you are what you love

Apr 17, 2010 13:18


you are what you love (and not what loves you back)
Takes place after Let No Man Put Asunder. Olivia/Lloyd. One-shot.

She’s shivering. )

pairing: olivia/lloyd, character: olivia, character: lloyd simcoe, flashforward

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misscam April 17 2010, 17:55:25 UTC
LOL, I was just posting my own fic in reaction to this episode, so one of us has pretty good timing.

Anyway, really liked this. It felt really raw and genuine and you gave me a real sense of Olivia's fatigue. Liked what you did with Lloyd too, and the whole thing just had a tone to it that struck a chord with me.

Awesome :)

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helen_halliwell April 17 2010, 19:29:53 UTC
Thank you! I know I shouldn't be rooting for these two, but I just adore them. And that kiss? Ugh. I cannot wait until next week :)

I'm really glad you liked this...I think Olivia really is fed up and I think she has a right to be. (I know, I'm justifying her cheating but, I can't help it...)

Thanks for reading...now I'm off to find someone else's post-ep fic ♥

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misscam April 17 2010, 21:44:38 UTC
I have a strong suspicion next week won't address it at all, given the show's tendency to drop and pick up plots again. Still, fingers crossed. And yeah, that kiss was quite something.

A couple of weeks ago Olivia really did seem at the end with Mark, in a way. They both seem quite worn out, so I actually think maybe they both would be better off ending it. Which yeah, might be justification, but the show sure has shown how much they're struggling. So yeah, I'm on team Lloyd. Oops.

:)

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paynesgrey April 19 2010, 19:56:46 UTC
Guh, lovely and so hot. Brilliant job; you have their voices down perfectly.

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helen_halliwell April 21 2010, 23:11:38 UTC
Thanks! I'm thrilled you enjoyed this :)

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shalzhenji April 26 2010, 18:41:13 UTC
I absolutely adored this. Amazing writing and really well done character-wise. This is probably one of the best fanfictions (for anything) that I've read in a long, long time. You captured their characters so well and the emotion of the situation.

I'm off to read more of your work, but look forward to future stories :]

Also, I'm am so glad so see I'm not the only one in support of this pairing. I feel like Jack Davenport's characters get shafted in the romance department too often and am (therefore) completely on board with this pair (:

... and I do believe need to get myself a FlashForward icon /off topic spam

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helen_halliwell April 27 2010, 03:58:02 UTC
Thank you so much! I was drawn to Olivia instantly and Lloyd just grew on me. I adore them together, so you're definitely not alone there. Quickly becomeing a Jack Davenport fan.

I'm really disappointed by the lack of people watching the show to be honest...but you're right, of those who watch, not many like Olivia/Lloyd. You'll be happy to know I'm working on two separate FF fics right now :)

Thanks again for reading ♥

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