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hello_spikey

Bite Whore - Part Two

Oct 22, 2007 11:01

Here is part two of "The Bite Whore" - have got to get better at coming up with names for these things.

Previous part Here.

( Part two: about 4,500 words )

spike/oc, spuffy

Comments 4

shapinglight November 4 2007, 20:15:34 UTC

That was brutal and completely horrific, but the writing is so good and the characterisation so well-done that it's still un-putdownable (if you see what I mean).

Am off to read part 3.

hello_spikey November 4 2007, 20:43:52 UTC

Well, DreamsofSpike wanted brutal. I live to serve!

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

shylahmask November 5 2007, 01:33:39 UTC

I like this part as well, and how much Buffy is unaware of what all this is meaning for Spike. She's human and can't really relate to the vampirism of it. At the same time, he can't really relate to her humanness.

I also like that Chuck was smart enough to figure out what was wrong with Spike. A vampire who can't hurt and being pimped out would have to have some sort of restraint on him.

Off to read the next part!

hello_spikey November 5 2007, 02:59:29 UTC

Thank you. I wanted to stress that it wasn't any one character's fault that things got as nasty as they did - rather that they all fail in some respect to each other.

Chuck figuring it out was kind of hard to write, but it's something I always imagined, and kinda waited to see happen on the show - I mean, how long was Spike walking around Sunnydale essentially helpless and un-messed-with?

I digress. :) Anyway, thank you!