Fic: Lies were kept simple

[hells_half_acre]

Title: Lies were kept simple
Author: ME! hells_half_acre 
Characters: Sam, Jess, Dean
Genre: pre-series, gen
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Pilot
Author's note: I'm not sure this is as polished as I would like it, but sadly, I think it is as good as it's going to get. Also, I know that Kripke has said that Dean's "2 years" line in the pilot was a mistake, but since it's in the

Comments

Sweet

[sharp_nick79]

I found this piece sweet and sentimental. I always thought that Jessica was perky and perhaps imagine Dean was a good-for-nothing guy in the pilot. Also, Sam didn't idolized his brother a lot. But the things Dean did for Sam when he was growing up were totally immeasurable. Sam may love his Dad but he loved Dean more.

Re: Sweet

[hells_half_acre]

Thanks. It's sort of hard to write from Jess's pov, when she was only in the show for a minute or two. :P

[lemanya]

okay, while this was just beautiful, the most heartbreaking bit was when Jess was on the ceiling. Because she was very much aware of what was going on and oh...

tear.

beautiful snapshot of pre-series.

[hells_half_acre]

Thank you. Sorry for breaking your heart. I wanted to give her a glimpse of the truth in the end, but it did break my heart to write it that way.

[mizzykitty]

That was just beautiful. I especially love Jess calling Dean "your macho brother", lol! And that one-sided convo in the middle of the night...*sob*

Thanks for a great lunch time treat! =D

[hells_half_acre]

I'm glad you liked it! :)

[frack412]

This is really great. I especially liked the ending with Jess on the ceiling when she realized some of what was really going on. And looking back on it, that really was how Sam reacted.

[hells_half_acre]

Thanks, I'm glad that you think the my ending meshed well with Sam's reaction in the pilot!

[cutedevil666]

This was brilliant! I loved it, very enjoyable read. The ending sentence was perfect :)

[hells_half_acre]

Thank you! :)