[smapfic] Adagio
dedicated to all the kimutsu shippers on my flist, in particular g_pumpkin and tsuristyle
with huge thanks to dictionarysays for the betareading and flailing
Adagio
( kimu/tsu; nc-17; 10 853 words | and part of it is because Kimura is scary and part of it is because Tsuyoshi has a raging crush on him )
with huge thanks to dictionarysays for the betareading and flailing
Adagio
( kimu/tsu; nc-17; 10 853 words | and part of it is because Kimura is scary and part of it is because Tsuyoshi has a raging crush on him )
What a bright shinny star in the middle of a messed up day! The universe works in wonderfully mysterious ways because I also got my copy of the latest AnAn today too. *fist pumps*
ah bb, what do i say? i suck at the whole commenting thing on fics, but oh the feels from reading this....like i didn't want it to end, i lol at points, i was wtf? and then there were omg...tooo fhakin hilarious bits too! and heartache. and the tension. the sex. oh the visuals! the bits with Nakai, Goro, and Shingo. so well done. i wanted to cry at some points too! and i was watching the scroll bar thing on the right hand side and was ready to cry when i saw it getting near the bottom of my monitor cuz that meant it was going to end.
needs to watch Mt. Fuji again. needs to watch the triathalon again. needs to watch pussuma again. ahahhahaha!!!! needs a KimuTsu marathon day!!! ROFL!!! scrolling through photobucket and realizes i have not gif'ed from these three shows!!! WTF???
lets just sum it up to love love love love love it!!! Was definitely worth the wait. I will be back to read this again and again and again.
this gif cuz omg....will never ever get old.
/flailing like there's no tomorrow
/reaches thru monitor hug u
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/creepy observation you'll probably enjoy: there's a couple of frames in that first gif when Tsu's hand is right over Kimu's crotch. you never know when you might need a screencap of Tsu's hand on Kimu's crotch!
*cough* i haven't even started to reply and i'm already rambling. well firstly, i'm terribly happy this fic had a good timing and got to brighten your day even if just a little. and thank you! really, if it wasn't for your KimuTsu lobbying, i doubt i'd ever try to write anything like this and i am in the end quite happy and proud that i wrote it.
but srsly, don't tell me you didn't want it to end! this bb is probably the longest piece of writing i have ever completed, it was almost surreal to finish it and i honestly thought people would get bored with it.
/the worst thing is, i still feel like writing more kimutsu because it feels like they didn't get much time together in here D:
all that matters, though, is that i am utterly happy that you liked it, bb /hugsyoulikenotomorrow <3
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didn't see those frames, but hmm...
glad that my "lobbying" did some good and you should be proud of it! and not gonna stop you if you feel you must write more...
/must gif more kimutsu
/must find more inspirational pics
/looks back at first gif
your writing is awesome and i can't wait though i will patiently for your next offering!
oh btw, curious....do you write in polish and then translate to english? or do you think it and write it all in english? does this question even make sense? lol!
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i guess you only get to see such things when your browser is dying 'cause i can't catch it now anymore. /must be crotch-grabbing agonal delirium of sorts :D
think & write in English. frankly, it'd be enormous [and probably unnecessary] work to write in Polish and then translate, 'cause these are two rather structurally different languages and a lot of expressions i come up with when i write in Polish would be hard to translate/lose their point if translated to English [and the other way around]. i guess i probably developped slightly different writing styles in Polish and in English, 'cause i write original stories in Polish only and fanfic in English only and the different subject matter has probably influenced that. /you probably have some things that you'd more naturally express in pidgin or Hawaiian than in English and vice versa, i'm guessing. it's something like that for me with writing.
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I like that Kimura glows and is scary; that Tsuyoshi just goes for it (though it's sad he can only do this when drunk); that Shingo always shares; that Nakai cares enough to give Tsuyoshi a pillow; that Kimura's reaction to Tsuyoshi's confession is to giggle. I like the sense of genuine friendship shading into something sexual/romantic, and that moment where Tsuyoshi suddenly thinks he's a disgusting human being, and that you imply that Nakai is always up for an angry fist fight with Kimura (except this time). I especially, especially like the idea of Tsuyoshi himself as a different language.
And even Kimura doesn't like himself all of the time. (Somehow comforting.)
The sex scene is scorchingly hot, and just the right side of emotionally disturbing - you know it's a bad idea, but you want them to do it anyway - and Takuya being competitive (Tsu is experienced in gay sex, Takuya isn't) is perfect. And of COURSE he would get obsessed with fixing the radio. You have him so right, I swear.
I LOVE LOVE LOVE the Tsuyoshi and Nakai exchange:
"I love you, Nakai-kun."
"Disgusting."
SO GOOD.
I kind of like that Nakai is supportive but not indulgent, and it's lovely that he's protective later on.
It's lovely to read an account of how they all react when Kimura tells them he's getting married; it's one of those things that I'm sure we all think about sometimes, as SMAP fans.
Totally want to read the two different versions of how Nakai and Kimura kissed in high school. XD
This fic is so full of beautiful and mysterious little details. I love it. It's a new KimuTsu classic. ♥ So epic, the way you trace their relationship over years and years.
Now I really need to watch that Mt Fuji special. OMG.
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