moving out [1/1]
jonghyun/kibum; pg-13; warnings: character death
it can't be left behind
wc: ~1,400
a/n: first proper jongkey fic. ^^"
( moving out [1/1] )
it can't be left behind
wc: ~1,400
a/n: first proper jongkey fic. ^^"
( moving out [1/1] )
Firstly, wehrouighneoirkhtehmtjhpn I've been waiting for new fic from you foreverrrr and then you tell me you will be done with one by weekend and it is only Wednesday best present ever.
O god, I love this fic to death I swear. I don't think I ever told you, but I love non-linear fics, and you know how much I gravitate towards angst and death!fics so this is like perfection + you are the one that wrote it and just !!!
I love how this non-linear-ness is brought along by Kibum's memories as he walks around his - their - apartment for the last time, especially how his memories aren't all happy, because the bad memories are also memories, yet the contrast of the fact that he is now alone and used to not be alone is still portrayed. Your descriptions of the present, with the bathroom smell, the couch meant for two, the place being spacious is especially heartbreaking to me for some reason. Like, idk, these small things are what really matter in the end when someone dies I guess. It's this small things that you find yourself thinking and imagining and remembering because it is unique to them. God, what am I saying this is what death!fic does to me.
It always smells like cherry in the bathroom. Kibum thinks it’s because of the amount of soap he uses. Maybe it’ll smell like something else soon, peach maybe, mango, he doesn’t know.
God, I love this part so much you don't even know. Idk, it just manages to show going away, show leaving and just IDK.
The couch is fit for two. It’s an extension from a bigger sofa.
SDROGIJVNIOWEGVLKERELKGMNLGJE ))))):::
“…Hey, Kibum. Are you happy?”
“…Are you?”
Kibum looks up when Jonghyun doesn’t reply. He sees him upside down, his upside down smile, upside down crinkle at the eyes.
“Yeah.”
His stomach flips upside down too.
O GOD DID YOU HAVE TO PUT THIS RIGHT BEFORE THE DEATH SCENE DID YOU YOU ARE I JUST I CAN'T WHY JUST ;_________; my poor heart.
omg I really really liked this and you are amazing so amazing and I am so glad you wrote again!! I swear your writing is like magic how do you do it. And just I love this I love you o god. ♥
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ugh waylt. what best present. /wibbles/ ;~;
WHY, WHY ARE YOU. JUST UGH. SFKDJGKEHTKGJ. I LOVE YOU MORE. ♥
:\ it's the littlest things that hurt us the most. and i'm glad that showed leaving cause i really was trying to hint through that hehehe. (and partly cause i just got new body shop soaps and i'm totally happy and excited about them \o/)
:'(
I'M SORRY I JUST. I JUST TYHOUGHT ABPOUT IT AND I NEEDED TO PUT IT IN MY HEART TOO OKAY IDGI IT JUST FEELS LIKE SUCH A PRIVATE JONGKEY THING TO SAY UGH. FML. ;_;
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK. WAYLT I AM NOT AMAZING I WILL WRITE OFC I WILL NEVER STOP MY WRITING IS NOT LIKE MAGIC YOU ARE MAGIC YOUR WRITING IS MAGIC HOW DO YOU DO IT YOU NEED TO IMPART SOME SKILLZ TGO ME. AND I LOVE YOU MORE AND I'M GLAD THAT YOU LOVED THIS AND OMG FML GOD. ♥
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