to calm down....
author anon here
anonymous
April 20 2010, 20:51:04 UTC
What I adore so much is Heracles's characterization: youthful, contemplative, constantly swerving on passive aggression. He's got so much more wonderful depth than the usual- ah, victim of shotacon fics, with snark but genuine curiosity.
Thank you for your comment, I appreciate it--I am so, so, so not a shota fan, but my love for Turkey/Greece overcomes that and pretty much every other squick I have. I am mortified that I wrote this and will probably never de-anon, ever, even though I'm pretty fucking obvious already. orz
Re: author anon here
anonymous
April 21 2010, 01:43:20 UTC
Funny thing is, given Heracles's demeanor and actions, he reads as a rather mature teenager or so, not a child, even though logically he'd be that slightly scruffy little boy in a smock who snarks out Turkey.
-cough- I only unbend on shota for Hetalia. If only because mentally the Nations are probably older, even if they aren't physically.
-pats- It's up to you whether you want to de-anon or not, but I wouldn't feel too bad about it. I haven't done much shotacon, only implied (China and young Korea) but I've written more explicit lolicon for Hetalia (albeit, not as porn).
Re: Naturally Inquisitive [3/3]
anonymous
April 25 2010, 08:34:19 UTC
Oh my, this is really, REALLY hot. Turkey/Greece is one of my fav Hetalia pairings (second fav, actually) and I don't mind the shota (I don't usually read it, but Hetalia is just special XD). Their interactions with each other are pure gold and I love their spats. Oh, the last convo is such a pure gold.
I LOVE your Turkey. Sadiq is hot, nuff said. And you made him even more so. Yes, he's quite a perverted old man, but he's also snarky and dorky and just...sexy *fans self*
THANK YOU, ANON!!! Can't never have enough Turkey/Greece fics here :P
Through the haze of orgasm, through the tremors that wracked his body, Sadiq realized he may have yanked Heracles' hair too tight, for there was a pained look about him. He blinked, a glob of white falling from an eyelash, and when it hit his thigh a look of anger began to overtake the one of pain.
Shit. Sadiq released him from his grasp. "Th' fuck didja think was gonna happen if ya kept your face there?"
He'd never been one for tact. At least... not this soon after and orgasm that messed his brain up something good.
And the look on Heracles' face turned to fury--the kind where someone was liable to get punched in the balls. "I hate you!"
"Shuttup, don't be like that," Sadiq muttered. Quickly, he pulled the smaller body up from the floor--"Leggo! You, you brute!"--and sat on the marble slab with Heracles in his lap. "Quit fidgeting, brat." Sadiq kept one arm wrapped about the slender waist--it fit perfectly, just the right size about the hipbones--and with his free hand he held Heracles' jaw, wiping away come and licking and kissing away the rest. It tasted particularly foul, but was much better than, say, a kick in the balls. Sadiq licked the last strand from the corner of Heracles' lips, kissing them briefly for the hell of it.
Heracles stilled, mouth agape.
"There," Sadiq grumbled, inspecting his work. "Don't you fuckin' tell any of the others."
"You..." Heracles swallowed, allowing his hands to settle on Sadiq's broad shoulders. "You don't do that with the tellaks... do you?"
Sadiq frowned. "What's that matter?" He was more than wary of the deep, calculating look being given to him.
"Idiot." Regardless, Heracles leaned forward and planted a kiss right between his eyes.
"Hmph." They should probably go to the baths once more. "Wanna learn what the köçekler do?"
"The what?"
Sadiq kept his face straight as best he could. "The boys who dance."
"...you're a monster."
Sadiq barked out a laugh at that and found himself strangely flattered.
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And off to hell I go.
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Turkey is brash and at the same time such a dork. So canon ♥ Plus I learned some new things about the treatment of homosexuality in the Ottoman Empire. I like my edutainment with red hot smut.
Really awesome job, author!anon.
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Thank you for this wonderful thing, anon! ♥
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Agreed with above anon about the characterization. Liked Greece's teenage curiosity and fascination with everything sexual.
Kudos for using the plural for köçek and stating that these sex workers were children of dhimmi peoples under the Turkish rule.
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I'm glad you noticed--sometimes when I write I'm secretly hoping there's, like, a history prof who's reading this and is going to give me a grade at the end. /pathetichistorystudentispathetic
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What I adore so much is Heracles's characterization: youthful, contemplative, constantly swerving on passive aggression. He's got so much more wonderful depth than the usual- ah, victim of shotacon fics, with snark but genuine curiosity.
Sadiq makes me hot. Very hot. -fans self- Sensual, gruff, short-tempered and utterly authoritative.
And the smut? Hits all the right spots. Now, if you'll excuse me, I think I'll have to jump into an ice bucket to calm down....
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Thank you for your comment, I appreciate it--I am so, so, so not a shota fan, but my love for Turkey/Greece overcomes that and pretty much every other squick I have. I am mortified that I wrote this and will probably never de-anon, ever, even though I'm pretty fucking obvious already. orz
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this different anon agrees! I don't like shota, rape, torture... but I do like all these with Turkey/Greece, so much. orz
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-cough- I only unbend on shota for Hetalia. If only because mentally the Nations are probably older, even if they aren't physically.
-pats- It's up to you whether you want to de-anon or not, but I wouldn't feel too bad about it. I haven't done much shotacon, only implied (China and young Korea) but I've written more explicit lolicon for Hetalia (albeit, not as porn).
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I LOVE your Turkey. Sadiq is hot, nuff said. And you made him even more so. Yes, he's quite a perverted old man, but he's also snarky and dorky and just...sexy *fans self*
THANK YOU, ANON!!! Can't never have enough Turkey/Greece fics here :P
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