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One for the Money (3d/?) anonymous September 30 2009, 01:45:01 UTC
Leaning back, Francis decided to tune the argument out. If the past two hours were any indication (and in his experience, they were), it would go on for a while before eventually leading right back to where it had started. Lovino would never actually go through with any of his threats, and the two of them would never actually progress in any sort of talk about love or hate (but mostly love), or perhaps in any discussion pertaining to their precarious relationship. Lovino was too stubborn to admit anything about himself and Antonio was simply incapable of reading between the lines. Or reading the atmosphere.

And Antonio wasn't the only one who was oblivious. Francis's gaze landed on Gilbert, who was leaning forward over Antonio's shoulder; the Spaniard had climbed into the front passenger seat hours ago. "You don't want to do that," Gilbert was saying now. "This trip would be a hundred percent less awesome without me here."

Lovino spat a string of obscenities and swerved the car hard, throwing Gilbert back into his seat.

"S'il te plaît, mon chéri," Francis said, "do not antagonize Italie."

"Don't call me that, France," Lovino shot back at him, swerving again to change lanes.

…Ah, maybe it would be prudent to take his own advice, at least while Lovino had all their lives in his hands.

"Of course, mon cher," he answered smoothly. There was a slight jerk of the car at that, but not enough to warrant any alarm. Yet. But they seemed to be accelerating now, so maybe there would be cause for alarm soon.

Or further cause for a cop pulling Lovino over for speeding. They'd taken the opportunity to change out of the clothes they'd robbed the bank in while Lovino had been in his apartment, but facing a police officer would still be rather awkward, given the morning's escapades and the bag of cash stowed at Gilbert's feet.

It was probably for the best that the Italian didn't know they'd brought the bag. Lovino and Antonio had started arguing again (if something that one-sided could really be called an argument), and the money would likely add fuel to the proverbial fire.

Yes, it was definitely for the best. Francis just hoped they'd arrive at their destination soon, and in one piece.

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Late that afternoon, one Arthur Kirkland found his missing car on the other side of town from the place he'd parked it the previous day.

It didn't take him long to notice the new hole that marred his beloved Mini's rear bumper.

It took even less time for him to swear revenge.

Notes and translations:
Pronto: (It.) lit. "ready," used when answering the phone
Nessun problema: (It.) No problem
Amour: (Fr.) love
S'il te plaît: (Fr.) Please (informal)

Less humor than the other parts, but it's a lot of setup. I've tried my best with the use of French, Italian, and Spanish in this fill, but if anyone has any corrections, please let me know!

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Re: One for the Money (3d/?) anonymous September 30 2009, 05:31:52 UTC
FFFF~ I'VE BEEN KEEPING MY EYE ON THIS FOR AGES AND THEN TODAY I FIND UPDATES !!!

YOU'VE MADE MY DAY COMPLETELY AND UTTERLY AWESOME ♥

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Re: One for the Money (3d/?) anonymous October 1 2009, 07:05:03 UTC
This is AWESOME. I love this fic!

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Re: One for the Money (3d/?) anonymous October 1 2009, 09:23:31 UTC
This anon is enjoying this fic a lot, albeit confused by a slight detail.

It seems that the bad touch trio's robbing the bank for the first time, yet Alfred has been at the "Venetian Robbers" for 1 year, and said group has also done many similar robberies since 2 years ago.

Did I miss something, or are the bad touch trio just that lucky/unlucky in mimicking the Venetian Robberies by accident?

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Re: One for the Money (3d/?) anonymous October 1 2009, 16:45:28 UTC
I'll try to clarify it in the next part, but yes: the first "Venetian Robbery" occurred about two years ago. One year ago, Alfred went undercover on the case.

As for the rest, you didn't miss anything; all will be revealed in time. I don't want to give things away too soon, you know! ;)

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Re: One for the Money (3d/?) anonymous October 2 2009, 14:24:00 UTC
Another anon here. Thanks for clarifying!

(also, I'm slightly embarrassed to say that I was happy that Alfred might be meeting Arthur because of the car. ^^;;;)

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