Specific Feedback Request
Hello everyone who read my story "Sam Is..." on Tuesday (and those that didn't too)!
I have a question for you....
I'm not sure how many of you noticed, but I changed verb tenses at the end. It was intentional. So, now I'm wondering...
Poll Verb Tense Change In My Story...The decision to change verb tenses at the end was actually one I made AS I POSTED. So, I'm still not sure whether I like the decision or not. Also, as you can see, I'm not sure I like the title either.
Don't worry about offending me - I have 34 comments on that story telling me how awesome it is, so I'm more than capable of taking a pinch of criticism along with all that praise ;)
I have a question for you....
I'm not sure how many of you noticed, but I changed verb tenses at the end. It was intentional. So, now I'm wondering...
Poll Verb Tense Change In My Story...The decision to change verb tenses at the end was actually one I made AS I POSTED. So, I'm still not sure whether I like the decision or not. Also, as you can see, I'm not sure I like the title either.
Don't worry about offending me - I have 34 comments on that story telling me how awesome it is, so I'm more than capable of taking a pinch of criticism along with all that praise ;)