Fic: Fullmetal Alchemist, "Little Brothers and Little Sisters," Al/Mei

[h_c_anon]

Title: Little Brothers and Little Sisters
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Pairing: Al/Mei
Author: Swift
Recipient: Theodwyn
Rating: G
Summary: Tea and philosophy, sort of.
Notes: Major spoilers for the last twenty manga chapters or so just by virtue of the pairing; while it takes place at some nebulous point in the near future from the current point in

Comments

[anonymous]

THAT WAS AWESOME! Thank you!

You've included everything I like about the pairing, from the cute puppy-love to the romantic dreams to the subtle-yet-important differences in their cultures to Xiao Mei thinking she's people. XD And I love the way you captured Mei's voice - you've got all the nuances of her character down pat.

Thank you so much! ♥♥♥

-Theodwyn

Re: Second try!

[gamera]

I actually didn't know that community existed! Sure, I'd be more than happy to post it there (it might take me a couple of days, though, as I'm a little swamped right now *g*). And thank you so much for your comments on the story! I'm glad that you liked it.

[sheepfairy]

Oh, I love this so much! I love the way you've written Mei, and the differences in philosophy between their two countries was very well thought out. And I love the fact that there are still hurdles to their relationship, but it's so sweet and shyly hopeful at the end.