her so-called life (Claire/Zach, PG13ish) by technosage

Feb 25, 2007 15:51

Title: her so-called life
Author: technosage
Characters/Pairing: Claire/Zach loosely implied
Rating/Warnings: PG13 for themes, just to be on the safe side
Word Count: 2012
Spoilers: through 1.16 "Unexpected" and speculation off the trailer for 1.17.
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Summary: Claire and Zach do a little research about her father with predictable ( Read more... )

08- daddy issues

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hebrew_hernia February 25 2007, 23:02:20 UTC
Very adorable. And hits on the daddy issues very well. And I love the Supernatural reference, not only because it's Supernatural, but because of the daddy issues our boys have. Very, very nice, Alliecakes.

Shit, I need to finish my *own* daddy issues story.

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technosage March 1 2008, 06:01:54 UTC
*hugs you* Thank you, hon.

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toxictattoo February 25 2007, 23:20:13 UTC
God, you've hit her voice so square on.

I love the comfortable tenderness between them. A very nice moment between Zach and Claire.

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technosage March 1 2008, 06:02:28 UTC
♥ Thank you! Even if it did take me, omg a year to answer this feedback. *facepalm*

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gargyloveswolfy February 25 2007, 23:26:56 UTC
Straight to memory land........for me to read and read again and again! ♥

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technosage March 1 2008, 06:02:37 UTC
Thanks!

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puckkit February 26 2007, 00:42:14 UTC
Aww. It was so cute, but depressing, but cute. I feel like I just went on a crazy rollercoaster ride. I'm impressed, if this were my writing (besides my writing being far less complex or impressive) I would have instantly run for the angst-hills. But you made it so real.

He rattles it off like it has no meaning to him. Like he didn't campaign to make her homecoming queen, or throw rocks at her window to sneak her out, or convince her that maybe she was someone worth being friends with. Because no matter how many times she tells him, it's just a story.

Can I just say, ouch? Because damn. That last line killed me.

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technosage March 1 2008, 06:03:16 UTC
Awww. Thank you, hon. I'm really glad this story worked for you. *hugs*

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shutyourface February 26 2007, 01:29:45 UTC
This is my first Claire story because even though I love the thought of Peter and Claire, it also kinda scares me in that fic about them can go very, very wrong. But this is amazing. If we were able to look into her brain, I think this is exactly what she'd be thinking. You nailed it so very spot on. If it doesn't happen like this on the show, I'll be disappointed.

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technosage March 1 2008, 06:03:42 UTC
Thanks very much. I'm glad you enjoyed the story!

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