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Primero [pt 2/??] anonymous November 16 2009, 08:15:58 UTC
“Papá… más… por favor,” America whined softly, mesmerized by how handsome Spain looked wearing his glasses, with the cowboy hat sliding off his tousled brown hair, practically the epitome of sex and masculinity to at least one half of the 15% of his population that checked “Hispanic or Latino ethnicity of any race” on his 2000 census.

“Espere, espere.” Spain brushed his lips over America’s throat, then down his chest, making a momentary detour to flick his tongue against a nipple, causing America to whine even louder. He chuckled and continued teasing him with clever fingers and tongue, until America was thrashing violently and Spain could feel his erection hard against his thigh. Settling back on his haunches, Spain set Texas down on the bedside table, out of the way, and now could turn his attention to the site of some of his first colonies.

America watched, fascinated, as Spain traced long tan fingers up and down his inner thighs that had been left exposed by the assless chaps, so familiar with the area, for he had been there when America first allied with another nation. Now he was gripping Florida, stroking America’s vital regions almost possessively with confident motions, smiling to hear America’s breathless moans of pleasure. Just when America thought he could not take anymore, Spain wrapped his fingers around the base of his straining cock, and the next thing he knew, he was being sucked off by someone who apparently had a lot of experience giving head.

After a few experimental sucks, Spain moved back slightly and then went down on America again, savoring the fresh salty taste of Florida on his tongue, the whimpering sobs from the nation in his grasp, begging him for more. All of this should have been his, Spain thought, and though he did not blame France or even England for taking America away, he did feel bitter that he could not have had their precious colony while he was still young and tender. But this, this would suffice.

Finally, America shuddered and jerked upward, coming into Spain’s waiting mouth, who swallowed him entirely without any hesitation.

That was considerably more enjoyable than expected, and as a reward for good behavior, Spain loosened America’s bonds, tossing the rope to the floor. The grateful nation sighed in relief as he peeled the gloves off and flexed his numb fingers and toes. Certainly America did not protest when he felt two slick fingers slide into his ass, and he rather welcomed the invasion as Spain quickly found and hit the spot that made stars burst across his vision.

“Sit up now,” Spain commanded as he pulled his fingers out, and America groggily made his body obey. Setting his hands on the other nation’s shoulders, America lifted his hips, feeling Spain’s dripping cock rub at his stretched hole, and then let himself be pushed down roughly. Callused hands at his waist yanked him up and shoved him back down, again and again, using his body as if it were just another New World toy, to be played with and then tossed aside, and yet he did not care, not at all, because it felt so fucking good.

Ever creative, America managed to pry Spain’s hands off of his waist, and he pushed the older nation down onto the mattress, reversing their positions. Spain growled in irritation at first, but that quickly turned into groans of ecstasy as America rode him with all the wild enthusiasm of a bronco-rider at a rodeo, laughing breathlessly when Spain reached his orgasm and cursed in Spanish as he came.

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Re: Primero [pt 2/??] anonymous November 16 2009, 10:34:19 UTC
*nosebleeds all over the place*

F5-ing this like nobody's business, author!anon!

Recaptcha: $22,705,000 into. Into what, Captcha?

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Re: Primero [pt 2/??] anonymous November 16 2009, 15:44:35 UTC
Oh shit, that was hot. Pairing definitely climbed on the list of my fave pairings. >w<;;

Captcha: honorary forty-four? Oh captcha, anything with Spain is higher than that on my list of favorites.

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Re: Primero [pt 2/??] anonymous November 16 2009, 17:38:09 UTC
This was really hot but at the same time kind of creepy. I don't know if you were going for the pedophilic Spain vibe (which, totally agree that he is! but that's how I read it. Somehow still very awesome.

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Re: Primero [pt 2/??] anonymous November 16 2009, 21:52:41 UTC
HOLY SHIT I LOVE YOU ANON <3 MARRY ME WILL YOU? ;A;
This... this idea has been playing in my head for who knows how long, AND THEN, I find THIS amazing story sitting in my inbox just waiting to make my day. AND IT DID. I MADE MY DAY OH SO VERY WONDERFUL~~

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OP LOVES YOU anonymous November 17 2009, 02:32:55 UTC
I thought my request would never get filled and then I saw this and omg, anon. This is so wonderfully hot and perfect. <333 And I love how you write Spain.

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Re: Primero [pt 2/??] anonymous November 17 2009, 17:04:51 UTC
*drool*

I...I think Spain wearing Texas is my new kink.

For some reason I've only ever read Spain as a gentle and indulgent lover - I love that he's possessive and a little rough with America, plus those traces of pedo-imperalism.

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Primero [pt 3/4] anonymous November 19 2009, 04:37:17 UTC
Spain’s gasps for air was interspersed with moaned praises as America continued to ride him into the mattress, and he let the waves of mindless pleasure roll over him, blanking out any coherent thought he might have had. Blindly reaching out with one hand, he found the other nation’s cock, already hardening again from the stimulation, and began pumping at it lazily. America whimpered in discomfort, hand clutching at Spain’s wrist, but he was not letting go and eventually America had to give in to Florida’s increasingly urgent demands.

He laughed at America’s half-mortified, half-blissful expression when he came for the second time, so soon after the first, and smiling, Spain brought his forearm to his lips, lapping up the spatters of semen from his own skin with a contented sigh. Still looking dazed from his climax, America watched Spain clean himself with sleepy blue eyes, licking his dry lips without realizing it.

“I must admit, you picked up some good tricks since I’ve last had you,” Spain remarked casually, and America blushed as he shifted and gently disengaged himself.

“I only learn from the best.”

“Oh? You mean Francia?”

“And what France has told me about you,” America shot back saucily.

Spain snickered at the thought of France smugly telling America about all of the countries he had slept with, and how long that must have taken. But he was not really jealous, just amused that they still sought each other’s company sometimes, simply for the mutual joy of seeing England throw a fit.

“Hijo de puta… That gossiping whore! But I guess he deserves a little fun, after all of the ‘hard work’ he does.”

The younger nation was now kneeling on the much abused mattress, unbuckling the chaps and pushing them down off of his hips. Pouting, Spain reached over and slapped him on the ass, causing him to yelp.

“Who said you could take those off?” he asked quietly.

“But, papi, they’re rubbing me raw!”

“You will take them off when I say you can.” America glanced into those dark green eyes, and then dared to crawl off the bed to finish taking off the chaps. But Spain was faster, and after a few seconds of fierce wrestling, America found himself lying across Spain’s lap, the other’s leg and arm holding him fast, and his free hand smacking him again on the rump.

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Primero [pt 4/4] anonymous November 19 2009, 04:40:23 UTC
He tried to struggle free, but Spain only tightened his choke-hold and spanked him harder.

“Ow! What the fuck is your problem?!” America growled in mock indignation, although he was currently wriggling provocatively against the warm sweaty skin, his back arcing almost tauntingly, as if he wanted to be spanked.

“Nada, mi carino,” Spain murmured, a throaty, sultry sound that went straight down to Florida. (Again.) “You are just so cute, I don’t want to let you go.”

“Hey, if you like me, you shouldn’t spank me. Unless…” He deliberately rubbed his stomach against Spain’s groin and Spain snarled and smacked him again, though this time he left his hand on America’s reddened cheek, stroking it adoringly.

“Ah, you are such a bad boy, America~! But I would have treated you kindly, much better than those two would have. I liked you a lot, remember, I even helped you in your war…” He recalled the details of that night quite well, helping France and Prussia deflower a virgin colony as they sealed their alliance, in order to humiliate England even further. It certainly did the job, and was one of his best memories of that century, truthfully. “We would have gotten along well, you and me.”

America remained silent for once, not bothering to mention Spain’s later treatment of his colonies on the southernmost of the continents. Sure, life with Spain might have been tolerable, even fun at times, but America was not one to dwell on the past too much.

“Well, I think we get along just swell right now,” he commented, shrugging carelessly.

“Of course, of course.” Grinning, Spain let go of America so that he could get back up and finally get out of those damned chaps and boots.

“So… why don’t we continue getting along, huh?” America suggested devilishly, tossing his hair out of his eyes and slapping a hand on his ass in a rather tempting invitation. Spain rolled his eyes, set his good Catholic principles aside to be collected later, and then cheerfully proceeded to demonstrate to America, at exceptionally creative and vigorous lengths, just exactly why the Spanish take siesta in the afternoon and eat dinner late at night.

[Derp, that was awkward and pedo and full of fail-Spanish… ORZ

Primero means first in Spanish and refers to St. Augustine, the oldest continuously occupied city in America… founded by the Spanish off the coast of Florida in 1565.]

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Re: Primero [pt 4/4] anonymous November 19 2009, 05:08:11 UTC
why do i like spain being a creep so much? *cries*
thank you for this awesome cup of awesome anon ;___;

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Re: Primero [pt 4/4] anonymous November 20 2009, 19:22:25 UTC
*__* Oh Spaaaaain~! And cheeky America is so sexy. I really like how you snuck in those slightly sinister vibes to Spain too; he's got such a "nice guy" persona most of the time that you forget about the bloodier bits of his history.

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Re: Primero [pt 4/4] anonymous November 20 2009, 21:46:02 UTC
Zomg you mentioned the France/Prussia/Spain attack on virgin!America- are you the same author?
I LOVE that fic- and this is not awkward in the least! The random Spanish made me giddy lol.
Mmm, pedo!Spain, spanking & assless chaps- total <3
So hot; thank you <333

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Re: Primero [pt 4/4] anonymous November 21 2009, 04:22:25 UTC
Yep, that was me, I wrote that one, too. Thanks, I'm glad you liked both!

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