Oh Helen, Helen, Helen! I think you just found your calling.
I LOVE IT!
Really, this is so perfect, in tone, in character, in pacing. The narrative construction of the third-person, present-tense, shorter-sequences, very much works for me too, it reflects the immediacy of Ally's emotions. Gosh, I really love it. It makes me want to go out and buy season 4, which shockingly I do not own...
*checks internet*
Oh crap, it's got 70% off at HMV. Damn you and your romantic wizardry! :)
He tilts his head slightly to the side and that gesture, too, is so familiar, so much like she remembered, that it's like he left yesterday, like she never dealt with the pain, like she never grieved for that relationship and moved on.♥ Goodness, gracious, gorgeous
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Hee, thank you! I'm just glad you liked it (I'm really, really not used to writing romance, and I haven't written anything at all in a long, long time...)
And, er, ask and you shall receive; I just edited the fic. (I didn't add 30,000 words, but I hope this tiny addition will please you anyway). Your idea was great (and I'm kind of jealous I didn't think about it myself, hee).
Oh crap, it's got 70% off at HMV. Damn you and your romantic wizardry! :) S4 is the only one I bought, and I got it for almost nothing on Amazon (I think it was about 12 euros). Larry was definitely the best thing that ever happened to her. *hearts*
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I LOVE IT!
Really, this is so perfect, in tone, in character, in pacing. The narrative construction of the third-person, present-tense, shorter-sequences, very much works for me too, it reflects the immediacy of Ally's emotions. Gosh, I really love it. It makes me want to go out and buy season 4, which shockingly I do not own...
*checks internet*
Oh crap, it's got 70% off at HMV. Damn you and your romantic wizardry! :)
He tilts his head slightly to the side and that gesture, too, is so familiar, so much like she remembered, that it's like he left yesterday, like she never dealt with the pain, like she never grieved for that relationship and moved on.♥ Goodness, gracious, gorgeous ( ... )
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And, er, ask and you shall receive; I just edited the fic. (I didn't add 30,000 words, but I hope this tiny addition will please you anyway). Your idea was great (and I'm kind of jealous I didn't think about it myself, hee).
Oh crap, it's got 70% off at HMV. Damn you and your romantic wizardry! :)
S4 is the only one I bought, and I got it for almost nothing on Amazon (I think it was about 12 euros).
Larry was definitely the best thing that ever happened to her.
*hearts*
Thanks for your kind comments! :)
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