Ooooh, y-your Francis. It's so rare when people can balance him out, and give him depth, but you do it so, so well. The transition from his teasing moments to his more serious, wise side is splendid. I really like that-- him being able to honestly give love advice, but still able to utterly embarrass Matt. (And gosh, encouraging Matt to cop a feel! Fantastic~)
I don't know if I've mentioned it before or not, but one of my favorite things about this fill is the way you slide subtle, small tidbits of sexy/explicit moments in. One like, and I swear it's hotter than some fills with entire sex scenes. Maybe it's just because you almost feel like your catching stray bits directly from Matt's though process that does it, or the fact that the mundane/normal moment suddenly taking on this sharp, sexy edge amplifies the moment like woah, but...either way I love it. Literally, it can take my breath away at times.
The scene where Matt got to see Al's apartment was also great. It's really cool, getting to witness Matt taking in these small details, and learn some of the more casual quirks of Alfred. I think my favorite bit was how Matt related it to being "Like a child's experiment at growing up" because I think that's insanely in character, and such a good way of putting it. The simple, real-life touches here really brought it to life, and I really, really enjoyed seeing it (as always~). As you mentioned yourself, it was great to get a peak into Al's life and see his "human" side, outside of being a teacher.
And the end line was so touching!~
You shouldn't be so shocked! Your writing is very, very good. You've got an excellent grasp of tone, and nothing ever feels forced. It's very pleasant to read, and you deserve every comment you get ^^ And I enjoy your dorkiness. Very much so. It makes this even hotter
I imagine you could post the side story here. I believe that's what most people do.
I don't know if I've mentioned it before or not, but one of my favorite things about this fill is the way you slide subtle, small tidbits of sexy/explicit moments in. One like, and I swear it's hotter than some fills with entire sex scenes. Maybe it's just because you almost feel like your catching stray bits directly from Matt's though process that does it, or the fact that the mundane/normal moment suddenly taking on this sharp, sexy edge amplifies the moment like woah, but...either way I love it. Literally, it can take my breath away at times.
The scene where Matt got to see Al's apartment was also great. It's really cool, getting to witness Matt taking in these small details, and learn some of the more casual quirks of Alfred. I think my favorite bit was how Matt related it to being "Like a child's experiment at growing up" because I think that's insanely in character, and such a good way of putting it. The simple, real-life touches here really brought it to life, and I really, really enjoyed seeing it (as always~). As you mentioned yourself, it was great to get a peak into Al's life and see his "human" side, outside of being a teacher.
And the end line was so touching!~
You shouldn't be so shocked! Your writing is very, very good. You've got an excellent grasp of tone, and nothing ever feels forced. It's very pleasant to read, and you deserve every comment you get ^^ And I enjoy your dorkiness. Very much so. It makes this even hotter
I imagine you could post the side story here. I believe that's what most people do.
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