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If You Can't Say It Out Loud [1/?] anonymous December 9 2009, 01:08:41 UTC
Original request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/10960.html?thread=19487952#t19487952

In a nutshell: Greece denies Japan sex until Japan verbally admits that he loves him. Although the actual fill is shaping up to be a tad more complicated than that...

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"It's only a private lesson, so just relax and let yourself go."

It had seemed like a good idea at that time to say these words to Japan.

Looking back on it, what Greece really should have done was to stop as soon as he saw the first flicker of doubt on Japan's face, or at least ask Japan if he really wanted this and not go any further until he got a clear-cut reply. Greece, in spite of his numerous sexual encounters and one-night stands, did not believe in following France's policy of "molest first, ask later" - he wouldn't have spent so many years trying to court Japan as openly as he could without scaring him away and waiting for the other nation to make the first move otherwise.

But when Japan gave him an opening of sorts with his inquiry on how he could possibly enjoy sex as much as Greece reportedly did, Greece had taken that as his cue to close the distance between the two of them and find out if Japan tasted the way he had always thought he should taste like at last. And by the time he felt Japan stiffen and freeze up underneath him as if fully realizing for the first time just what he was getting himself into, he had become too preoccupied with tasting every possible inch of Japan's skin and his buried longing to kiss him and love him until he willingly unwound himself and let Greece truly know him too great to stop.

So Greece had offered Japan an easy rationalization, to be able to keep on exploring him: Think of it as only an educational lesson from someone who wants to pass his knowledge on to others. It doesn't have to mean anything outside of being taught something new from an expert.

Japan had gradually eased into it after Greece's words, settling into a slow but steady rhythm with him and even leaning up to kiss him as their synchronous motions grew increasingly fast-paced until they hit climax together. Greece had believed that to be Japan's nonverbal answer to his question, replying back to it with a gentle kiss placed in his hair as they dozed off into slumber.

And in a way, it had been. Even with Japan's initial panic attack upon waking up and subsequent babbling about it only being a dream or other, he had tentatively asked a week later if Greece would be willing to give him more "private lessons" until he really improved in his studies. Which meant that Greece now had sex with Japan at least once a week, and often even more than that.

But as Japan kept on giving Greece startled, what-do-you-think-you're-doing looks whenever Greece tried kissing or even taking his hand in public and limiting their morning afters to "Did I perform well this time?" and "Okay, I'll see you later then" months after their first "private lesson," Greece began to wonder if he had misread Japan's answer back then or if it hadn't been the kind of answer he had been waiting for.

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A/N: I'm not sure how often I can update this fill, but I'll try to update it at least twice a week. Please do tell me if my characterizations of Greece and Japan feel off; I'm still nervous about writing for them and would like some constructive feedback on how well I'm doing.

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Re: If You Can't Say It Out Loud [1/?] anonymous December 9 2009, 02:55:34 UTC
Poor Greece...

I'm rooting for a happy ending, though. :)

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Re: If You Can't Say It Out Loud [1/?] anonymous December 9 2009, 02:59:02 UTC
I like this. Very realistic in the emotion, esp Japan's (and this is only the first bit!)

And I second the "happy ending" request (*on knees here*)

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Re: If You Can't Say It Out Loud [1/?] anonymous December 9 2009, 05:18:30 UTC
Great beginning, and nicely in-character as well. This looks like it could work out fantastically, with what you've already set up.

Waiting patiently for update.

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Re: If You Can't Say It Out Loud [1/?] anonymous December 9 2009, 05:27:52 UTC
I think you're doing well with characterisations right now... I know there isn't any dialogue but it's very believable so good job! I'm excited to read the next installment!

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OP anonymous December 9 2009, 10:07:49 UTC
I...I never thought I'd see any of my Giripan requests filled! ;A;

FFFFFFFFFFF THANK YOU SO MUCH ANON

Oh my~ Greece!
I can't wait for the update. :'3

This might sound pretentious but are you the anon who's the cause of the influx of Giripan fills recently? :'D Might I be let in on other reqs you're planning to do?

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Author!anon anonymous December 9 2009, 20:54:35 UTC
You're welcome! I'm happy to be giving other Giripan fans love on this kink meme. (What other Giripan requests have you posted, just out of curiosity?)

And yes, I am! (Mostly; I'm not the anon doing the most recent Giripan fill about the "painful lesson" in detail.) I'm not sure what to make of the fact that I've already completed more fics here than I have on my actual LJ account...

Well, I'm contemplating on filling a request for Greece and Japan having sex in a thunderstorm, but it'd probably make for a long fill so I'll be updating this fill and/or the other one I have going on at this moment first before giving that one a try.

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Re: Author!anon anonymous December 10 2009, 00:30:24 UTC
I can't remember anymore. Mostly after I request I just leave 'em there with tiny hopes of it being filled. ^^" /sob

Oho? Someone's filled that? Haha! This I gotta see. :DD

I'm not sure what to make of the fact that I've already completed more fics here than I have on my actual LJ account...

FFF I know the feeling. =3= And hooo~ That is cool! Watching out for more of your fills!

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Re: If You Can't Say It Out Loud [1/?] anonymous December 22 2009, 07:50:23 UTC
I liked it too! *wishing for a happy ending as well* >3<
lovely~ : D <33

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