Fic: Broken

[heavenli24]

Title: Broken
Author: Heavenli24
Pairings: Dean/Lisa
Rating: MATURE
Genre: Angst, Comfort
Words: 5,800
Disclaimer: The characters of Supernatural do not belong to me and no infringement is intended.
Summary: Takes place about a month after Dean shows up on Lisa’s doorstep at the end of season 5. Dean's struggling to cope and Lisa doesn’t know how to help

Comments

[fannishliss]

I love stories that flash back to their first meeting. Some people tend to dismiss their original connection, but the fact is that is was something really important that made a deep impression on both of them -- so much so that Dean chose to look Lisa up when he only had a year to live, and Lisa remembered him as best night of her life.

I really hope that Dean gets Lisa back one day (though messing with her memory was a terrible thing to do).

[heavenli24]

Thanks :). I really wanted to do their first meeting justice because it obviously did mean more than just a random hook-up to both of them - I've read a couple of fics about their first meeting which didn't seem to do it justice...it just came across as any old hook-up, so I hope I managed to get the tone of it right so that it was a bit more than that.

At the time of watching the episode where he messed with her memory, it seemed like the right thing to do, but seeing how lost Dean is now, I think maybe it wasn't such a good decision.

[cappy712]

That was wonderful. thank you for sharing.

[heavenli24]

Thank you - glad you enjoyed it :).

[mariahlee]

This is so lovely, and also so so sad knowing how they end =(

[heavenli24]

Thanks - it's so sad to see Dean so alone in season 7 :(... he needs more than just Sam in his life.

[saurina]

Oh I absolutely love this story. Please make a sequel, I would love to see your take on Dean's healing process (or as much as he can heal) and their developing relationship. Thanks for sharing..;)))

[heavenli24]

Thank you - glad you enjoyed it :).

I'm not sure about a sequel at the moment (I don't have one planned yet, at least), but I wouldn't rule one out completely :).

[jaimeykay]

I looooove missing year fic, and this is perfection. ♥

[heavenli24]

Thank you - glad you liked it :).