A Place You Can't Scratch [4/4]
anonymous
April 18 2010, 19:51:25 UTC
Russia pulled out and noted the blood on his dick, but he wasn’t particularly bothered by it. It happened often when he and Lithuania made love, so he casually took a handkerchief out of his pocket and wiped it off, before putting his clothing back on.
Proof had been given to him, and the itch was gone completely. He now knew that this was no imposter, but his love. Smiling, he knelt down, and pressed his lips to the other’s warm forehead, so happy that it really was him.
“You’re mine, and nothing can change that,” he whispered, stroking his hair, and turned around, determined to head back to the kitchen and finish that second bottle. After picking up his gun, he left, completely and blissfully ignorant of the state of the nation behind him.
He didn’t notice Lithuania curl into a ball and roll over so the red streaks on the back of his upper thighs were clearly visible. He didn’t see Lithuania mash his hands into his already blood-shot eyes out of frustration and hatred. And Russia certainly didn’t hear the terrified, pained sobs emitting from the pale and shivering form on the couch.
No, to him the house was silent. While sitting at his kitchen table, clutching a mostly empty bottle of vodka, he could only hear the silence, his own breathing, and the perpetual ticking of an old clock.
---o0o---
Oh, wow, okay. This was effin’ difficult to write. Hats off to op-anon for creating such a challenging request.
Re: A Place You Can't Scratch [4/4]
anonymous
April 19 2010, 05:18:08 UTC
Oh, anon. You are now officially my hero.
You managed to capture the exact Russia that I have in my head, not the sadistic bastard who enjoys torturing whatever comes his way, but a delirious and sometimes just blank-going person. I was very skeptic as I saw the prompt, since this POV is rarely good written, but you managed and so well!
Oh, and I loved the fact that the scars were not a result of slow tormenting of poor Lithuania, but rather a result of an "accident".
Re: A Place You Can't Scratch [4/4]
anonymous
April 20 2010, 14:19:26 UTC
Oh, wow, this was great. I loved how you got inside Russia's head, making his actions make perfect sense, in their own twisted way - that he really does love Liet, he just has no clue that he's hurting him. And Lithuania's responses were spot-on. I just about started crying when Russia noticed the 'tears of joy'.
Excellent fill, I'll be over here trying not to sniffle.
Proof had been given to him, and the itch was gone completely. He now knew that this was no imposter, but his love. Smiling, he knelt down, and pressed his lips to the other’s warm forehead, so happy that it really was him.
“You’re mine, and nothing can change that,” he whispered, stroking his hair, and turned around, determined to head back to the kitchen and finish that second bottle. After picking up his gun, he left, completely and blissfully ignorant of the state of the nation behind him.
He didn’t notice Lithuania curl into a ball and roll over so the red streaks on the back of his upper thighs were clearly visible. He didn’t see Lithuania mash his hands into his already blood-shot eyes out of frustration and hatred. And Russia certainly didn’t hear the terrified, pained sobs emitting from the pale and shivering form on the couch.
No, to him the house was silent. While sitting at his kitchen table, clutching a mostly empty bottle of vodka, he could only hear the silence, his own breathing, and the perpetual ticking of an old clock.
---o0o---
Oh, wow, okay. This was effin’ difficult to write. Hats off to op-anon for creating such a challenging request.
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*goes off to cuddle Liet* Poor kid... T^T
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Though, I suppose if it made you sad then I did my job. o:
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You managed to capture the exact Russia that I have in my head, not the sadistic bastard who enjoys torturing whatever comes his way, but a delirious and sometimes just blank-going person. I was very skeptic as I saw the prompt, since this POV is rarely good written, but you managed and so well!
Oh, and I loved the fact that the scars were not a result of slow tormenting of poor Lithuania, but rather a result of an "accident".
Great job, thanks for writing this!
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I'm glad you liked it. :3
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Excellent fill, I'll be over here trying not to sniffle.
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