[Axis Powers Hetalia, America/England: The Adventure of the Famous Fiddler 3/6]

Jun 17, 2010 02:21

Title: The Adventure of the Famous Fiddler (3/6) [FF.net] [ Previous Chapters]
Fandom: Axis Powers Hetalia
Genre: Adventure/Mystery/Romance
Rating: PG-13
Characters/Pairing: America/England
Word Count: 2,134
Summary: When a famous friend of America's mysteriously disappears, England puts his detective skills to the test. Helping America through his ( Read more... )

chaptered fanfic: famous fiddler, pairing: america/england, *fandom: axis powers hetalia

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spooky_meon June 17 2010, 07:57:04 UTC
Oooh you updated! *squeals*
great new chapter
I love imagining America playing the fiddle oooh 8l<3♥
and the end is great! cliffhanger again noooo 8lxD

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abarero July 3 2010, 19:29:36 UTC
Glad you're enjoying it!

Aha, just updated again actually :)

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socialholic June 17 2010, 14:39:09 UTC
YAY an update! ♥ I was so excited when I saw a new chapter in the fanfiction.net and just read it right away, I had to stop everything I was doing!

And I loved iiiit *u* can't wait for the next chapter, really. WHAT A CLIFFHANGER AGAIN, YOU!

But oh, there're so many things I love in this chapter ♥. Like in the beginning how England knows exactly how America is going to react when they heard the officers speak about the suicide. It's so heartwarming when they're so close they'll just know how the other one will react to certain things. Oh poor America and his hero-complex making him feel bad like that...

But oh, oh I think I've some thing for America playing a fiddle. If I could draw a fiddle I would definitely draw America playing one but... er.. fiddles are kinda hard to draw :D;; so, no picture of fiddling America (not yet, at least).

I definitely have also a thing for a protective and serious America. Pleasant chills ran down my spine in the end of the chapter where our hero stepped in front of England and held out his hand >u< ( ... )

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abarero July 3 2010, 19:34:11 UTC
Eeeee. Thank you so much! Your reviews always leave me all speechless with joy <3

I'm so glad I managed to convey America's fiddle playing. It's something I had a very solid visual of and I wanted to get that across to the readers. It's a nice image XD

Next chapter is up now~! <3

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abarero July 3 2010, 19:36:12 UTC
I'm so glad you're enjoying it! I just updated the next chapter today <3

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sillyputtie June 17 2010, 17:13:19 UTC
Awww, the image of America playing the fiddle is too adorable for words. I love how he is in this part, too. Getting his detective on. XD I really liked this chapter, and I'm excited for what happens next. <3

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abarero July 3 2010, 19:38:39 UTC
America and fiddling playing is something I hadn't really thought about before this fic, but now I really like the image it gives you.

Got the next chapter up today! <3

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kasumicc June 17 2010, 18:07:56 UTC
See, I did read it xD

I liked the beginning. How America clung to England, how England knew what America's reaction would be, and how he struggled to give America some comfort despite of the situation. The mental image of America playing the fiddle is just adorable xD And I loved seeing him and his detective-esque abilities at its best!

OMG CLIFFHANGER!!!

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abarero July 3 2010, 19:39:16 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it :)

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