Past-Part Fills Post 1 -- CLOSED

Feb 26, 2011 13:32



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Re: I'll Make a Man Out of You [2b/?] anonymous July 30 2009, 09:07:41 UTC
"So I jus' stood there, wantin' t' say somethin' when 'e jus' starts moanin' 'n groanin'. But the way 'e touched 'mself, was obvious 'e had no idea what 'e was doin'. Now, 'e was always a pretty lil' boy, 'n I admit it. So I could only bear t' watch fer so long 'fore I knew someone would haveta show 'em the ropes 'ventually. Why not me?" America's eyes widened more before he buried his face in his hands. Oh god, it WAS that conversation. What was it with England and telling anyone who'd listen?! Isn’t that supposed to be private?!

"So I cleared mah throat and I swear 'e jumped back eight feet. 'e looked at me like a deer in the headlights and tried t' 'ide. Didn' work t' well, 'specially when mah room wasn' very big.

"So I laughed softly 'n walked over t' 'em. I said 'Now what d'ya think yer doin?' 'e looked up at me and mumbled somethin' I couldn' 'ear. I took initer... initier... initertive and I lifted 'is chin up 'n gave 'em 'is firs' real kiss. Boy was ne'er quieter in 'is life."

"That's because you had your tongue down my throat." America groaned softly, knowing the nations couldn't hear him but something in him wanting to pretend this didn't happen how it did. It was awfully unheroic.

"When I pulled away, 'e looked up at me all confused-like. I laughed 'n told 'em it was time fer a proper education. 'is eyes widened 'n that beautiful shade o' blue stood out more than 'fore. Then 'e goes 'n asks o' all things 'Will there be a test?'. O' all things! 'Will there be a test'!"

"I didn't know what was coming! It was a decent question!" America whimpered a little louder. He noticed Prussia's head turn in his direction, but he couldn't tell if the once nation was so drunk he didn't notice him or was just pretending not to notice him but he felt those red eyes locked right on him. Oh damn it.

"So keep goin', England! Don’ spare any details!" Prussia laughed. America groaned again. Shit, either Prussia was really into the dirty deed, or he just wanted to embarrass him. America hoped the alcohol would impair England's memory, make all of what happened next just fade away. But England had a strange smirk across his face and America remembered it from the first time he wore it, so long ago during that experience. The old man was never going to forget it and so America just waited for the torture that was to come because if he interrupted, he better have something better to coax the nation out of the bar than just 'Let's have dinner' now.

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Re: I'll Make a Man Out of You [2b/?] anonymous July 30 2009, 10:05:24 UTC
Oh god, this is brilliant. And I'd hoped America would come along. (Poor America! But we never get to see him squirm)

And I'm loving it. Drunk England, America asking if there would be a test! That was gold. And the actual story sounds rather hot, really - I mean, the story of how England made America a man.

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Re: I'll Make a Man Out of You [2b/?] anonymous July 30 2009, 20:51:25 UTC
This is amazing, anon. I can't wait for more :)

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