for inbrevity
Title: the world is a hundred to one
For: inbrevity
Pairing: jaehyo + kyung
Rating: pg-13
Word Count: 7984
Summary: he stops being just park kyung and becomes park kyung, time traveler and companion, instead (loosely inspired by doctor who)
Notes/Warnings: a special shout out to space-mom for talking this through with me and keeping me sane (and also making ( Read more... )
For: inbrevity
Pairing: jaehyo + kyung
Rating: pg-13
Word Count: 7984
Summary: he stops being just park kyung and becomes park kyung, time traveler and companion, instead (loosely inspired by doctor who)
Notes/Warnings: a special shout out to space-mom for talking this through with me and keeping me sane (and also making ( Read more... )
I’m going to start off by talking in general terms. I absolutely adored this. You managed to encompass everything I love into a nicely wrapped little (or not so little) fic. I love the subtleties of their relationship, the whole concept of time that you’ve incorporated, and all the moments of intergalactic mischief they get into. I love your characterizations they are just so spot on. This was such a lovely gift fic, I don’t even know how to fully express how much I adore it. Maybe if I spam you enough…
“I’m the doctor,” the man chirps, good-natured despite standing in the sea in a suit. “I have many names,” he pauses here, face pinching. “You may call me Theta Sigma.”
sob jaehyo. your jaehyo is my favorite ;_;
I really, really like the way you’ve set this up, with the different time lines and everytime. I am just increasingly ;_; as I reread this for the nth time. I really like the way you’ve written kyung too. He’s so earnest here and just idk how to say it and becomes Park Kyung, time traveler and companion, instead. just this ;_; he becomes companion in every single way, even jumping time streams just to be jaehyo’s companion ;_; I wish I could just flail at you and squeeze you irl because this comment is going to get more incoherent since I cannot really verbally express my joy.
There was a sense of calm that washed over Kyung in that moment when their eyes met, his quickened heart rate slowing into a light sprint instead of the marathon it ran before. ;_; jaekyung are soulmates ok ;_; and I just love the word quickened
“Do you make everyone you meet angry?”
Jaehyo grips his wrist and drags him further down the sewer systems; it all looks the same, and Kyung doesn’t think that even Jaehyo knows which way is correct anymore. “Less talking, more running.”
I adore how dorky and how your jaehyo is just so jaehyo. I don’t even know I just love him. ;_; he’s so reckless and stupid and loveable.
“There are people down there.” Jaehyo waves at them, obviously uncaring as to whether they are the distressed people or the ones burning down what appear to be whole villages. “I can get their attention if I take off my pants.”
jaehyo you are correct.
I LOLed irl
“No.” There’s a warmth to his skin where Jaehyo is using the screwdriver to heal him; his skin tingles, burns from the warmth but it’s a pleasant burn, and feels as though it is sewing itself back together again. Kyung touches his lip to the corner of his mouth, tastes the faintness of blood, and feels the tiny split; it’ll heal in another day or two. “You were right on time.”
SOULMATES DANA. SOULMATES
;_____________;
“Anyway, she doesn’t always take me where I want to go,” he says, “but she always gets me to where I need to go.”
;_____________________________;
I really liked this a lot dana. And rereading it just makes me love it even more. I promise I had a lot more things I wanted to quote but I didn’t have anything to say about them except “;_________;” and I think I have already overused that.
;_;
And that last little scene is possibly the most perfect. It’s so perfect with the orange and the snow and it’s so simple yet so sweet and ;_; ugh I love you so much. You and this otp and your brilliant scifi au. I love how it ties up nicely with the promise of adventure and friendship (and love lbr) and it just makes me feel so warm and happy.
You are the best santa anon.
Ever.
tl;dr: ;_;
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I'M CLEARLY VERY INEFFICIENT AT EXPRESSING REAL EMOTIONS.
BUT I REALLY LOVED THIS A LOT.
AND I LOVE YOU ♥
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THIS COMMENT IS TOO SWEET.
GUH YOU ARE PERFECT ;_;
i'm just really happy i could give you something for christmas (even if it didn't happen on christmas, of course!) that you would want ;_; i still owe you another fic or two i had been working on for this! :3 so hopefully i'll finish writing those soon.
you are the best.
you are perfect.
i am unworthy.
etc etc etc.
♥
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