Re: At World's End -- Part 2g
anonymous
February 1 2010, 00:49:36 UTC
I swear, when I was reading this it seemed like more of a a doujin script more than anything and I am very tempted to draw it. Very tempted indeed...if I wasn't so inexperienced XDDD
You have a very unique style there, writeranon. Love your details, especially how Alfred isn't a complete idiot like many fics tend to portray him, but brash and oblivious enough to be the Al we know and love. Though he seems a bit on the 'cold' side. That could just be me, since I usually see Alfred as being really hot blooded when he's angry.
And Ivan's calling him by nicknames already...you've just hit a major kink of mine, anon. No, everything about your Ivan pleases me XD
I'm assuming you're following along on the prompt's part where it says Alfred gets his protection? If so, gah Arthur, you're killing me. Must be really hard on him to use such an underhanded trick to see his son again after five years and then lose him again...which probably means Matthew is in on this scheme too...as well as Francis, according to what he says to Al before he sees Arthur.
Writer!Anon
anonymous
February 1 2010, 01:39:51 UTC
I'll admit I'm not familiar enough with doujin to know if that's a good thing or not but I'll take it as a compliment... ;-) I would get massively flaily if anyone ever wanted to do fanart of my work but I warn that this is going to be a very epic very long ride before it's over...
I hate where America is written as a complete idiot. I think he can be oblivious but he's a superpower for a reason. Yeah having the most nukes which helps but I refuse to believe that's the only reason. He's smart he just prefers that Europe, and the rest of the world, doesn't know it. So yeah I always write him that way even in AUs. Hmmm...I guess I didn't realize it at the time but he does seem a bit cold in this...or numb. It wasn't intentional but it does give me something I can play with for a later bit.
Heh...I admit I love that too especially when it has Little in the front even though Al isn't really little. That's a theme that'll probably continue throughout the story... ;-)
I have a feeling your last question will be answered to your satisfaction in the next part... ;-)
Awww...thank you. And thank you for such a lovely, detailed comment. I love comments that make me think about stuff.
You have a very unique style there, writeranon. Love your details, especially how Alfred isn't a complete idiot like many fics tend to portray him, but brash and oblivious enough to be the Al we know and love. Though he seems a bit on the 'cold' side. That could just be me, since I usually see Alfred as being really hot blooded when he's angry.
And Ivan's calling him by nicknames already...you've just hit a major kink of mine, anon. No, everything about your Ivan pleases me XD
I'm assuming you're following along on the prompt's part where it says Alfred gets his protection? If so, gah Arthur, you're killing me. Must be really hard on him to use such an underhanded trick to see his son again after five years and then lose him again...which probably means Matthew is in on this scheme too...as well as Francis, according to what he says to Al before he sees Arthur.
Why so awesome? You go, writeranon.
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I hate where America is written as a complete idiot. I think he can be oblivious but he's a superpower for a reason. Yeah having the most nukes which helps but I refuse to believe that's the only reason. He's smart he just prefers that Europe, and the rest of the world, doesn't know it. So yeah I always write him that way even in AUs. Hmmm...I guess I didn't realize it at the time but he does seem a bit cold in this...or numb. It wasn't intentional but it does give me something I can play with for a later bit.
Heh...I admit I love that too especially when it has Little in the front even though Al isn't really little. That's a theme that'll probably continue throughout the story... ;-)
I have a feeling your last question will be answered to your satisfaction in the next part... ;-)
Awww...thank you. And thank you for such a lovely, detailed comment. I love comments that make me think about stuff.
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