Comments | helen_c: Playing The Hero (2/5)

helen_c

Playing The Hero (2/5)

Nov 23, 2005 10:23

Here's part 2 of the death fic.

To those of you who wanted a nice deathbed scene, sorry. I wasn't that nice to any of them, I'm afraid...Disclaimer : The characters and the universe were created and are owned by Josh Schwartz. No money is being made and no copyright or trademark infringement is intended ( Read more... )

fic : the oc, fic : playing the hero, fic : oc chaptered

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finlee November 23 2005, 03:05:16 UTC

*sob* You killed Ryan! *sob* *sniff* more...soon...please?

helen_c November 23 2005, 06:39:44 UTC

R.I.P. Ryan...

finlee November 23 2005, 06:45:07 UTC

But this is Ryan! Do you really think he'd RIP? He's probably too worried about everyone else to enjoy the after life! (maybe he'll show up on Supernatural or one of the psychic shows).

helen_c November 23 2005, 07:03:44 UTC

Who knows... I wouldn't complain if Ryan ended up having his own spin-off, lol.

katwoman76 November 23 2005, 04:51:09 UTC

*needs a happy place, needs a happy place, needs a happy place*

Ryan wants to ask them to stop, to give him another chance to talk to his family before they put him under, but everything fades to black before he can even try to speak again."
So, that was really his last moment awake? :devastated:
Wanting them to stop, to give him a chance to talk his family a last time and with the Cohens on the way. *crying*

He never woke up again, the Cohens are to late to see him, talk to him, show him, that he is loved. *sob*
You really are mean to all of them.

I can't even start to comment on this chapter. All of it really well written, I admit that.
But I need to find a story with Ryan alive right now to get my emotions back on track, or I will not be able to get through the afternoon at work.

Nethertheless, I will read the whole story (face the demons).
Will the next chapters be up soon as well?

helen_c November 23 2005, 06:44:45 UTC

You really are mean to all of them.

I am, indeed... I thought that since I was doing a death fic, I might as well do it as angsty as I could, while I was at it.

I think I'll probably post the rest of the fic next week--I don't want my american F-listers to end up in tears during the holidays, and I want to post the 3rd chapter of the SOL fic in the meantime (a small and needed break from the angst).

katwoman76 November 23 2005, 10:19:00 UTC

Ok, I found my happy place.
@muchtvs and crashcmb(as beta): Thanks for the perfect timing.
The latest installment of 'Best of Intentions' is exactly, what I needed right now to get through 'Playing the Hero'.

It also makes my mind totally twisted and confused.
Sad and mourning over Ryan in this story and still excited and happy about BoI.

chazper November 23 2005, 05:10:50 UTC

I just read chapter 1, and because I apparently am masochistic (something I never suspected about myself) I immediately read chapter 2.

Aw, helen, you'd warned us you were going to kill Ryan, but no goodbyes? Are you trying to kill us all too?

This is either horrible in the very best way, or wonderful in the very worst way. I can't decide.

katwoman76 November 23 2005, 05:20:18 UTC

no goodbyes? Are you trying to kill us all too?
Exactly. Dying alone as he was way too often in his life.
Without a chance to a goodbye. Surounded by strangers lying to him about his chances.
At least the Nana was there as a family member.
But no Sandy/Kirsten/Seth. *sob*

beachtree November 23 2005, 11:38:07 UTC

And to think, when I commented yesterday I told her that I lost it when he asked if "somebody was there." Poor thing. Alone, confused and hurting. Like you, I hoped if he didn't have the gift or luxury of time, he would have comfort with people who he loved and finally, people who loved him. He got the Nana, but he died like he lived- sacrificing for someone in need, ending up in pain and for all purposes, alone. He is, correction, was, an astute observer and he knew. Even at the end, he may have had kindness, but not honesty.

Off to cry- and comment of course!

katwoman76 December 7 2005, 03:40:12 UTC

Aargh, LJ and the delayed notification mails.
Just found your comment and just with this few words, I'm back into the story full force and back to mourning, sobbing, heartbraking mode.
This story is killing me.

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brandywine421 November 23 2005, 05:26:07 UTC

*wipes face* I'm emotionally stable. *chokes* Really!

Dude. This is just so so heart-wrenching. Sandy being so far away and getting there just too late. The pain of a long-distance parent.

This is really painful.

But please, don't stop!

helen_c November 23 2005, 06:48:33 UTC

This is really painful.

I know...

Poor Cohens...

loracj November 23 2005, 05:26:27 UTC

This has 5 parts? I don't think I can stand it. I'm already reading it with Kleenex at the ready.

helen_c November 23 2005, 06:50:04 UTC

That's probably a wise move, all things considered... ;)