this is the window where I watched the future start

[bestthingaround]

prompt 32:

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[eponinesyndrome]

There's a girl sitting behind me with a suitcase covered in stickers. I'm surprised to see not only the usual places on there- NYC, London, Paris- but really obscure places like Jupiter, Florida and Intercourse, Pennsylvania. And she's beautiful. With rich, flowing brown hair, chocolate eyes, and healthy, bronzed skin, I can't help but stare at her from where I'm sitting. Something about her- in her tattered jean shorts and flip-flops- tells me she's not in Africa as a graduation gift from her parents

[bestthingaround]

I love this! That ending, ah! This storyline is so intriguing, I feel I like could read a whole novel narrated by Chris and his adventures and this mysterious "juliet." this is wonderful :)

[eponinesyndrome]

thank you very much!

[jacqueries_wish]

This was awesome! Bahaha, at the end I was like, "Whaaaat? She-she did not!" I didn't want it to end.

[bestthingaround]

1. The bus to Aberdeen, South Africa hits every bump like a rock skipping on water and I have to hold my camera in my lap to make sure it doesn’t bump and fly out the window. I should just put it back in my bag; I think I’ve given up on taking pictures now. It’s all rock formations and dusty cliffs and I can see how hot it’s going to be once this bus stops. I keep my head almost completely out the window to keep from swimming in my sweat

[eponinesyndrome]

oh man, that was great- I loved the snippits and the underlying mystery of "her." wouldn't mind reading or finding out more! =)

[bestthingaround]

thanks! I really want to write more to this, keep the story going.

[jacqueries_wish]

I love how it's separated into different thoughts, but really, each connects to the other in a way, like a puzzle. :)