Ask Me Why - Part 5/6
anonymous
February 3 2010, 03:45:48 UTC
Alfred merely lay there, breathing raggedly as the silence stretched, fingers moving in idle patterns over Arthur's skin as his hips moved in small, circular motions, a plea for Arthur to continue. Arthur ignored it, felt those fingers begin to move upward, and Alfred managed to open his eyes and meet Arthur's gaze as they hit his shoulders.
“We...” he trailed off.
Arthur nearly growled again, pulling almost completely out before slamming back in. Alfred took in a stuttering gasp of air at the motion, fingers tightening on Arthur's shoulders, heels digging into the bed.
“Maybe,” Alfred panted. “Maybe I shouldn't tell you.”
Arthur repeated the motion, making sure he hit that spot again, and enjoyed the image of Alfred's reaction, body arching up, choking on his inhale, eyes pinched shut in pleasure.
“Tell me,” Arthur said lowly, firmly, and Alfred tilted his head back for a brief moment before looking directly at Arthur, a slow smile working over his features. He moved his hips in a slow thrust, biting his lip as Arthur hissed out a breath at the movement, wanting so bad to start pounding into his lover again.
“We didn't do anything,” he murmured, hands moving to grab at the Brit's neck, bringing their faces so close that Arthur could feel Alfred's breath brush across his lips as the man's smile turned into a full out grin. “Not a damn thing.”
After a moment of stunned silence, Arthur narrowed his eyes. “You brat.”
Alfred moved, then, hips bucking up against Arthur's in another reminder of what they were doing as he closed the distance and took Arthur's lips with his own. They kissed messily before Arthur broke it to glare at his lover, hips returning to the rhythm from before. Alfred gave him a breathless laugh, head tossed back in pleasure as Arthur's pace began to quicken.
“You complete and utter brat,” Arthur growled, biting the American's neck.
“I knew you were jealous,” Alfred said, voice thin with pleasure and amusement, “and you're totally hot when you're pissy,” he continued through haggard breaths and strained moans.
Arthur's hand, the one not employed in stroking Alfred's cock, lifted Alfred's hips slightly so that he could hit that spot with ruthless efficiency, silencing anything else his young lover might have wanted to say. He felt the heat within his belly coil tighter and tighter, pushing closer to the edge and his hand tightened around Alfred's cock, pulling a series of ragged moans from the younger man as he felt the body beneath him stiffen. Alfred's hands tightened on Arthur's hair and the Brit pressed his face to Alfred's neck as he felt his lover spill into his hand, tighten around his cock and breath his name. It only took a few more thrusts and Arthur was spilling into his lover, yell muffled against hot, slick skin as his hips jerked through his orgasm.
Arthur pulled out slowly, briefly entertained the idea of getting up and leaving before he scoffed at himself, falling against the solid body beneath him, boneless and warm. He felt Alfred's fingers card through his hair before sliding down to rest at the small of his back, warm and rough and comforting. Alfred's other hand trailed toward Arthur's shoulder, following his arm until it finally found his hand.
Ask Me Why - Part 6/6
anonymous
February 3 2010, 03:50:37 UTC
“Gotta admit,” Alfred finally said into the quiet. “That was pretty hot.”
“I don't have to admit anything,” Arthur argued
Alfred sighed and Arthur could tell he was smiling from the sound of it. His arm tightened around Arthur's waist momentarily before it moved to slap Arthur's ass. The Brit jerked in surprise, then scowled into Alfred's shoulder.
“But seriously,” Alfred said. “If you got my kimono dirty, you're paying to clean it.”
“'m not,” Arthur murmured petulantly.
“Yeah, you are,” Alfred argued. “There's a fireworks festival Kiku invited us to and mine matches yours.”
“Mine?” Arthur asked softly, propping himself up on his arms to look at Alfred.
“Oh yeah,” Alfred said easily, smile firmly fixed in place. “Kiku sent one for both of us.”
Arthur felt his heart skip as his tummy erupted with a warm, fluttering sensation, then quickly buried his face in Alfred's neck to hide the blush he could feel heating his face.
“Betcha feel kinda silly now, huh?” Alfred asked.
“Oh, belt up,” Arthur grumbled as Alfred laughed and rolled him over to smother Arthur in kisses.
.end.
Hope that was what OP wanted! Anon tried. >////< !!
Re: Ask Me Why - Part 6/6
anonymous
February 3 2010, 06:12:33 UTC
seconding above reviewer -that was really really hot. and the way Alfred totally played Arthur was LOL. I think it's very IC of him, that teasing atittudeXD why is the idea of a guy as big as Al in a kimono attractive, I wonder? I just know it is, specially the yummy way you described it *is a sucker for Al's Big Blue Eyes*
And that final twist in which Japan becomes the sweetest guy on the planet? That was cute, anon. Really, really cute ^^
Re: Ask Me Why - Part 6/6
anonymous
February 3 2010, 14:26:50 UTC
anon, this was 99% some of the most ridiculously hot smut ever, 1% me laughing hysterically when you said "weeping cock" and my brain went straight to uk/us in "Buttsex: The Musical."
OP IS SO HAPPY YES ~~~ That was PERFECT. ♥ Thanks so much writerAnon. *joysquee* I love how Alfred just KNEW. And the ending was so cute... ♥♥♥ My day is totally made now. :D
Re: Ask Me Why - Part 6/6
anonymous
March 6 2010, 00:36:10 UTC
Damn this is a hot hot hot hot hot hot fill O; I don't- Ican'teven-
Not only was this some AMAZING smut, authornon, your characterizations were spot-on and...gyyyuuuuh, they just *made* the fill. Arthur, in particular, was flawless; we got hot, aggressive, tsun-tsun UK and blushing, painfully embarrassed dere-dere UK, and both felt ENTIRELY in-character. There was never a moment where I thought, "Umm, no. Like that'd ever happen. He'd never do that! *wank outrage*" That's a rarity, anon! You handled it beautifully!
I know this is a short comment, but really, I can not praise this fill enough. It was made of yum and also of wibbles~~
“We...” he trailed off.
Arthur nearly growled again, pulling almost completely out before slamming back in. Alfred took in a stuttering gasp of air at the motion, fingers tightening on Arthur's shoulders, heels digging into the bed.
“Maybe,” Alfred panted. “Maybe I shouldn't tell you.”
Arthur repeated the motion, making sure he hit that spot again, and enjoyed the image of Alfred's reaction, body arching up, choking on his inhale, eyes pinched shut in pleasure.
“Tell me,” Arthur said lowly, firmly, and Alfred tilted his head back for a brief moment before looking directly at Arthur, a slow smile working over his features. He moved his hips in a slow thrust, biting his lip as Arthur hissed out a breath at the movement, wanting so bad to start pounding into his lover again.
“We didn't do anything,” he murmured, hands moving to grab at the Brit's neck, bringing their faces so close that Arthur could feel Alfred's breath brush across his lips as the man's smile turned into a full out grin. “Not a damn thing.”
After a moment of stunned silence, Arthur narrowed his eyes. “You brat.”
Alfred moved, then, hips bucking up against Arthur's in another reminder of what they were doing as he closed the distance and took Arthur's lips with his own. They kissed messily before Arthur broke it to glare at his lover, hips returning to the rhythm from before. Alfred gave him a breathless laugh, head tossed back in pleasure as Arthur's pace began to quicken.
“You complete and utter brat,” Arthur growled, biting the American's neck.
“I knew you were jealous,” Alfred said, voice thin with pleasure and amusement, “and you're totally hot when you're pissy,” he continued through haggard breaths and strained moans.
Arthur's hand, the one not employed in stroking Alfred's cock, lifted Alfred's hips slightly so that he could hit that spot with ruthless efficiency, silencing anything else his young lover might have wanted to say. He felt the heat within his belly coil tighter and tighter, pushing closer to the edge and his hand tightened around Alfred's cock, pulling a series of ragged moans from the younger man as he felt the body beneath him stiffen. Alfred's hands tightened on Arthur's hair and the Brit pressed his face to Alfred's neck as he felt his lover spill into his hand, tighten around his cock and breath his name. It only took a few more thrusts and Arthur was spilling into his lover, yell muffled against hot, slick skin as his hips jerked through his orgasm.
Arthur pulled out slowly, briefly entertained the idea of getting up and leaving before he scoffed at himself, falling against the solid body beneath him, boneless and warm. He felt Alfred's fingers card through his hair before sliding down to rest at the small of his back, warm and rough and comforting. Alfred's other hand trailed toward Arthur's shoulder, following his arm until it finally found his hand.
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“I don't have to admit anything,” Arthur argued
Alfred sighed and Arthur could tell he was smiling from the sound of it. His arm tightened around Arthur's waist momentarily before it moved to slap Arthur's ass. The Brit jerked in surprise, then scowled into Alfred's shoulder.
“But seriously,” Alfred said. “If you got my kimono dirty, you're paying to clean it.”
“'m not,” Arthur murmured petulantly.
“Yeah, you are,” Alfred argued. “There's a fireworks festival Kiku invited us to and mine matches yours.”
“Mine?” Arthur asked softly, propping himself up on his arms to look at Alfred.
“Oh yeah,” Alfred said easily, smile firmly fixed in place. “Kiku sent one for both of us.”
Arthur felt his heart skip as his tummy erupted with a warm, fluttering sensation, then quickly buried his face in Alfred's neck to hide the blush he could feel heating his face.
“Betcha feel kinda silly now, huh?” Alfred asked.
“Oh, belt up,” Arthur grumbled as Alfred laughed and rolled him over to smother Arthur in kisses.
.end.
Hope that was what OP wanted! Anon tried. >////< !!
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why is the idea of a guy as big as Al in a kimono attractive, I wonder? I just know it is, specially the yummy way you described it
*is a sucker for Al's Big Blue Eyes*
And that final twist in which Japan becomes the sweetest guy on the planet? That was cute, anon. Really, really cute ^^
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Awesome job, anon!
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That was PERFECT. ♥
Thanks so much writerAnon. *joysquee*
I love how Alfred just KNEW. And the ending was so cute... ♥♥♥
My day is totally made now. :D
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I loved the humor and teasing throughout...ADORED it.
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That was hot :D
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*Fans self*
Damn when Arthur started growling I melted and fell out of my computer chair.
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Not only was this some AMAZING smut, authornon, your characterizations were spot-on and...gyyyuuuuh, they just *made* the fill. Arthur, in particular, was flawless; we got hot, aggressive, tsun-tsun UK and blushing, painfully embarrassed dere-dere UK, and both felt ENTIRELY in-character. There was never a moment where I thought, "Umm, no. Like that'd ever happen. He'd never do that! *wank outrage*" That's a rarity, anon! You handled it beautifully!
I know this is a short comment, but really, I can not praise this fill enough. It was made of yum and also of wibbles~~
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