So how IS my driving?
As my first attempt to actually RP Ramza seriously, and my first attempt at Livejournal RP, I welcome any and all criticism as to how I play this character. Don't be afraid to be frank or even blunt, so long as you give some advice as to how I may improve. Of course, if you want to give me a friendly pat on the back for a good performance, that's fine too! I'd like to know what people think even if it's just "You're doing well."
Issues of which I am aware and currently trying to resolve:
-Ramza has a rather cumbersome style of archaic formal speech in FFT:WOTL, and finding that balance without going too deep into Shakespeare is something I'm still attempting to work out.
-For that matter, I'm trying to make sure he's not overly talky. As Reed he's taken on a bit of Hamlet's poetic tendencies, but I'm not sure if that's true to his character or not. Am I going overboard in trying to have him converse with others?
Issues of which I am aware and currently trying to resolve:
-Ramza has a rather cumbersome style of archaic formal speech in FFT:WOTL, and finding that balance without going too deep into Shakespeare is something I'm still attempting to work out.
-For that matter, I'm trying to make sure he's not overly talky. As Reed he's taken on a bit of Hamlet's poetic tendencies, but I'm not sure if that's true to his character or not. Am I going overboard in trying to have him converse with others?