Re: Much I do for my Gay-friend (2c/5)
anonymous
March 8 2010, 08:52:46 UTC
Nodding to each other, the girls went each to her way. Ukraine took a deep breath- not too deep, mind you- she wanted her shirt in one piece- and walked to her brother. This is time to have a little discussion with him about something so personal that even Belarus strange behavior and the chance to abuse Lithuania will be dismissed because…
"Little brother… I need your help at picking up some new bras…"
Now THAT would work any time.
On the other side of the conference room, Seychelles where running out of tricks to keep France from going up and hitting on Belarus. She tried everything from admiration, to sharing embarrassing things about other nation's personal (sexual) lives, to asking for advices about romantic relations. She even run out of material to discuss about sex toys (and she did made her homework- and didn’t support her questions only on the fact that France had the tendency to give fuzzy pink handcuffs for any occasion of any nation- be it birthday, new years or a national holidays…).
"Your attention is flattering, my lovely Seychelles- yet I must show Miss Belarus that unlike those fools I am to appreciate the positive change in a girls behavior-"
"Wait-!"
"Hi France"
Seychelles let out a relived sigh. Belgium winked at her behind France's back, "so, I've heard you can help me a bit… I want to try this new thing with my dark chocolate and-"
"My, my. I see the ladies can’t keep away from me!" he laughed loudly and Seychelles wanted to hit him over the head for a moment before England that seemed to be too board looking at the Asian showoff turned and did it instead. The girls walked aside, nodding to one another.
"You think we can keep this up alone next break? And they are going to be more- don't forget some of them are out now…"
Belgium smiled widely. "Way ahead of you, sis. I got the key to the room. I'll lock it up." Seychelles eyes widened with appreciation. "Nice! And, well… if we can't keep them under control we always have THAT weapon…"
Hungary , Poland, and few other nations got back into the room just in time to hear Germany's loud yell of "The break is over! Everyone- back to your seats!"
Satisfied after receiving the report notes from all of her female comrades, Hungary got back to her seat and marked the first item in her list- "part A- success."
Now to the most complicated part… She glared randomly as if it will help the second part of her plan to work. If it wouldn't, well, somebody will have hell to pay.
Re: Much I do for my Gay-friend (2c/5)
anonymous
March 9 2010, 00:02:32 UTC
Yes it's been updated! *Does a little happy-dance*
Lithuania is so clueless, I don't even know what to think. How could he not be suspicious of Belarus's lack of creeperness? I'd be disturbed, that's for sure. And Poland's so jealous it's cute. Hungary really is like a big sister to him, isn't she?
Spell-check!anon wants to fix some more words. You used "seat" a lot when you meant "sit". "Italys" would be "Italies". "Quite" should be "quiet". "Shell" is "shall". "Dose" is "does". "Lichtenstein" is "Liechtenstein". "Board" is "bored". And one grammar fix: "on Russia that tried to grab his vital regions" should use "who" instead of "that".
So most of those are probably typos, but I just wanted to make sure. It's sometimes helpful to read your writing aloud after you're done so you catch some mistakes yourself. You can be your own beta! It's what I always do.
I love how Hungary calls Poland "Polly". It suits him, don't you think?
Update soon! Can't wait to see Liet finally notice just how much Poland loves him.
Recaptcha says buckskin remove. That sounds painful.
Nodding to each other, the girls went each to her way. Ukraine took a deep breath- not too deep, mind you- she wanted her shirt in one piece- and walked to her brother. This is time to have a little discussion with him about something so personal that even Belarus strange behavior and the chance to abuse Lithuania will be dismissed because…
"Little brother… I need your help at picking up some new bras…"
Now THAT would work any time.
On the other side of the conference room, Seychelles where running out of tricks to keep France from going up and hitting on Belarus. She tried everything from admiration, to sharing embarrassing things about other nation's personal (sexual) lives, to asking for advices about romantic relations. She even run out of material to discuss about sex toys (and she did made her homework- and didn’t support her questions only on the fact that France had the tendency to give fuzzy pink handcuffs for any occasion of any nation- be it birthday, new years or a national holidays…).
"Your attention is flattering, my lovely Seychelles- yet I must show Miss Belarus that unlike those fools I am to appreciate the positive change in a girls behavior-"
"Wait-!"
"Hi France"
Seychelles let out a relived sigh. Belgium winked at her behind France's back, "so, I've heard you can help me a bit… I want to try this new thing with my dark chocolate and-"
"My, my. I see the ladies can’t keep away from me!" he laughed loudly and Seychelles wanted to hit him over the head for a moment before England that seemed to be too board looking at the Asian showoff turned and did it instead. The girls walked aside, nodding to one another.
"You think we can keep this up alone next break? And they are going to be more- don't forget some of them are out now…"
Belgium smiled widely. "Way ahead of you, sis. I got the key to the room. I'll lock it up." Seychelles eyes widened with appreciation. "Nice! And, well… if we can't keep them under control we always have THAT weapon…"
Hungary , Poland, and few other nations got back into the room just in time to hear Germany's loud yell of "The break is over! Everyone- back to your seats!"
Satisfied after receiving the report notes from all of her female comrades, Hungary got back to her seat and marked the first item in her list- "part A- success."
Now to the most complicated part… She glared randomly as if it will help the second part of her plan to work. If it wouldn't, well, somebody will have hell to pay.
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That's it for today ^__^ more soon.
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Lithuania is so clueless, I don't even know what to think. How could he not be suspicious of Belarus's lack of creeperness? I'd be disturbed, that's for sure. And Poland's so jealous it's cute. Hungary really is like a big sister to him, isn't she?
Spell-check!anon wants to fix some more words. You used "seat" a lot when you meant "sit". "Italys" would be "Italies". "Quite" should be "quiet". "Shell" is "shall". "Dose" is "does". "Lichtenstein" is "Liechtenstein". "Board" is "bored". And one grammar fix: "on Russia that tried to grab his vital regions" should use "who" instead of "that".
So most of those are probably typos, but I just wanted to make sure. It's sometimes helpful to read your writing aloud after you're done so you catch some mistakes yourself. You can be your own beta! It's what I always do.
I love how Hungary calls Poland "Polly". It suits him, don't you think?
Update soon! Can't wait to see Liet finally notice just how much Poland loves him.
Recaptcha says buckskin remove. That sounds painful.
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Oh, Lithuania, you hopeless, hopeless dumb brute. Why do I love you so? XD
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