Firefly - Something Precious

Aug 16, 2007 00:29

Finally finished something new. But before moving on to the ficlet... I know several on my flist are PotC fans, and since I've been very quiet on the subject lately, I wanted to take a moment to say that, well, my PotC muses have disappeared to parts unknown, I'm afraid, and right now I'm not sure when they will be back. So for the time being, at ( Read more... )

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djarum99 August 16 2007, 01:34:09 UTC
“More like I’m hers”

I love your River and Mal. Dangerous River in dance mode is truly a thing of beauty, as is the first sentence in this fic. Wonderful - thank you, love.

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hereswith August 17 2007, 15:39:40 UTC
So very glad you enjoyed it :-) Many thanks for the kind words!

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jenthegypsy August 16 2007, 05:41:23 UTC
Absolutely lovely - and a much welcomed return to your M/R verse. I particularly like the picture these lines paint in my head: “I came to find something I lost.” The wind tangles in her hair and she brushes the strands from her cheeks. “Something precious."

And this exchange: “Yours, is she?” “More like I’m hers,”

And this!: Her senses sharpen to a fine edge, her body relaxing into position. “Watch me,” she says, then spins on her heel, and dances.

Great action sequence, too! I know you used to fear writing those, but you're golden now. :)

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hereswith August 17 2007, 16:23:48 UTC
You're the sweetest. *hugs* You know how much your feedback means to me, I'm thrilled you liked this and that you thought the action sequence worked! Sincerest thanks, my dear!

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torn_eledhwen August 16 2007, 09:02:44 UTC
I love your Firefly fics. They're so beautiful, and fit into the 'verse so well. River in motion is a lovely thing. Excellent work as ever!

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hereswith August 17 2007, 16:44:15 UTC
Thank you so much :-)

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outinthestorm August 16 2007, 13:03:12 UTC
Eeeeee!
Happiness is a Mal/River fic from you!

And River in motion is a beautiful thing.

Thank you honey! Much appreciated.

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hereswith August 17 2007, 20:03:28 UTC
Oh. *beams* That's wonderful to hear. Thank you very much!

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requialexa August 16 2007, 14:50:31 UTC
Oh, yay! I'm gonna have to go digging for more of your Firefly fics, apparently! This is just beautifully done, like all of your writing.
I've been dragging out watching every single ep since last year...I just don't want it to end so I refuse to watch it all and, well, now I am so geeked that I can't hold back any more!
I love the way the fandoms overlap in a fairly predictable pattern :-) Watching any Doctor Who?

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hereswith August 17 2007, 20:07:26 UTC
Thank you for the lovely compliment. I'm really glad you enjoy my writing! My other Firefly fics are listed in my Memories, if you'd like to read them. Since last year? Really? I couldn't wait, so I watched all the episodes in less than a week :-)

I love the way the fandoms overlap in a fairly predictable pattern :-) Watching any Doctor Who? They do, don't they? And yes, I like Doctor Who. *g*

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