[Fanfic] Monster Mash 12

[hellzabeth]

Title: Monster Mash 12

Characters: Francis, Alfred, Ida, Lydia, Heracles

Rating: 15

Warnings: Alfred is still a creeper.

Summary: Originally inspired by this. (Link to pic for those who don't have Pixiv here.) Due to popular demand, what was a oneshot has now spawned a fic.

Comments

[hellzabeth]

Generally... getting one's neck snapped isn't, no.

[megkips]

1. Hunter!Greece just made so much fucking sense the minute I read it that I DO NOT EVEN. Never mind my perpetual mythology boner, it just. Gah, that works and that is so fucking clever.

2. ..........we're getting the next chapter soon, si? Because....well. That's a clive hanger.

3. !!! CZECH REPUBLIC AND SLOVAKIA EEEE /prague fangirl

[hellzabeth]

1: I'm glad it makes sense ^^ He carries around a massive cross in canon, so I thought, duh, make him a hunter for sure.

2: .......................................... maybe

3: hahahaa I'm quite fond of them as OCs, the derps. This fandom needs more yuri pairings.

[megkips]

1. There's SO much monster slaying in Greek myth and just. May I cuddle your brain? (And get the mental image of Greece fighting a minotaur out of my head...)

2. Also I don't know what a clive is but GODDAMN I cannot type tonight.

3. This fandom needs more ladies in general.

[hellzabeth]

1: And his mummy was a Hunter too, it's all in the family! My brain is totally up for cuddles of all kinds. (/makes note of this idea)

2: It's a type of herb, but I know what you mean. XD

3: I hear that... orz;; It's half the reason why I'm starting to hope Port is female... and New Zealand.

[ifluff]

Personally I don’t really like OCs (minor OCs that only appear in a chapter or two or the ones that are mentioned but never named are okay) as I think they tend to kill the fanfic for me because I like to read about the canon characters rather than the OCs. I don’t have anything against OCs, I just think they are better off in role plays than in fanfiction. Buuuut despite having an OC appearance, I don’t think it’s going to effect me too much because this fanfic is too good not to want to read more xD

[hellzabeth]

O... kay? I'm glad despite the fact this thing does in fact have an infestation of OCs even before Ida and Lydia appear (Phillipe, Annie, several of Alfred's victims for example) you can still enjoy it.

[spockieluff]

Not to totally creep into your convo, but maybe they meant... countries? Like, obviously without Phillipe or Annie there wouldn't be much of a (sub?)plot, and the victims are the ones who provided the description and detail without any major characters being lost.

But I did like your OCs. :D MOAR LADIESSSS PLZ.

Oh, shit, this entire chapter was full of betrayal. Elizaveta (oh, you bitch! hahaha) ditching them, Francis calling the cops, Alfred trying to get him exoricsed... and finally just snapping his neck anyway.

[dark_tenshi17]

I actually have no pity for Alfred. I do feel really bad for poor Francis though.

Looking forward to the next chapter though!

[hellzabeth]

While Alfred has all the luck, Francis has none of the luck.

/o/ it'll be the last one!

[dark_tenshi17]

Nooo not the last chapter D=
I don't want it to end T_T

[hellzabeth]

No, no he can't. XD Things always go wrong and somebody gets hurt. Stand by, the next chapter is the last one!