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helloprilly

Fic: Pockets in Time Part 2

Oct 22, 2016 16:43

Title: Pockets in time (Part 2)
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tatennant, phoenix universe, pockets in time, ten/donna, je fixit

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youreintown October 23 2016, 14:59:10 UTC

OK, time to find out who is the one that is in another time-zone. At least Donna was able to "contact" the Doctor.
I wonder where those "Pockets" are from and who's causing them.
I hope Donna isn't too badly injured and the concussion isn't too heavy.

helloprilly October 23 2016, 17:31:19 UTC

It seems theres always some trauma or other where these two are concerned. I really DO just want to get them to that beach one day!

shivver13 October 23 2016, 18:35:50 UTC

Very gorgeous! As I said last time, I really love your style and descriptions, and your pacing is great. Can't wait to see the next! :)

helloprilly October 24 2016, 02:18:57 UTC

I'm hoping with the shorter chapter lengths I can update once every 1-2 weeks unlike the month long waits for the bigger chapters I wrote before. Thanks so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying it!