[fanfic] how you taste to my tongue

[hermonthis]

AUTHOR: Hermonthis
FANDOM: Avatar the last airbender
CHARACTERS: Sokka/Katara, Zuko/Azula
WARNINGS: incest. no, seriously. totally done for avatar_incest
PROMPT: "Chocolate"

TITLE: How you taste to my tongue
RATING: scenarios range from G to R

Comments

[hotsour]

I really like this. I think it illustrates quite well the different dynamics of a single taboo. The characterizations are spot-on, too, from Zuko's loathing and shame, to Azula's greed, Katara's naturalness, and Sokka's pride. I especially enjoyed the way Azula has to ask after love, and how Sokka gives it so freely. It's perfectly chocolate, yummy & bittersweet & two flavors of melt-worthy. Lovely stuff.

[hermonthis]

Well, this was a nice surprise to wake up to! :D Thank you very much for reviewing.

[loveroftheflame]

OH MY GOODNESS... THIS IS SIMPLY DELICIOUS!

MORE PLEASE!

[hermonthis]

YOU MEAN YOU WANT MORE CHOCOLATE?! XD

[loveroftheflame]

HOW DID YOU GUESS?!!!

I ADORED the Zucest! It is so perfectly them. The characterization is spot on. When are you writing more of them?!!

[paynesgrey]

OH WOW! I loved this! It was so amazing and moving with every word. You did a wonderful job of contrasting the two sets of siblings, and there's a dark, sexiness to Azula and Zuko, where there's this subtle sort of innocence found in Katara and Sokka. Fabulous job. This is going in my memories. ^^

[hermonthis]

*You couldn't have picked a more appropriate icon.* Thank you for the comment! Originally, it was going to be from the Sokka/Zuko's POV originating with Smooth as the only subject but the other prompt words just kept on coming. :)

[inulover4eva648]

There was nothing gentle about her, she craved so much. He'd writhe and sweat and pant and deliriously ask her to marry him.

by far my favorite line :)

really amazing, good job :)

[hermonthis]

Thanks! (somehow I doubt Azula would ever answer Zuko's question) :)

[dracschick]

Very nice:)

[dragon_faere]

Thank you!