Fic: The First Time

[heretoutopia]

For travels_in_time who requested something with Hugh, preferably the first time he sees Jack 'coming back'.

Title:The First Time

Author: jadesfire2808
Words: ~1700
Rating: PG
Spoilers: None

Summary: The first time is always a shock

A/N: Hugh is mine and is also featured in The Waiting/Wandering Years. You really don't need to have read them to understand this

Comments

[kitsun3]

Oh, that's just... brilliant.
This definitely made my night. :)

[jadesfire]

Thanks! It took a bit of slaving, redrafting and hair pulling, but it's good to know that it was worth it in the end :)

Glad to be of service :D

[jadesfire]

*grin* Worth the effort, then? I think this is the fourth or fifth time that I've soaked Jack to the skin, but he's cute when he's wet. ;)

Oh, and yes, he is soooooooo that kind of girl :D

Thanks so much!

[hellenebright]

Loved this. Hugh is so...he's a one-off too (at least for his generation) isn't he.

[jadesfire]

Thanks :) Hugh's always such a joy to write, although this is the first time I've written from his POV, which was trickier than expected...

Glad you liked!

[travels_in_time]

Sorry for butting in, but what's a one-off in this context?

[jadesfire]

A one-off = one of a kind. Didn't know it didn't translate...

[athousanderrors]

Perfect, as always. *loves*

[jadesfire]

*blush* Thank you :)

[sunnyrea]

"So, this was your first time, huh?"

"Yes."

"How was it?"

I love how that could be a completely other converstation esspecially with Jack. Anyway, lovely story as usual. I really like the mixture of weariness and cheek in Jack in this one, perfect.

[jadesfire]

If Jack can't get at least 3 meanings out of what he's saying, then he's just not trying hard enoug ;)

weariness and cheek
That's exactly what I was going for - so glad it worked! Thanks!