Wonderful story!!!!
anonymous
May 24 2008, 08:01:24 UTC
Three words: I love it!!!
At first, I admit I was not really interest in reading "Loving without Margins" because it was done in first person. I don't really like to read first person based story because I don't get everyone's feelings.
But then I got bored once I couldn't find anymore cute Jaeho fan-videos on youtube. Oh by the way, I so love your videos of Jaeho. They are amazing. So I guess it's not suprsing to know that you are an exceptional writer too. So anyways, I then decided to read "Loving without Margins."
The first entry wasn't all that. And also I was dying to know who "I" is. Yunho or Jaejoong??? But once the other boy showed up into the scene, I got my answer. Jaejoong is the one who is writing it down.
And I just have to say, it sucked me right in. I couldn't stop reading once Jaejoong declined his offer to fame because he wanted to be famous with Yunho. (I totally love that scene where Jaejoong was saying that his parents totally missed out on that important part about being famous with Yunho. How cute!!!)
So that started my craving for "Loving without Margins." All in all, it was just so amazing and realistic. It has sad moments and a happy ending. No matter how much I rant on how wonderful "Loving without Margins" is, I don't think it will do enough justice. This just show how you're an exceptional writer.
And I am very happy to know that you decided not to end where Jaejoong died. If you did do that, you would have broken my heart. Though I am sad that Jaejoong and Hero never met up with Junso, Yoochun, and Changmin. But the ending was just perfect. I totally love it.
Also I totally love it how you write that we should support them if they are really in that kind of realtionship. Even if they are not, we should always be supporting them.
oh by the way, did you won the contest? I will be sad if you didn't because "Loving without Margins" is very good.
well, I think I should stop. When I start reading a fanfic that I just feel in love with, I can't help myself from writing every little thoughts that came to my mind. Well, not every little thing because if I do that, you'll be too bored before you reach the end of my feedback.
Sorry for the long feedback. But I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoy reading "Loving without Margins."
Thank you for sharing your story with us. And once again, "Loving without Margins" have easliy stolen my heart wihtout much effort. (dosen't this sound weird?? but what can I say? I love to read!!!)
okay, okay...I'll stop. (dodges a tomatoe)
last words I promise: "I really really really love it. I Hope you continue to effortlessly charm me with more of your story"
from lots of support, BeHan (behan_yang@hotmail.com if you wish to contact me)
p.s. don't you worry, I will read your other fanfic too!!!! *wink*
Re: Wonderful story!!!!heavenswineMay 26 2008, 07:24:31 UTC
wow.. that is really something.. i added you to your hotmail messenger ^^ please add me back ^^
are you using msn messenger?
BeHan... thank you for loving the fic so much.. i hope i can bring you more fic.. if i have time, i will write more.. i just can't right now because i'm graduating.. but i will still find the time..
Also, I'm really happy that you were able to grasp the different emotions in the fic..
About the contest, I joined the "Good Friday" contest held in thorn year community but I didn't win.. That's why I didn't expect people to like this fic.. But I'm really happy because people like you do. ^^
Re: Wonderful story!!!!
anonymous
May 26 2008, 22:35:48 UTC
Awww...thanks for adding me...you made my day!!!!...and yes, I do have msn messenger...so feel free to chat with me...
*tears*....no, I can't belive that you did not win that contest....I am so surprise....I think those judges need glasses or something because "Loving without Margins" is wihtout a doubt the most amazing story ever!!!!!
And Congraluations!!!!!....you're graduating!!!!...I am so happy for you!!!! I probably won't graduate from Cal State for 2 or 3 more years....still have a long wait....but at least, you're graduating!!!..and once again, congraluations!!!!!
At first, I admit I was not really interest in reading "Loving without Margins" because it was done in first person. I don't really like to read first person based story because I don't get everyone's feelings.
But then I got bored once I couldn't find anymore cute Jaeho fan-videos on youtube. Oh by the way, I so love your videos of Jaeho. They are amazing. So I guess it's not suprsing to know that you are an exceptional writer too. So anyways, I then decided to read "Loving without Margins."
The first entry wasn't all that. And also I was dying to know who "I" is. Yunho or Jaejoong??? But once the other boy showed up into the scene, I got my answer. Jaejoong is the one who is writing it down.
And I just have to say, it sucked me right in. I couldn't stop reading once Jaejoong declined his offer to fame because he wanted to be famous with Yunho. (I totally love that scene where Jaejoong was saying that his parents totally missed out on that important part about being famous with Yunho. How cute!!!)
So that started my craving for "Loving without Margins." All in all, it was just so amazing and realistic. It has sad moments and a happy ending. No matter how much I rant on how wonderful "Loving without Margins" is, I don't think it will do enough justice. This just show how you're an exceptional writer.
And I am very happy to know that you decided not to end where Jaejoong died. If you did do that, you would have broken my heart. Though I am sad that Jaejoong and Hero never met up with Junso, Yoochun, and Changmin. But the ending was just perfect. I totally love it.
Also I totally love it how you write that we should support them if they are really in that kind of realtionship. Even if they are not, we should always be supporting them.
oh by the way, did you won the contest? I will be sad if you didn't because "Loving without Margins" is very good.
well, I think I should stop. When I start reading a fanfic that I just feel in love with, I can't help myself from writing every little thoughts that came to my mind. Well, not every little thing because if I do that, you'll be too bored before you reach the end of my feedback.
Sorry for the long feedback. But I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoy reading "Loving without Margins."
Thank you for sharing your story with us. And once again, "Loving without Margins" have easliy stolen my heart wihtout much effort. (dosen't this sound weird?? but what can I say? I love to read!!!)
okay, okay...I'll stop. (dodges a tomatoe)
last words I promise: "I really really really love it. I Hope you continue to effortlessly charm me with more of your story"
from lots of support, BeHan
(behan_yang@hotmail.com if you wish to contact me)
p.s. don't you worry, I will read your other fanfic too!!!! *wink*
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i added you to your hotmail messenger ^^
please add me back ^^
are you using msn messenger?
BeHan...
thank you for loving the fic so much..
i hope i can bring you more fic..
if i have time, i will write more..
i just can't right now because i'm graduating..
but i will still find the time..
Also, I'm really happy that you were able to
grasp the different emotions in the fic..
About the contest, I joined the "Good Friday" contest
held in thorn year community but I didn't win..
That's why I didn't expect people to like this fic..
But I'm really happy because people like you do. ^^
Thank You!
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*tears*....no, I can't belive that you did not win that contest....I am so surprise....I think those judges need glasses or something because "Loving without Margins" is wihtout a doubt the most amazing story ever!!!!!
And Congraluations!!!!!....you're graduating!!!!...I am so happy for you!!!! I probably won't graduate from Cal State for 2 or 3 more years....still have a long wait....but at least, you're graduating!!!..and once again, congraluations!!!!!
with lots of love and support,
BeHan
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that is why they didn't enjoy it.. ahahah..
i can't believe i'm graduating either.. ahaha..
i'm not yet sure.. if i took it seriously then
i might be able to graduate ^^
love you so..
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Because all your videos and stories are such inspirations!!!
^o^
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