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Part 11 - Canada/America + England Tied Up and Watching - "The Deeds of Others" anonymous November 21 2009, 01:17:15 UTC
“Fine. Just this once.

For some reason, it pleases him to please you. And it pleases me to please him. So, this one time, it pleases me…to please you. And that hasn’t happened for a long time.”

England gazed at the face between his legs as America slid closer, taking England’s erection in his hands and making him hiss. It was bliss to, at last, have some heat against his loins, some touch there, some manipulation. England closed his eyes as America massaged soft leather gently, brushing his hand over the top of England’s vulnerability repeatedly. With little more than that, he slid his mouth over London.

England was still taped to the chair, but despite that - and maybe because of that - was having the time of his life. His groin felt like it might explode at any moment, scalding milk and honey spattering across that strong jaw. The same jaw that had denied him so long, the same mouth that had rejected him, had hurt him beyond comprehension and that was now wrapped around him like a wet blanket. England tried to focus on America but couldn’t; his eyes were filled with tears and he could hardly focus at all as America licked him from shaft to tip. England shook in the chair, buttocks tightly clenched together against the hard wood. His position made it hard to thrust, but the tang in America’s mouth meant England was close to coming regardless.

“This is the only time, Pops. The only time,” America said as he withdrew, spitting into his hands and deftly using his palms to carry on where his mouth had left off. On some distant level, England was disappointed that he wouldn’t get the almighty power kick of squirting into America’s face, but-

“You don’t get to come in my mouth. Sorry. Only Canada gets to do that.”

“Nnngh-“ was England’s only reply as finally, blissfully, he came - and the seed was bountiful as it slipped over America’s hand and wrist, dripping onto the hard wood floor and leaving England semi-conscious. Fireworks were exploding behind his eyes and he sat back and watched the show, unsure if America had let go of him or not. His breath was ragged in his throat as he tried to recover and his chest heaved, but after so long of watching and waiting breathing was almost a secondary thing, less than a requirement. Even as London wilted and relaxed, England stared ahead of himself, trying to process everything that had happened in the last hour or so. It had been exactly as America had said - they’d made his wildest dreams come true.

“Can we drop you off somewhere?” Canada asked almost casually as he cut through the tape with scissors. America helped him, and they kissed each other softly whenever they drew close.

“It doesn’ matter.” England said, his voice hoarse. “Nowhere could be as good as here.”

#End

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Re: Part 11 - Canada/America + England Tied Up and Watching - "The Deeds of Others" anonymous November 21 2009, 01:24:50 UTC
LSJDLKSJLKJL

X3

This is many, many glorious epic parts of well-written, satisfying, surprisingly complex awesome, author!anon. I love you madly.

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Re: Part 11 - Canada/America + England Tied Up and Watching - "The Deeds of Others" anonymous November 21 2009, 01:31:45 UTC
Author!anon thanks you muchly! X3

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Re: Part 11 - Canada/America + England Tied Up and Watching - "The Deeds of Others" anonymous November 21 2009, 02:39:41 UTC
AGH. agh. holy.. wow. anon. umm you made my heart race a little too much.
why do i like pery england so much?!?
this was amazing anon. i could offer you my soul. my babies. my college scholarship.
but i have to say- will you marry me anon?-
*takes out ring*

first proposal. ever...//-_-

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Re: Part 11 - Canada/America + England Tied Up and Watching - "The Deeds of Others" anonymous November 21 2009, 09:16:49 UTC
Heh heh - author!anon is glad you liked it :) Awww - I'm touched you want to marry me after that but I can provide more kink outside the bonds of marriage ;) Thank you for reading!

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Re: Part 11 - Canada/America + England Tied Up and Watching - "The Deeds of Others" anonymous November 21 2009, 02:46:18 UTC
... oh my god. FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFTT THIS IS SO AMAZING, WHAT CAN I SAY

hothothothothot Okay, my mind is officially blown. I'm sorry for being so incoherent, anon! XD

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Re: Part 11 - Canada/America + England Tied Up and Watching - "The Deeds of Others" anonymous November 21 2009, 09:18:16 UTC
LOL! XD Awesome! Author!anon thanks you for your enjoyment; it's what keeps her going, after all!

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Re: Part 11 - Canada/America + England Tied Up and Watching - "The Deeds of Others" anonymous November 21 2009, 03:28:26 UTC
this was both gorgeous and sad... I absolutely loved it to pieces. The one critique I have is that Canada calling England "-san" those couple of times seemed at odds with the rest of the fill. But still it was a wonderful, wonderful fill. Very sensual and hot, but the dynamics with England as the outsider were just... ;___;

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Re: Part 11 - Canada/America + England Tied Up and Watching - "The Deeds of Others" anonymous November 21 2009, 09:21:15 UTC
Author!anon thanks you for reading, and agrees that England's dynamic was sadder than she'd intended. I tend to go with the source regards to things like -san, and I thought Canada referred to England as such, but I could definitely be wrong. I@m very glad you enjoyed the fill :)

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...*nosebleed anonymous November 21 2009, 05:54:10 UTC
Wow, that was brilliantly written! The suggestive lines like 'milk and honey' were beautiful and some of the one liners just made me jump out of my seat and do a little dance.

“Now. Get in there and fuck him good and proper, boy. Don’t hold back.”

I'm going to repeat this in my head every time I need to do a presentation. Cheers!

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Re: ...*nosebleed anonymous November 21 2009, 09:23:51 UTC
Author!anon thanks you so much! Actually, I had two training sessions and a meeting mid-week, and I was so tired I was almost falling asleep. This fill was so all-encompassing that I periodically came around with the fear that I'd unconsciously mentioned Canada's testicles while out of it XD I'm glad you liked the fill! :)

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Re: ...*nosebleed anonymous November 22 2009, 03:56:43 UTC
I have so been there. When I'm immersed in a fill, I have to triple-check every paper I write to make sure I haven't done just that.

This was a fantastic fic. I agree that the dynamic was a bit sad, but it's actually nice to see the division between America and England emphasized. Fans tend to skim over that an awful lot.

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Re: Part 11 - Canada/America + England Tied Up and Watching - "The Deeds of Others" anonymous November 23 2009, 07:09:10 UTC
I.

Jesusfuck.

WOW.

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Re: Part 11 - Canada/America + England Tied Up and Watching - "The Deeds of Others" anonymous November 25 2009, 05:48:18 UTC
Holy shit. That was perfect! Your grasp of the relationships between these characters, and the dynamics that define them, is breath taking. I haven't seen someone blend history, canon, and fanon as well as you have right her for a very long time.

The only thing that didn't fit for me was the Japanese, Canada is certainly respectful towards England (and it is a shame there is no good english/french equivalent) but the 'san' was a little out of character. Overall though a beautiful fill, the tension between them all was wonderfully executed.

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Re: Part 11 - Canada/America + England Tied Up and Watching - "The Deeds of Others" anonymous November 28 2009, 08:29:05 UTC
OP just found this- she was caught in the crazy turkey rush. And OP is very, very glad she found this. Anon, this is... amazing. I really didn't know where to go with the prompt- I just tossed it out as a picture in my head, and you took it and made it work in to something far more wonderful then anything I pictured. You write them very well, and the dynamic makes my heart break- the lines of loyalty and love and could-have-had's are obvious, and that makes this even better. Really enjoyable. Thank you for writing it.

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Re: Part 11 - Canada/America + England Tied Up and Watching - "The Deeds of Others" anonymous December 3 2009, 17:28:15 UTC
ILU Anon. Twincest and incest and mental anguish oh mai. You win. It isnt' often that I read a fic that makes me forget where I am until I finish reading.

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