moments

May 07, 2010 20:28

Title: moments [words 976]

Pairing: 11/Amy (slight)

Rating: PG

Spoilers: Set after 'The beast below', so not really.

there is a moment of lucidity amongst the whirring and laughter and madness where she realises that from the moment of fish fingers and custard, there was no choice except this to make. )

fanfic: dw

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16littleseconds May 7 2010, 20:01:37 UTC
I really enjoyed this little fic, and it was written beautifully in my opinion! :)

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heavensrequiem May 8 2010, 14:02:46 UTC
Thank you! :)

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foible May 7 2010, 21:57:05 UTC
This is a fantastic, beautifully written piece. I was particularly struck by this line:

"And it was embarrassingly easy to step into a magical blue box on the eve of her wedding, because Amy wanted the fairytale Amelia had waited for."

I really thought you got to the essence of Amy with this line, and with this story. Truly, this was a joy to read.

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heavensrequiem May 8 2010, 14:03:27 UTC
Aw, thank you so much - that was such a lovely comment!

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braceface_freak May 8 2010, 05:20:43 UTC
So lovely....really got to the heart of Amy methinks....I loved it :D
"And she is still Amelia Pond who waited fourteen years and it is still far too easy to jump off the bed and take his hand."
This just sums Amy up really.

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heavensrequiem May 8 2010, 14:07:48 UTC
I tried to make Amy and her actions as believable as possible - glad you think it worked! Thanks for reading :)

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denimgurn May 9 2010, 15:40:56 UTC
Really enjoyed this. I like your style. : )

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heavensrequiem May 9 2010, 22:34:14 UTC
Thank you!

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honeynoir May 9 2010, 19:06:41 UTC
Beautiful! I really like your Amy. And this part: It wasn't that she was waiting again, she just liked the peace of lying in bed and listening carefully to the night, and maybe it was just efficient to open the curtains first thing in the morning instead of second or third... I love it. :)

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heavensrequiem May 9 2010, 22:34:40 UTC
Aw, thanks - I love Amy, she's such a good character :)

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