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Eggshells [0b/?] - Prologue anonymous July 23 2009, 21:49:29 UTC
He didn’t really feel like conversing with the other Nation, but he guessed Italy would be chatty, and it would be not that heroic of him to avoid being friendly over his own depression.

Did heroes even get depressed in the first place?

“Oh, well…” Italy fidgeted a bit, and was grateful when the bartender brought on Alfred’s beer and his own.

“You drink beer?”

Italy pouted. “I prefer wine, but I’m not picky when I need to get drunk, ve~”.

Which didn’t sound as cool as he might have wanted.

America chugged down his first glass of beer, feeling the liquid run through his throat, leaving some sort of bitter aftertaste, and he licked his lips, wiping the remains of his foam from his chin.

Slamming the glass on the counter, he snapped his fingers at the bartender to order a second one.

“It looks I’m not the only one wanting to get drunk~”

Alfred turned around and stared in annoyance at the Italian, who was busy sipping his own beer and was not looking at him, so with a small shrug, he also returned to his second beer. Not to be outdone, Italy chugged the remaining of his own glass and ordered a second.

For a few minutes, the two simply minded their own business, each one drinking at their own pace until they reached the third glass. They didn’t drink it with the huge mugs Germany and Prussia were used to lap at like dogs, so it wasn’t half the amount it occurred to have them drunk.

“You didn’t answer me” the American pressed his elbows on the counter and returned his attention to the fellow Nation; the beer, although still too little to affect him, had at least mellowed his annoyance, and he felt prone to some light speech.

“Ve~?”

“Why are you drinking here, alone, and not with them?” he pointed a thumb at the three drinking fiends with a raised eyebrow.

Italy’s eyes flickered in that direction, mainly on Germany, who was by now rolling his sleeves up and chugging down what looked like his sixth pint of beer, and sighed.

“It evolved into a challenge” he stated, as if it was the stupidest thing he’d ever heard. “They’re trying to drink each other under the table -again”.

“And this is wrong because…?”

Italy attempted a glare, but it came out more as a pout than anything else, and resumed his sipping at the beer.

“… it’s complicated” he muttered finally, low enough that America had to strain his ears to hear him.

It was quite strange, to watch Italy being so subdued, but there again, America himself was acting a bit differently. Not that it mattered much. Not that he cared.

He was just there for the booze.

“Stupid England” he muttered.

Italy stared at him, curious, then shrugged.

Both fell into some sort of comfortable silence after that, drinking their beers.

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I hope this pairing attracts or interests people ^^ as it did with me :D

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Re: Eggshells [0b/?] - Prologue anonymous July 23 2009, 21:53:18 UTC
The pairing attracted this anon. I like what you have so far :D

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Re: Eggshells [0b/?] - Prologue anonymous July 23 2009, 22:17:45 UTC
thanks :D i actually have a few more short-chapters ready, i'll post one tomorrow, too :D

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Re: Eggshells [0b/?] - Prologue anonymous July 23 2009, 21:58:49 UTC
this anon is insanely eager to see where this is going. I love your characterizations of Alfred and Feli, I'm so intrigued to see how they interact, just ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! *wiggles happily*

By anychance have you seen the Italy/America fanart by bluefox?

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Re: Eggshells [0b/?] - Prologue anonymous July 23 2009, 22:15:12 UTC
who hasn't?! X3 mr. hemingway, the hard way around, hetalia style. :3

and thanks *hearts*

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Re: Eggshells [0b/?] - Prologue anonymous July 24 2009, 01:22:12 UTC
I LOVE you for filling this. <3 Not OP, but a passionate second-er~

Ah, I feel so bad for poor America and Italy DI I can't wait to see their relationship start to grow and evolve X3~

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Re: Eggshells [0b/?] - Prologue anonymous July 24 2009, 09:29:52 UTC
sankyuu! ^^ i'm having terrible fun writing this XDD

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Re: Eggshells [0b/?] - Prologue anonymous July 24 2009, 01:59:30 UTC
I'm looking forward to the rest of this fill, seriously!

Greatly enjoying this so far if not only for the fact that this is such rare pairing but that I like how you've written Alfred and Feliciano. The two are both so quiet but in a way that fits their personalities~

Plus, I find the idea of Denmark, Prussia, and Germany drinking together amusing :D

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Re: Eggshells [0b/?] - Prologue anonymous July 24 2009, 09:32:11 UTC
:3 glad you like how i started it :) it's gonna get better (i hope)

denmark somehow fit in this picture thanks to my head!canon o.o nordics, why do i love you so much now?

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Re: Eggshells [0b/?] - Prologue anonymous July 24 2009, 07:09:08 UTC
This is good so far, anon! I want more! :D

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Re: Eggshells [0b/?] - Prologue anonymous July 24 2009, 09:32:45 UTC
sankyuu! ^^

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