[Fanfic] Monster Mash 13

Mar 03, 2011 14:17

Title: Monster Mash 13

Characters: Francis, Jeanne, Gabriel, Tino, Berwald, Antonio, Alfred, various police, Arthur and Matthew.

Rating: 18

Warnings: Blood! Explosions! Implied sex! Really bloody long chapters!

Summary: Originally inspired by this. (Link to pic for those who don't have Pixiv here.) Due to popular demand, what was a oneshot has ( Read more... )

fanfiction, monster series, hetalia

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megkips March 3 2011, 16:13:46 UTC
Okay, typo ridden because I just woke up and I've been IMing you about this but FUCK IT. For the record

1. Okay this is the saddest Francis chapter.
2. You really did pull off the mood whiplash excellently, not only here but for the entire series. It started out much more fun and you brought the serious as well, with just the right touches of sick, twisted humour in the right places. It's served very well in the fic.
3. Related to the above, the world building you've done has been fucking excellent on all accounts. You've made believable mythology for all involved, and for a short series like this, that's no easy task. Bravisima.
4. I can't actually figure out which I want to learn more on: the past of the Hunter society or what happens next. Having people left wondering those things is the best thing
5. I am very happy I found this fic and you through it.

<3 Everything is amazing Pidge.

however this means I'll stop being like this whenever there's a new chapter

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hellzabeth March 3 2011, 18:44:22 UTC
Cannot.... look away.... from creepy Hans Landa....

1: like this whole story isn't sad for him? Also come on, he needed a reason to be wandering earth forever.
2: I have said it once, and I'll say it a million times. If one of you does not get mood whiplash so hard they need to see a chiropractor, I have failed as an author.
3: I have you and Cande and Nena to thank for that. Without people to bounce ideas off I would never have got this far. <333
4: That is what the comm is for. EXPLORE ALL POSSIBILITIES.
5: aww bb ;u; I'm happy too!

<333333

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megkips March 3 2011, 20:38:17 UTC
He is so happy for you Pidge. Look at his glee.

1. Touche but STILL MAN. Ow, my heart
2. ONE DAY YOU'LL WRITE SOMETHING WITHOUT IT AND THE WORLD WILL END
3. Please, I came in at the super tail end and get no credit for anything but the cockroaches.
4. s-sob there is going to be way more mythology fic i'm sorry

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