Comments | hesjustacat: i'm truely sorry

hesjustacat

i'm truely sorry

Jan 19, 2005 22:11

THIS WAS NOT MEANT TO HURT ANYONE OR CAUSE ANY DRAMA THIS IS JUST WHAT I'VE SEEN GO ON FOR THE LAST 9 YEARS IN JACKIE'S LIFE- PLEASE FORGIVE ME IF YOU'RE NOT PORTRAYED THE WAY YOU WISH TO BE IN THIS SCRIPT ( Read more... )

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pandocristo January 21 2005, 00:24:50 UTC

Jesus Christ. Couldn't you put that in a cut or something? I spent like 10 minutes getting to the bottom of this. I don't mean to bitch but god.

hesjustacat January 22 2005, 06:24:26 UTC

oh nick

umm, i tried very hard to put it in cut, but it was being stubborn and wouldnt work. i'll try harder next time.

faithisdown January 21 2005, 01:18:00 UTC

bravo darling

__initiation January 22 2005, 18:06:54 UTC

i like the series of puns about the cattle people in the hallways. made me laugh for way too long.

o_buttr_fingers January 22 2005, 19:03:50 UTC

does this have a soundtrack>

Soundtrack? More like a reality check.... lowlights January 24 2005, 05:49:14 UTC

Congrats! You're on your way to becoming a wonderful FICTION writer!!! :-D Maybe after a few writing classes you can be one of those playwrites that do the "Based on a True Story" movies that don't even remotely resemble what actually happened...

: I hesjustacat January 28 2005, 04:43:15 UTC

i'm not sure what this is supposed to mean, but its exactly what that disclaimer at the top is supposed to prevent. i wasnt trying to portray everything exactly, because quite frankly that would have made it boring (flattering myself of course by assuming it wasnt boring already). everything happend a long time ago and i'd like to think that its all over. further more, this script was written in about 3 very long days and does not in anyway, in my opinion, represent the quality sort of work i could produce provided i dont procrastinate. in the end this was really just for jackie anyway and she liked it lots so i guess what i set out to do was done in an acceptable fashion for the person i really wanted it judged by. but thanks for your imput.

(am i just being defensive, or was there something there?)

Re: : I lowlights February 1 2005, 19:31:50 UTC

"THIS IS JUST WHAT I'VE SEEN GO ON FOR THE LAST 9 YEARS IN JACKIE'S LIFE ( ... )

i'm truely sorry hesjustacat February 3 2005, 05:29:16 UTC

who said she was supposed to be lovable? you were supposed to pick up on the fact that her character is one sided. in 8th grade everyone is one sided. it was a movie about a character's developement and thought process. i'm sorry your mother had to be the bad guy. i posted it on lj because some people asked to read it. the lj cut wouldnt work. noone knows who the characters were besides the people that recognized themselves. i dont think she had no flaws. i agree i portrayed myself in a very angelic light in this script, and i am not satisfied with how my character turned out and maybe oneday i will revise this, but i'm afraid i have to say that i think you're making moreout of this than there was ( ... )