Title: The Adventure of the Famous Fiddler (3/6) [
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Fandom: Axis Powers Hetalia
Genre: Adventure/Mystery/Romance
Rating: PG-13
Characters/Pairing: America/England
Word Count: 2,134
Summary: When a famous friend of America's mysteriously disappears, England puts his detective skills to the test. Helping America through his
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great new chapter
I love imagining America playing the fiddle oooh 8l<3♥
and the end is great! cliffhanger again noooo 8lxD
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Aha, just updated again actually :)
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And I loved iiiit *u* can't wait for the next chapter, really. WHAT A CLIFFHANGER AGAIN, YOU!
But oh, there're so many things I love in this chapter ♥. Like in the beginning how England knows exactly how America is going to react when they heard the officers speak about the suicide. It's so heartwarming when they're so close they'll just know how the other one will react to certain things. Oh poor America and his hero-complex making him feel bad like that...
But oh, oh I think I've some thing for America playing a fiddle. If I could draw a fiddle I would definitely draw America playing one but... er.. fiddles are kinda hard to draw :D;; so, no picture of fiddling America (not yet, at least).
I definitely have also a thing for a protective and serious America. Pleasant chills ran down my spine in the end of the chapter where our hero stepped in front of England and held out his hand >u< ( ... )
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I'm so glad I managed to convey America's fiddle playing. It's something I had a very solid visual of and I wanted to get that across to the readers. It's a nice image XD
Next chapter is up now~! <3
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Got the next chapter up today! <3
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I liked the beginning. How America clung to England, how England knew what America's reaction would be, and how he struggled to give America some comfort despite of the situation. The mental image of America playing the fiddle is just adorable xD And I loved seeing him and his detective-esque abilities at its best!
OMG CLIFFHANGER!!!
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