Comments | hells_half_acre: Fic: "The Haircut" and "The Winchester Boys"

hells_half_acre

Fic: "The Haircut" and "The Winchester Boys"

Jan 25, 2011 08:49

Title: The Haircut
Word Count: 495
Genre: Gen
Rating: G
A/N: Written for my comment-fic meme, the prompt was from mymuseandi , who wanted Dean to give Sam a haircut to save money. It was up to me whether the haircut was good or not.

Summary: When you can't afford a hairdresser, your brother will have to do...

( Sam watched as Dean squinted at him and unconsciously pressed his tongue to the side of his mouth in concentration. It was doing nothing for Sam’s nerves. )

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Comments 36

borgmama1of5 January 25 2011, 17:30:06 UTC

I believe I already said HOW MUCH I LOVE THESE but I will say it again :)

hells_half_acre January 26 2011, 03:09:08 UTC

Thank you very much...yet again! :) I'm glad you like them when everything is spelled correctly too ;)

auntmo9 January 25 2011, 17:55:53 UTC

Thank you for putting a smile on my face in the middle of my day!

hells_half_acre January 26 2011, 03:09:34 UTC

Anytime! (Or at least - as often as I can!)

Thanks for reading!

tsuki_no_bara January 25 2011, 18:18:11 UTC

the boys in goodwill and then the laundromat made me grin. i love that even tho they're adults now, dean is still picking out clothes for sam to try on. and sam is looking for stuff for him as well. and dean gives homeless guys his change! i totally buy that.

>>“Right, because I hate it when I end up in ancient Rome without a road-map,” Dean said.

“Dude, you never know,” Sam replied, and Dean had to concede the point.<<

HEEE. i love that little exchange.

hells_half_acre January 26 2011, 03:10:56 UTC

I love that exchange too! And not just because I wrote it...actually, after I wrote it, I couldn't help but picture all the shenanigans the boys could get up to in ancient Rome :P

I'm glad you liked the story! :)

jennytork January 25 2011, 18:22:30 UTC

I adored these slices of life! I love to see how they live between hunts and these were completely believable and sweet!

hells_half_acre January 26 2011, 03:11:35 UTC

Thank you! I love the little domestic stuff too - I'm thrilled every time we see a little piece of it on the show.

Thanks for reading :)

katsheswims January 25 2011, 18:25:52 UTC

So cute!!! I love the way you write Sam and Dean's relationship. I think you just capture their voices very well, and you show their more caring (codependent) sides.

hells_half_acre January 26 2011, 03:11:58 UTC

Thank you! I do my best, and I'm so happy it works for you :)