OC Drabble : Addicted

[helen_c]

Title : Addicted

Rating : PG-13

Summary : AJ and Dawn-a match made in heaven. 100-words drabble.

Disclaimer : The characters and the universe were created and are owned by Josh Schwartz. No money is being made and no copyright or trademark infringement is intended.

AN. Written for brandywine421's challenge. My sentence prompt was Her obedience was like

Comments

[anne35]

So happy to see Dawn a broken mess. If only this had happened in canon so I wouldn't have had to put up with her nasty newly sober self.

[mel39]

When was Dawn nasty?

[anne35]

I didn't mean that she was nasty to Ryan or anyone. I just meant that I didn't like how they made her character sober. I much preferred it when she was absent from Ryan's life, because she was too busy being a drunk.

[helen_c]

lol, now, why don't you tell us what you *really* think about Dawn?

Glad it made you happy, though.

(I must admit, I like Dawn on the show (these days, she's better to him than the Cohens. How weird is that?), but I tend to make her a drunk, beaten up mess in all my fics. Go figure.)

[brandywine421]

Wow. I love what you did with the prompt - it's haunting and a wonderful metaphor. I really like this.

[helen_c]

Thank you, brandy! Glad you enjoyed--and thanks for organizing this challenge, BTW.

[mel39]

That was good. Poor Dawn.

[helen_c]

Thanks, Mel. Poor Dawn indeed--she pays a high price for her taste in men...

[fredsmith518]

Poor Dawn. Can see this. Most plausible.

[helen_c]

Thanks, fred. :)

[yessi_5]

Dark and very powerful.

I'm amazed how much can be expressed in so few words.

[helen_c]

Thanks ;)

(Believe it or not, I once didn't like drabbles... Thought they were too short and didn't allow enough insight into the characters. :p)