Family Ties [Part 73]

Aug 16, 2010 01:51

Title: Family Ties

Characters (in this chapter): New China, Taiwan, Macau, Japan, Mongolia, Vietnam, North and South Korea, India, Ireland, England, Wales, Czech, Latvia, Lithuania, Poland, Scotland and France, PHEW!

Rating: 12

Warnings: Long speeches, blocks of text, the fact I'm writing while half asleep again.

Summary: Uh, I need to be ( Read more... )

family ties, fanfiction, hetalia

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mapford77 August 16 2010, 02:50:29 UTC
FIRST!!

I'll be back! :D

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mapford77 August 16 2010, 03:39:43 UTC
Okay I'm back from reading! :D It was always a dream of my to be the first one to comment on your fic! :D Never has been first in anything before!

Aww~ New china! it feels so weird calling him that Your such a good brother! <3

Is it that a hint that Latvia and Ireland are liking each other, or am I just seeing things?

Question! I thought that Liet and Poland were bring France and Scotland back to Russia but, how did they end up in cells too? It's not Russia or China- New China, whatever, I can't think of anyone else! Who's running Russia's side of the war while he's gone? I'm really confused! Does that mean the war is going to be a lot longer than anyone thinks it will be?!?! D:

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hellzabeth August 16 2010, 20:56:37 UTC
Fffffffff commenting on my little monster, I'm so flattered. <3

I know I have to go and delete all the Hong Kongs that I accidentally type. He tries his best!

Maybe. Maybe not. /mysterious

There are Russia's soldiers, who have orders. Though Russia himself isn't there, it's not like his people up and moved with him. They probably just got word that Poland might not be as safe as previously thought, and thus nothing keeping Liet under control, so jail it is for them.

I added a line in Liet's mental monologue so it'd make more sense.

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taudrey August 16 2010, 02:50:44 UTC
Wow. Poor Mongolia. He never seems to catch a break. x.x

So, I read that right, right? Poland and Liet came to turn in France and Scotland and ended up imprisoned next to them?! Who the fuck is in charge now? And, and...Who's at the button for the bombs! Jeez, just when it seems this war is close to being resolved the knife takes another twist.

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hellzabeth August 16 2010, 21:13:02 UTC
He's sandwiched between China and Russia, of course he never catches a break.

Well when Russia's not there, his soldiers still are... I added a line in the fic to make it clearer, near the start of Liet's mental monologue. ;; Sorry!

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taudrey August 17 2010, 00:04:21 UTC
Great fix. And now it show's there's at least a little confusion amongst the ranks...Which does not make me feel any better for Mongolia! Well, India, too. >.>

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hellzabeth August 16 2010, 21:13:44 UTC
\o/

Out of your clothes? I-I'm sorry for any damage done to your nice clothing! ^^;;;

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lovelylurker August 16 2010, 07:08:02 UTC
And things start to patch themselves up in Asia! How does government sharing work, exactly? Would Taiwan and New China unify? And North Korea and South Korea reunifying is slightly terrifying. They're so... different.

Poor Mongolia. D: And this is why everyone is fighting against their will.

Moar gunfights. Pew pew pew.

Oh man, that sucks. They're stuck in jail? Seriously? Laaaame. Though this makes a perfect opportunity for saving the Scottish damsel in distress.

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hellzabeth August 16 2010, 21:15:35 UTC
In a kind of odd way they'd govern themselves and each other. Like a marriage partnership sort of thing, only he's not actually proposing to his sister or anything. <3 North and South are like two sides of a coin... XD

Poor guy. Nukes everywhere.

Bang bang you shot me down...

... /pictures Scotland in a dress. Cannot unsee.

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lovelylurker August 16 2010, 21:19:42 UTC
Is it a really big pink and poofy dress with a tiara?

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hellzabeth August 16 2010, 21:27:33 UTC
Actually it was blue but NOW it's pink.

Thanks.

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candelaria August 16 2010, 11:18:01 UTC
So if HK is king and Macau is shadow king, then does that make Taiwan their "daughter" Haruhi? 8|a lol Rui just likes being unofficial because dead men tell no tales and his name never appears on the record. B)

But yay Asia is getting back on their feet! /o/ More or less orz. Poor Mongolia fff oh god, no wonder the Middle East has been in lockdown. This is a job for Team Middle East! /o/ /shot Poor kids. Poor India, wtf are you doing girl, pay attention to those nukes. ;A; M-Macau you don't need to laugh at everyone's pain really orz;;; Re-unified Korea. ;AAA; HAPPY ENDINGS ( ... )

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hellzabeth August 16 2010, 21:24:38 UTC
Red Emperor and Shadow King. Maybe Taiwan's like Flower Princess or something? These are starting to sound like YuGiOh card names. Haha oh Rui.

They're clambering back from the edge of the cliff they were wondering dangerously near. And there's not jack shit Mongolia can do about it, the poor thing, lest they be detonated on him. Lol bursting into Mongolia's house like WE'LL FIX IT But Macau loves their pain, it's so amusing. THERE ARE SOME HAPPY ENDINGS FOR SOME PEOPLE HERE. ;A;b

That would probably encourage him so she's not gonna. XD Lol poor Port, never catch a break.

He'd probably enjoy them more if Poland wasn't trying to start a fight during them. Oh god poor Scotty. Nightmares forever, I'm telling you.

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